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1913, Ford introduced the assembly line to automobile manufacturing, a points to be more direct.
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The Model T, introduced in 1908, was the embodiment of Ford's mass production
philosophy. Designed to be simple, durable, and affordable, the Model T became the
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American. Its success was attributed to the efficient assembly line techniques,
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T, however, priced competitively and manufactured in large quantities, brought about
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Beyond its affordability, the Model T also played a crucial role in shaping the
American cultural landscape. It became a symbol of progress, representing the
promise of a brighter future and embodying the spirit of innovation that defined the
early 20th century.

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In conclusion, the mass production techniques introduced by Henry Ford
revolutionized not only the automotive industry but also the broader field of
manufacturing. The Model T, as a flagship product of this revolution, ushered in a new
era of accessibility, mobility, and industrial efficiency. Its legacy endures as a
testament to the transformative power of innovation and the profound impact that a
well-designed, mass-produced product can have on society.

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