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Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) (2007) argued
the urge to lower the atmospheric CO2 levels since that atmospheric
CO2 stands as the most essential element of greenhouse gases
(GHG), which are responsible for todays global warming. According
to Pew Centers online announcement, the historical atmospheric
CO2 levels data are closely related with the historical average global
surface temperature fluctuations.
Revised
The Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) (2007)
prioritized the lowering of atmospheric CO2 levels, which are largely
responsible for global warming, as they represent the most essential
element of greenhouse gases (GHG). The Pew Center announced
online recently that historical atmospheric CO2 levels closely
correspond to fluctuations in the historical average global surface
temperature.
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Original
It is not often in scope of hospitals about the medical waste
disposal firms. According to Department of Environmental, the
environmental protection service trade to investigate result to
point out, the medical waste disposal firms add up to 456
household up to the end of 2000, but its firms is not big in
scale, to cause industry firm is limited to economic scale, so
the service offered is very different.
Revised
The scope of services that medical waste disposal firms
provide does not always match the needs of individual
hospitals. According to the Environmental Protection
Administration of the Republic of China, although 456 medical
waste disposal firms were operating by the end of 2000, their
small-scale size limited its scope of services in handling
certain wastes.
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Original
Web Service is a key application on the Internet. Many
business or services are provided over internet is using web
server. A few standards of web functionality has been clearly
defined so web client and server software can operating well
among different vendors.
Revised
Many commercial services that are provided online depend on
a reliable web server for daily operations. Web client and
server software can operate well among different vendors
owing to clearly defined standards of web functionality.
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Original
Magnetic abrasive finishing (MAF) possesses many
attractive advantages, such as self-sharpening, self-
adaptability and self-controllability, therefore, MAF can
remove the deteriorated layers and micro cracks from
the workpiece, and obtaining the mirror-like surface
easily.
Revised
Among the several advantages of magnetic abrasive
finishing (MAF) include its self-sharpening, self-
adaptability and self-controllability capabilities, enabling
it to remove deteriorated layers and micro cracks from a
work piece and easily obtain a mirror-like surface.
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Original
Through public transportation policy implementation, the
public transport passenger volume distribution should be
managed for controlling the COS emission of public
transportation owing to the ever-increasing public
transportation passenger volume in Shanghai.
Revised
Effectively implementing public transportation policy
should ensure that passenger volume distribution
alleviates the CO2 emissions incurred from public
transportation, especially given the increasing passenger
load in Shanghai.
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Original
The general solution for leakage current problem after device
shrink is reduction gate oxide thickness to improve the gate
control ability when gate at OFF stage. However, gate oxide
reduction will enhance GIDL leakage increase. It will cause
total leakage current cant suppressed after device shrink.
Revised
Resolving leakage current-related problems following device
miniaturization depends on the ability to reduce gate oxide
thickness in order to control the gate when it is in the OFF
stage. However, reducing the gate oxide further exacerbates
GIDL leakage, making it impossible to suppress the total
leakage current following device miniaturization.
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Original
On Dec. 31, 2009, Shanghai metros ridership had peaked at
5.27 million per day as a break-through record for the year of
2009. As the number of urban travelers increases, the
reliance of public transportation also increases.
Revised
Passenger volume of the Shanghai metropolitan
transportation system peaked at 5,270,000 on December 31,
2009. The growing number of urban passengers has also
increased reliance on the public transportation infrastructure.
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Original
To control the GHG emissions and air pollutant
emissions for the ever-increasing urban transportation
demand, the urban transport policy will put more stress
on stimulating the demand for rail transportation system.
Revised
Alleviating GHG emissions and air pollutant emissions
while complying with increasing urban transportation
requirements necessitate that urban transportation policy
more heavily stressing how to stimulate passenger
demand for the rail transportation system.
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