Timestamp

Time of Consultation

Consultant

Consultee's W&M User ID

Consultee's Academic Year

Major

Minor

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19:00:00 Carey, Sean

kjfitzgerald

Junior

English

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20:00:00 Carey, Sean

tlclister

Senior

Biology

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14:00:00 Winter, Carrie 13:00:00 Winter, Carrie

N/A kemaney

Graduate Freshman

Other Finance

################

14:00:00 Kreider, Aleina

jelee

Freshman

English

################

13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae

yson

Graduate

Other

################

19:00:00 Kim, Anna

asburton

Freshman

Other

################

20:00:00 Bryant, Graham

hpark01

Junior

Public Policy

################

21:00:00 Hayes, Dana

ychen02

Freshman

Other

################

13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae

cjin

Freshman

Undeclared

################

16:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae

mefisher

Senior

Biology

################

14:00:00 Bryant, Graham

dcbarnisin

Sophomore

English

################

15:00:00 Bryant, Graham

rlmcguire

Junior

English

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16:00:00 Kreider, Aleina

janoll

Freshman

Other

################

19:00:00 Repper, Michelle

kakrause

Freshman

Undeclared

################

20:00:00 Repper, Michelle

eomurphy

Sophomore

Undeclared

################

19:00:00 Herries, Logan

jzhang03

Freshman

Undeclared

################

20:00:00 Kim, Anna

yliu13

Freshman

Undeclared

################

21:00:00 Kim, Anna

srsaffarini

Freshman

Undeclared

################

21:00:00 Sales, Megan

mpsales

Freshman

Undeclared

################

13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae

fchen

Freshman

Undeclared

################

13:00:00 Sigmon, Cody

stdavis

Junior

English

Women's Studies

################

14:00:00 Kim, Anna

mdsmith

Junior

International Relations

Economics

################

15:00:00 Kreider, Aleina

janoll

Freshman

Other

################

14:00:00 Kreider, Aleina

jzhang03

Freshman

Undeclared

################

16:00:00 Sigmon, Cody

jcmaza

Freshman

Undeclared

################

19:00:00 Hayes, Dana

jbyun

Freshman

Undeclared

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19:00:00 Herries, Logan

iabush

Freshman

Undeclared

################

20:00:00 Hayes, Dana

welawrence

Freshman

Undeclared

################

20:00:00 Carlomany, DJ Washington, 21:00:00 Ashleigh

jmhall01

Freshman

Undeclared

################

irduerr

Freshman

Biology

################

13:00:00 Kim, Anna

jihsu

Freshman

Global Studies

################

13:00:00 Herries, Logan

bestewart

Senior

Mathematics

Classical Studies

################

14:00:00 Kreider, Aleina

ecshaffrey

Freshman

Kinesiology & Health Sciences

################

14:00:00 Sigmon, Cody

makendrick

Freshman

Marketing

################

15:00:00 Kreider, Aleina

krmaney

Freshman

Finance

################

15:00:00 Sigmon, Cody

N/A

Graduate

Undeclared

################

19:00:00 Bell, Nicky

jwschneider

Sophomore

International Relations

################

Washington, 20:00:00 Ashleigh

ecshaffrey

Freshman

Kinesiology & Health Sciences

Chemistry

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20:00:00 Bell, Nicky

yliu11

Sophomore

Undeclared

################

Washington, 21:00:00 Ashleigh

ysun02

Senior

Psychology

Anthropology

################

13:00:00 Bell, Nicky

kphughes

Freshman

Other

################

14:00:00 Bell, Nicky

klward

Freshman

Undeclared

################

14:00:00 Weber, Danielle

cjin

Freshman

Undeclared

################

13:00:00 Weber, Danielle

dagatton

Junior

English

################

15:00:00 Bryant, Graham

blbrown

Graduate

Anthropology

################

15:00:00 Wallace, Eli

memoore

Junior

Government

################

13:00:00 Weber, Danielle

sjschoenfeld

Sophomore

Finance

################

Washington, 16:00:00 Ashleigh Washington, 15:00:00 Ashleigh

zmtrout

Freshman

################

mkuzio

Senior

Undeclared Process Management and Consulting

################

Washington, 15:00:00 Ashleigh

qyuan

Freshman

Undeclared

################

16:00:00 Sigmon, Cody

fchen

Freshman

Undeclared

################

19:00:00 Sales, Megan

zmtrout

Freshman

Undeclared

Other

################

19:00:00 Carey, Sean

nwu

Freshman

Undeclared

################ ################

20:00:00 Carey, Sean 20:00:00 Kim, Anna

kbthoma plkeyster

Sophomore Sophomore

Art History Government

################

Washington, 21:00:00 Ashleigh

dlee

Freshman

Undeclared

################

20:00:00 Sales, Megan

ewmaroist

Sophomore

Government

################

Washington, 21:00:00 Ashleigh

hlez07

Sophomore

Neuroscience

################ ################

Washington, 20:00:00 Ashleigh 13:00:00 Herries, Logan

janoll agbarden

Sophomore Freshman

Other Biology International Relations

################

13:00:00 Weber, Danielle

jschneids13

Sophomore

################

14:00:00 Wallace, Eli

yson

Graduate

Other

################ ################

19:00:00 Sales, Megan 19:00:00 Sales, Megan

zmtrout jjcarter

Freshman Senior

Undeclared Neuroscience

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21:00:00 Carlomany, DJ

nmfriedman

Freshman

Undeclared

################ ################

13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae 13:00:00 Winter, Carrie

dagatton lamarty

Junior Freshman

English Undeclared

################

Washington, 21:00:00 Ashleigh

kmgeorge

Freshman

Philosophy

################

13:00:00 Herries, Logan

gnfernandez

Freshman

Other

################

16:00:00 Weber, Danielle

cjwalsh

Freshman

History

################

19:00:00 Repper, Michelle

srdalessio

Freshman

Undeclared

################

16:00:00 Weber, Danielle

hruh

Freshman

Undeclared

################

16:00:00 Kreider, Aleina

pkmartin

Freshman

Undeclared

################

14:00:00 Winter, Carrie

awbushey

Junior

Psychology

################

Washington, 15:00:00 Ashleigh

schelm

Freshman

Undeclared

################

Washington, 16:00:00 Ashleigh

kmmcgovern

Freshman

Undeclared

################

16:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae

rjvaughan

Junior

English

Film Studies

################

19:00:00 Wallace, Eli

kbdemaria

Freshman

Undeclared

################

20:00:00 Bryant, Graham

laura.lee

Graduate

Marketing

################

20:00:00 Hayes, Dana

dacoradzzi

Junior

Other

################

21:00:00 Bryant, Graham

cpmacdonnel

Sophomore

Undeclared

################

21:00:00 Hayes, Dana

kcmaney

Freshman

Finance

################

13:00:00 Herries, Logan

bmcoviello

Freshman

History

################

14:00:00 Wallace, Eli

gbgardner

Freshman

Undeclared

################

14:00:00 Bryant, Graham

kcbenner

Freshman

International Relations

################

19:00:00 Kim, Anna

zkang

Sophomore

Accounting

################ ################

15:00:00 Bryant, Graham 14:00:00 Wallace, Eli

rlscheetz01 dytassara

Freshman Freshman

Undeclared English

################

14:00:00 Bryant, Graham

aedaughtrey

Freshman

English

################

13:00:00 Herries, Logan

pwsweeter

Freshman

Biology

################

13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae

kmmcgovern

Freshman

Undeclared

################

13:00:00 Bell, Nicky

fchen

Freshman

Undeclared

################

15:00:00 Weber, Danielle Washington, 20:00:00 Ashleigh Washington, 21:00:00 Ashleigh 21:00:00 Hayes, Dana

paradich

Sophomore

Biology

################

eaorzechauski

Senior

Biology

################ ################

aosarpong srdalessio

Senior Freshman

Government Undeclared International Relations

################

21:00:00 Bryant, Graham

srbrecker

Freshman

################

15:00:00 Bryant, Graham

zrdimauro

Sophomore

English

################

19:00:00 Herries, Logan

yguo01

Graduate

Other

################

16:00:00 Weber, Danielle

N/A

Graduate

Other

################

16:00:00 Kreider, Aleina

yson

Graduate

Other

################

19:00:00 Repper, Michelle

zkang

Senior

Accounting

################

19:00:00 Herries, Logan

cvweaver

Freshman

Undeclared

################

20:00:00 Kim, Anna

mglundeen

Freshman

Undeclared

################

21:00:00 Sales, Megan

hlim

Senior

Neuroscience

################

13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae

cdpapas

Freshman

Government

################

13:00:00 Sigmon, Cody

kmmcgovern

Freshman

Undeclared

################

14:00:00 Kreider, Aleina

mbgoldman

Graduate

Other

################

14:00:00 Kim, Anna

jelee

Freshman

English

Hispanic Studies

################

15:00:00 Kreider, Aleina

bbtobo

Junior

Biology

################

16:00:00 Wallace, Eli

vasaras

Freshman

Undeclared

################

16:00:00 Sigmon, Cody

pasarup

Senior

Sociology

Women's Studies

################

19:00:00 Hayes, Dana

gnfernandez

Freshman

Undeclared

################

19:00:00 Herries, Logan

srdalessio

Freshman

Undeclared

################ ################

20:00:00 Carlomany, DJ 20:00:00 Carlomany, DJ

jrlewitz scgilliand

Junior Sophomore

American Studies Biology

Mathematics

################

20:00:00 Hayes, Dana

jzhang03

Freshman

Undeclared

################

Washington, 21:00:00 Ashleigh

cpmacdonnell

Junior

Biology

Marine Science

################ ################

13:00:00 Kreider, Aleina Washington, 21:00:00 Ashleigh

mttesfahuneyn hbach

Freshman Sophomore

Undeclared Neuroscience

################ ################

20:00:00 Carey, Sean 19:00:00 Carey, Sean

lamarty hlim

Freshman Senior

Other Neuroscience

################ ################ ################

13:00:00 Sales, Megan 19:00:00 Sales, Megan 13:00:00 Herries, Logan

blbrown ysun02 ecshaffrey

Graduate Senior Freshman

Africana Studies Psychology Kinesiology & Health Sciences

Chemistry

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14:00:00 Sigmon, Cody 15:00:00 Wallace, Eli

Khouloud Khammassi yson

Graduate Graduate

Other Other

################ ################ ################

21:00:00 Kim, Anna 21:00:00 Sales, Megan 19:00:00 Bryant, Graham

ylinis hlim lmmacdonald01

Freshman Senior Freshman

International Relations Neuroscience Undeclared

Economics

################ ################ ################ ################

Washington, 16:00:00 Ashleigh 13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae 16:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae 20:00:00 Carlomany, DJ

kmmcgovern yson rlmcdermott zadawi

Freshman Graduate Freshman Freshman

Undeclared Other Other Undeclared

################

19:00:00 Bell, Nicky

makendrick

Freshman

Finance

################

19:00:00 Herries, Logan

pmlyon

Freshman

Undeclared

################ ################ ################ ################ ################ ################ ################ ################ ################ ################

15:00:00 Kreider, Aleina 16:00:00 16:00:00 15:00:00 19:00:00 Sigmon, Cody Kreider, Aleina Wallace, Eli Bell, Nicky

tdespina kcbenner kbthoma kmatsuda mefillo sbgennari nshollingswort kbhopkins fchen ysun02

Junior Freshman Sophomore Freshman Freshman Sophomore Freshman Freshman Freshman Senior

Anthropology International Relations English Biology Undeclared Biology Undeclared Undeclared Undeclared Psychology

20:00:00 Bell, Nicky 14:00:00 Weber, Danielle 13:00:00 Weber, Danielle 13:00:00 Bell, Nicky 19:00:00 Sales, Megan

################

21:00:00 Sales, Megan

jzzhang

Freshman

Undeclared

################

Washington, 20:00:00 Ashleigh

zkang

Senior

Accounting

################

Washington, 21:00:00 Ashleigh

ejstraka

Freshman

Undeclared

################

13:00:00 Weber, Danielle

kmmgovern

Freshman

Undeclared

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13:00:00 Bell, Nicky 13:00:00 Herries, Logan 15:00:00 Sigmon, Cody 19:00:00 Sales, Megan 21:00:00 Kim, Anna Washington, 21:00:00 Ashleigh

klhill01 gnfernandez alfoster rmahgerefteh srsaffarini glschneider

Senior Freshman Freshman Junior Freshman Freshman

English Finance International Relations Finance Undeclared Chemistry

################ ################ ################ ################ ################ ################

14:00:00 Weber, Danielle 16:00:00 Wallace, Eli 19:00:00 Wallace, Eli 16:00:00 Wallace, Eli 13:00:00 Sales, Megan 14:00:00 Wallace, Eli

dposborn vasaras jbyun kcfish blbrown sacaudill

Junior Freshman Freshman Junior Graduate Senior

Neuroscience Undeclared International Relations Asian and Middle Eastern Studies Africana Studies Global Studies

Philosophy

################

15:00:00 Bryant, Graham

cmsaunders

Sophomore

Psychology

################ ################

15:00:00 Wallace, Eli Washington, 13:00:00 Ashleigh

yesong hbaek

Graduate Sophomore

Other Neuroscience

################

19:00:00 Herries, Logan

cerapkins

Freshman

Undeclared

################ ################ ################ ################

16:00:00 Wallace, Eli 14:00:00 Kreider, Aleina 15:00:00 Kreider, Aleina 14:00:00 Kim, Anna

zkang bjernst acdesando qyuan

Junior Freshman Freshman Freshman

Accounting Undeclared Art History Undeclared

################

19:00:00 Herries, Logan

tchoi01

Freshman

Undeclared

################

19:00:00 Sales, Megan

srdalessio

Freshman

Undeclared

################

20:00:00 Carey, Sean

djcasino

Junior

Psychology

################ ################

21:00:00 Sales, Megan 21:00:00 Carlomany, DJ

etlambergs Freshman 930548831 Freshman

Undeclared Undeclared

11/1/2011 13:21:16

13:00:00 Winter, Carrie

yliu11

Sophomore

Undeclared

11/1/2011 14:29:49

14:00:00 Winter, Carrie

ywang11

Freshman

Undeclared

11/1/2011 15:13:05

14:00:00 Kreider, Aleina

yguo01

Graduate

Other

11/1/2011 16:34:24

13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae

mbgoldman

Graduate

Other

11/1/2011 16:36:25

16:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae

sacaudill

Senior

Asian and Middle Eastern Studies

11/1/2011 16:55:22

Washington, 16:00:00 Ashleigh

jabracaglia

Sophomore

Finance

11/1/2011 19:46:43

19:00:00 Wallace, Eli

rjchoi

Freshman

Accounting

11/1/2011 19:49:51 11/1/2011 20:05:38

19:00:00 Carey, Sean 20:00:00 Wallace, Eli

abng yson

Freshman Graduate

Undeclared Other

11/1/2011 20:44:18

20:00:00 Hayes, Dana

jshim

Senior

Economics

11/1/2011 20:57:57

20:00:00 Bryant, Graham

cpmacdonnell

Sophomore

Biology

Marine Science

11/1/2011 21:46:06

21:00:00 Bryant, Graham

camarion

Freshman

Undeclared

11/2/2011 13:21:17

13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae

ycow

Graduate

Accounting

11/2/2011 13:52:34

13:00:00 Herries, Logan

mkuzio

Senior

Other

11/2/2011 14:46:35

14:00:00 Bryant, Graham

dytassara

Freshman

Anthropology

11/2/2011 14:48:02

15:00:00 Wallace, Eli

bdconstable

Freshman

Undeclared

11/2/2011 16:11:29

15:00:00 Bryant, Graham

sfguerard

Freshman

Undeclared

11/2/2011 16:54:32

16:00:00 Weber, Danielle

sbellakbira

Freshman

Biology

11/2/2011 19:56:06 11/2/2011 20:18:03 11/3/2011 12:55:47 11/3/2011 12:58:41 11/3/2011 13:03:20 11/3/2011 13:06:03

19:00:00 Herries, Logan 20:00:00 Repper, Michelle 14:00:00 Wallace, Eli 16:00:00 Sigmon, Cody 19:00:00 Herries, Logan 20:00:00 Hayes, Dana

laura.lee kmfrazer (blank) skim15 tmobemeier jbyun

Graduate Freshman Graduate Freshman Freshman Freshman

Other Public Policy Other Undeclared Economics International Relations

11/3/2011 13:07:11 11/3/2011 13:09:39 11/3/2011 13:11:34

19:00:00 Hayes, Dana 21:00:00 Kim, Anna Washington, 21:00:00 Ashleigh

gbgardner tmoinzadeh bdconstable

Freshman Sophomore Freshman

Undeclared International Relations Undeclared

11/3/2011 13:12:49 11/3/2011 13:14:25

15:00:00 Weber, Danielle 14:00:00 Bryant, Graham

ktlorenzen njhall

Freshman Graduate

Undeclared Other

11/3/2011 13:25:57

14:00:00 Wallace, Eli

rlscheetz01

Freshman

Undeclared

11/3/2011 13:27:35

14:00:00 Kreider, Aleina

mzshearin

Graduate

Education

11/3/2011 13:46:34

13:00:00 Sigmon, Cody

totaddeo

Sophomore

Undeclared

11/3/2011 14:42:30

16:00:00 Kreider, Aleina

yson

Graduate

Education

11/3/2011 14:45:53

14:00:00 Kreider, Aleina

yguo01

Graduate

Other

11/3/2011 14:49:21

14:00:00 Kim, Anna

jcmaza@email.wm. Freshman edu

Undeclared

11/3/2011 14:51:48

21:00:00 Kim, Anna

ysun02

Senior

Psychology

Anthropology

11/3/2011 16:54:40

15:00:00 Wallace, Eli

blbrown

Graduate

Anthropology

11/3/2011 17:00:34

16:00:00 Sigmon, Cody

tjsalmon

Sophomore

Undeclared

11/3/2011 20:04:18

19:00:00 Herries, Logan

ashoy

Freshman

Undeclared

11/3/2011 20:55:50

20:00:00 Carlomany, DJ

ashay

Freshman

Undeclared

11/3/2011 20:58:17

20:00:00 Hayes, Dana

jzhang03

Freshman

Undeclared

11/4/2011 13:39:57

13:00:00 Sales, Megan

tmrusso

Freshman

Government

11/4/2011 14:02:45

13:00:00 Herries, Logan

ysun02

Senior

Psychology

11/4/2011 14:32:30

14:00:00 Wallace, Eli

slbyarlay

Sophomore

Biology

11/4/2011 14:48:35

14:00:00 Sigmon, Cody

sjiang

Junior

Economics

11/4/2011 15:48:59

15:00:00 Sigmon, Cody

tmoinzaden

Sophomore

International Relations

11/6/2011 20:59:54

19:00:00 Herries, Logan

ywang01

Freshman

Undeclared

11/6/2011 22:31:35

Washington, 21:00:00 Ashleigh

dytassara

Freshman

Anthropology

11/6/2011 22:45:25

21:00:00 Sales, Megan

jcmaza

Freshman

Undeclared

11/7/2011 14:02:46 11/7/2011 14:05:21 11/7/2011 14:12:25

16:00:00 Kreider, Aleina 21:00:00 Kim, Anna 21:00:00 Sales, Megan

bkoo sjplunkett cmhennessey

Sophomore Sophomore Freshman

Undeclared Public Policy Undeclared

11/7/2011 14:17:23 11/7/2011 14:21:27 11/7/2011 14:25:41 11/7/2011 14:27:43 11/7/2011 14:28:49

13:00:00 Winter, Carrie 20:00:00 Herries, Logan 20:00:00 Repper, Michelle 19:00:00 Herries, Logan 19:00:00 Repper, Michelle

jagilbertson emembrey wevandenberg jzhang03 ychen02

Freshman Sophomore Freshman Freshman Freshman

Undeclared English History Undeclared Undeclared

11/7/2011 14:31:06

16:00:00 Weber, Danielle

aoharrow

Freshman

Undeclared

11/7/2011 14:31:59

15:00:00 Weber, Danielle

kefalvey

Freshman

International Relations

11/7/2011 15:42:15

14:00:00 Weber, Danielle

ramueller

Sophomore

Government

Hispanic Studies

11/7/2011 16:46:12

15:00:00 Wallace, Eli

mgabro

Junior

English

Philosophy

11/7/2011 16:48:13

15:00:00 Bryant, Graham

jabridgeford

Freshman

History

11/7/2011 17:50:10

16:00:00 Bryant, Graham

ejstraka

Freshman

Undeclared

11/7/2011 20:41:18

19:00:00 Sales, Megan

agborden

Freshman

Biology

11/7/2011 20:57:14

19:00:00 Carey, Sean

khouloud.khammas si@fulbrightmail.org Sophomore

Undeclared

11/7/2011 22:00:33

20:00:00 Carey, Sean

ctwhite@email.wm. Freshman edu

Undeclared

11/7/2011 23:06:17

Washington, 21:00:00 Ashleigh

lzhou

Junior

Psychology

11/8/2011 16:02:31

14:00:00 Winter, Carrie

yguo01

Graduate

Other

11/8/2011 16:03:40

13:00:00 Winter, Carrie

jelee

Freshman

Undeclared

11/8/2011 16:07:41

14:00:00 Kreider, Aleina

jsboayue

Junior

Psychology

11/8/2011 16:39:22

13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae

kmmcgovern

Freshman

Undeclared

11/8/2011 17:47:57 11/8/2011 17:51:20

16:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae Washington, 16:00:00 Ashleigh

yguo01 arbeaupre

Graduate Graduate

Other Anthropology

11/8/2011 18:32:00

17:00:00 Carey, Sean

blbrown

Graduate

Other

11/8/2011 20:48:01

19:00:00 Wallace, Eli

rawilliams02

Freshman

Undeclared

11/8/2011 21:02:26

19:00:00 Kim, Anna

jjcarter

Senior

Neuroscience Kinesiology & Health Sciences

11/8/2011 21:24:28

20:00:00 Bryant, Graham

ecshaffrey

Freshman

Chemistry

11/8/2011 21:54:50 11/8/2011 22:07:35 11/8/2011 22:08:19 11/8/2011 22:08:35 11/8/2011 22:09:26

20:00:00 Hayes, Dana 15:00:00 Bryant, Graham 15:00:00 Bryant, Graham 14:00:00 Wallace, Eli 13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae

ywang11 cjholmes cjholmes jbyun srsaffarini

Freshman Freshman Freshman Freshman Freshman

Undeclared Neuroscience Neuroscience International Relations Undeclared

11/8/2011 22:10:33

13:00:00 Herries, Logan

lmsinger

Freshman

Biology

11/8/2011 22:15:07

21:00:00 Bryant, Graham

knhull

Freshman

Undeclared

11/8/2011 22:16:54

21:00:00 Hayes, Dana

sbfarkas

Freshman

English

11/8/2011 22:18:05

20:00:00 Hayes, Dana

dckent

Freshman

Undeclared

11/8/2011 22:18:48

20:00:00 Bryant, Graham

cvweaver

Freshman

Undeclared

11/8/2011 22:36:10

21:00:00 Hayes, Dana

dagatton

Junior

English

11/9/2011 14:29:10

13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae

ramarty

Sophomore

International Relations

11/9/2011 14:32:48

13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae

ramarty

Sophomore

International Relations

11/9/2011 14:48:05

13:00:00 Herries, Logan

lahall

Freshman

Undeclared

11/9/2011 15:34:35 11/9/2011 15:35:40

14:00:00 Wallace, Eli 14:00:00 Bryant, Graham

kjainsworth kcsanders

Sophomore Freshman

English Undeclared

Sociology

Second Major

Nature of Consultation

Last Name of Professor

Subject of Assignment

What was worked on during this consultation?

General Comments on Consultation?

Consultee's W&M User ID

Writing

Donnor

Education

Writing

N/A

Other

Skype - Oral Oral

Baake Polaski

Other Religious Studies

Writing

Meyers

English

Paper Organization, Paragraph Organization, Sentence Style Sentence Style, Grammar/Mechanic s, Voice Sentence Style, skype consultation, Grammar/Mechanic don't have her user s ID Thesis and Argument Clarity Thesis and Argument Clarity, Sentence Style, Grammar/Mechanic s, Formatting, Citations, How often to quote She came in with a lot of questions about paraphrasing, and I showed her some resources and went through examples with her. We also worked on some mechanics of Grammar/Mechanic her writing--small s, How to grammatical Paraphrase mistakes. Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper Organization, Paragraph Organization, Sentence Style, Grammar/Mechanic s Sentence Style, ESOL, worked Grammar/Mechanic heavily on articles s and clarity. Needed lots of help pulling out a thesis from her essay, though there was definitely one there.

Writing

Cross

Education

Writing

Macdonald and Owens

Geology

Writing

Rennagel

Public Policy

Writing

Peterson

English

Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper Organization, Citations

Writing

Peterson

English

While her arguments were generally clear, she is a ESOL student Thesis and who needed help Argument Clarity, with a lot of little Grammar/Mechanic things, plurals, s, Formatting grammar, etc. It was a group paper that she brought in for the group. we Paper Organization, worked on cutting it Sentence Style, down and some Grammar/Mechanic sentence structure s stuff. Paragraph Organization, Sentence Style, Grammar/Mechanic Walk-in, had little time to go in depth s Group paper, focused on APA 5th Formatting, edition and Citations citations.

Writing

Donnor

Education

Writing

Wheatley

English

Psychology

Writing

Donnor

English

Writing

Alexandra

Religious Studies

Writing

Peterson

English

Writing

Dessier

Government

Writing

Manna

Public Policy

No major for Business? Tried to put her down as a Paper Organization, business major, but Sentence Style, it looks like that's Grammar/Mechanic not in the drops down. Sentence Style, Grammar/Mechanic She was sweet. s She's a really good writer- we should Thesis and ask her to work Argument Clarity here! Thesis and Argument Clarity, Grammar/Mechanic s Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper Organization, Paragraph Organization, Sentence Style, Grammar/Mechanic s Thesis brainstorming, prewriting Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper Organization We worked on wording changes. We wrote a thesis Thesis and and topic sentences Argument Clarity, for her paper, she is Paper Organization, planning on coming Sentence Style, back in when she Grammar/Mechanic write the whole s paper. Worked on shaving Paper Organization, down academic Paragraph quotations and Organization, replacing it with Formatting original material. Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper Organization, Paragraph Organization, Sentence Style, Grammar/Mechanic s Thesis and Argument Clarity, Sentence Style, Grammar/Mechanic s Sentence Style, Grammar/Mechanic s, Elaboration, Explanation Developed a logical progression of ideas for a paper outline Paper Organization, on malaria Paragraph eradication via Organization, genetic engineering Outlining of mosquitoes. Working on a paper for the St. Andrew's duel degree seminar that Kennedy had already edited. Grammar/Mechanic Mostly trying to s, Formatting, interpret her Citations comments.

Writing

Dessler

Government

Writing

Manna

Public Policy

Writing

Japanese Studies

Writing

Manna

Public Policy

Writing

Braxton

English

Writing

Brazys

Government

Writing

Alexandra

Religious Studies

Writing

DiNitto

Japanese Studies

Writing

Sher

Biology

Writing

Kennedy

Other

Writing

Japanese Studies

Thesis and Argument Clarity, Citations Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper Organization, Sentence Style Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper Organization, Sentence Style, Grammar/Mechanic s Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper Organization Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper Organization, Paragraph Organization, Sentence Style, Grammar/Mechanic s Primarily worked on incorporating a thesis into a book review.

Writing

Owens and MacDonald

Geology

Writing

Charles

Kinesiology & Health Sciences

Writing

Mahn

English

Writing

Cherles

Writing

Chemistry

Writing

Ashworth

Kinesiology & Health Sciences Personal -helped her write a Statement/Applicati resume resume on Thesis and Argument Clarity, Sentence Style, Grammar/Mechanic English s Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper Organization, Paragraph Organization, Opened his eyes to Sentence Style English the art of specificity. Thesis and Argument Clarity, Sentence Style, Religious Studies Transitions Worked on Paper Organization, maintaining objectivity and Personal Paragraph staying on topic Statement/Applicati Organization, within a paragraph. on Sentence Style Commentary paper for Public Policy. Receptive to changes but attached to his writing, particularly rhetorical devices that are sometime too much. Long consultation for a short paper, like to Thesis and discuss his writing Argument Clarity, as you go through it. Paper Organization, Said he was having Paragraph some trouble with Organization, academic Sentence Style, confidence, Grammar/Mechanic hopefully this s helped. Thesis and Argument Clarity, Grammar/Mechanic s

Music

Writing

Ashworth

Economics

Writing

Polaski

Writing

N/A

Writing

Manna

Public Policy

Writing

Ashworth

English

Oral

King

Theatre, Speech and Dance

Writing

N/A

Other

Worked on an outline for a speech. Not clear to me why she wanted to come in, because she already knew what she wanted to put in the speech, very vaguely asked me to help her create the outline. I mostly just asked "what do Paper/Speech you want to say Organization, Grammar/Mechanic next?" and she would answer. s Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Grammar/Mechanic Personal statement s for grad school

Art

Writing

Manna

Public Policy

Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paragraph Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style, Grammar/Mechanic s

Writing

Graham

Sociology

Sentence/Speaking Style, Grammar/Mechanic s, Citations

Worked on a short response paper for public policy. Focused on elaborating arguments and tightening language. Some issues with repetition as well. Seemed flustered when I asked her to come up with alternative language on the spot. Worked on a 2pp. paper for Social Problems. Just a summary, so not much to work with re: argumentation, but we focused on some style and wording improvements.

Writing

Manna

Public Policy

We worked on connecting each paragraph back to Thesis and her thesis, and Argument Clarity, adjusting a few Grammar/Mechanic sentences for s grammatical clarity. We worked on a paper about Wasteland by T.S. Eliot. We worked on the consistency and clarity of her thesis.

Writing

English

Writing

Wesis

Anthropology

Writing

Stow

Government

Writing

Manna

Public Policy

Thesis and Argument Clarity Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph Organization Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paragraph Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style, Grammar/Mechanic s Thesis and Argument Clarity, Sentence/Speaking Style

Worked heavily on structure and organization as well as overall argument

Writing

Peterson

English

Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph Organization Thesis and Argument Clarity Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph Organization, Grammar/Mechanic s Thesis and Argument Clarity, Sentence/Speaking Style, Grammar/Mechanic s Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Formatting

Writing

Quark

Sociology

Writing

Macdonald

Geology

Writing

Manna

Public Policy

She was very concerned about her language, but it was pretty solid overall. Not that much to correct.

Writing

Peterson

English

needed help with organization of paper

Writing

Kaziewicz

English

English

Writing Writing

Peterson Baltes

English Government

Writing

Tierney

Government

Writing

Palmer

Theatre, Speech and Dance

Writing

Amy Q

Sociology

Writing Writing

alexandra Glaser

Religious Studies Biology International Relations

Writing

Konefal

Writing

Dipaloa

Education

Writing Writing

Peterson

English Other

He said I was "much better than his last consultant". YEAHHHHH! He obviously came in only looking for a grammar check, and sort of resisted me talking about conceptual things, Thesis and but once he saw the Argument Clarity, errors in his Sentence/Speaking organization and Style, thesis he was more Grammar/Mechanic open to s suggestions. Thesis and Argument Clarity, Clarified the Paper/Speech assignment and her Organization thesis Paragraph plkeyster Organization Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paragraph Organization, Formatting, Citations Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization Thesis and Argument Clarity, Grammar/Mechanic s, fluency Grammar/Mechanic s, Formatting Thesis and Argument Clarity, planning Thesis and Argument Clarity, English expression Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, language Thesis and Argument Clarity

Writing

Van Juizen

English

Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization Her argumentation is very strong. She just needed help with making sure her ideas flowed coherently. We talked about some tips for writing clear transition sentences and topic sentences. We made sure her argument was clear and supported her thesis.

Writing Writing

Hart Owens

English Theatre, Speech and Dance

Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Transitions, Topic Sentences Thesis and Argument Clarity

Psychology

Writing

Donnor

Education

"Cohesion," "flow"

I entered this and it doesn't actually have a consultant listed at the top--I just had to guess. AK We need a major slot for Environmental Policy. Also, we don't get the correct date on this form when people don't enter the forms themselves the same day they had the consultation. We need to address this somehow.

Marketing

Writing

Taylor

Environmental Studies

Government

Writing

Polaski

Other

Writing

Defur

Other

Writing

Defur

Other

Paragraph Organization, Citations, "Transitions" Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph Organization, Grammar/Mechanic s Thesis and Argument Clarity, Sentence/Speaking Style Grammar/Mechanic s, Formatting, "Flow"

Writing

Ely

Classical Studies

Writing

Wolf

Women's Studies

Writing

Wiggins

English

Writing

Alexander

English

I have no idea what "explanation paper" means. Is this like, a term? We worked mostly on just Grammar/Mechanic making sure the s, How to write an writing style was not "Explanation Paper" too colloquial. Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Rewrite of an Organization, Sentence/Speaking already graded paper Style Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Planning before Organization paper was written

Writing

Dawson

English

Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization

We mainly discussed his thesis and how to organize a comparison paper thematically. It was a re-write, so he needed some ideas on restructuring.

Writing

English

Writing

Stower

Marketing

Thesis and Argument Clarity, early conceptions of the paper Sentence/Speaking Style, Grammar/Mechanic s

Literary and Cultural Writing Studies

Zuber

Writing

N/A

Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paragraph Literary and Cultural Organization, Type Studies of paper Personal Statement/Applicati Sentence/Speaking Style on

Argh. I did poorly on this consultation, because he had way too many ideas and not any direction. Usually people respond better to my suggestions. Oops. ESOL, worked heavily with grammar and mechanics Converting an informative paper to a close reading. Strong writing, just looking for an understanding of 'close reading.' Planning and prewriting scholarship essays Working from a proposal and thesis for a 12-14 page research paper for freshman seminar.

Economics

Writing

Polaski

Writing

Writing

Peterson

Writing

Froitzheim

Writing

N/A

Writing Anthropology Writing

Moyer Root

Thesis and Religious Studies Argument Clarity Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph Organization English Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style, Grammar/Mechanic English s, Formatting Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Sentence/Speaking Government Style Paper/Speech Organization, Sentence/Speaking Personal Style, Statement/Applicati Grammar/Mechanic on s Thesis and Argument Clarity, Sentence/Speaking Anthropology Style Literary and Cultural Not listed Studies

I taught him how to double space in word. Apparently he's always been skipping a line, manually in single space. Who does that?

Caught a few common errors, worked on content

9/28/2011 9/28/2011 Really odd assignment. September 28

Writing

Kelien

English

Writing

Alexander

English

Poetry paraphrase Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Formatting, Citations

9/28/2011

Writing

Alexander

English

Writing

Schechter

History

Writing

Murphy

Biology

Writing

Raphael

Writing Writing

N/A Defar

Economics

Writing

Schaepe

Writing

van Dijkhousten

Oral

Jennifer

Skype - Writing

Baake

Writing

Dr. Cross

Writing

N/A

Writing

Writing

Kaziewiez

Oral

Coleman

Religious Studies Personal Statement/Applicati Planning/Prewriting 9/26/2011 on Thesis and Education 9/27/2011 Argument Clarity Paper/Speech Organization, Sociology 9/27/2011 Planning/Prewriting Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph English 9/26/2011 Organization Paper/Speech Organization, Law brief from the Grammar/Mechanic law school s Other September 27 Khouloud and I discussed how to make her writing style best express Sentence/Speaking the ideas in her Other Style argument. We don't have a Gifted Ed major or even just an general Education major, which would be Thesis and helpful to have in Argument Clarity, Sentence/Speaking our list because often School of Ed Style, Grammar/Mechanic grad students come in. Education s, Citations Thesis and Argument Clarity, Personal Statement/Applicati Grammar/Mechanic Really interesting s, Formatting application! on Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph English Organization Thesis and Worked mostly on Argument Clarity, Sentence/Speaking expanding upon general statements Style, Grammar/Mechanic and looked for tense English consistency. s wanted to make sure paper had Thesis and proper grammar Neuroscience Argument Clarity and flow.

9/26/2011 We discussed the different arguments she could write for Planning/Prewriting her paper. Thesis and Argument Clarity, 9/26/2011 Planning/Prewriting

Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph Organization, Grammar/Mechanic s

9/28/2011

Writing

Mann

English

Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style

His writing and argument was clear and good, so we worked on making some sentences, particularly topic sentences stronger.

Writing

Alexander

English

Writing

Not given

Education

Writing

DiNitto

Asian and Middle Eastern Studies

Psychology

Writing

Murphy

Biology

Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style Paragraph Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style, Formatting Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style Paper/Speech Organization, Planning/Prewriting

Her paper was verbose, so we worked on cutting and condensation.

discussed mostly what a book review entails, and whether her essay really fulfilled all the criteria for a good book review.

Writing

Harris

Kinesiology & Health Sciences

She really didn't need much help at all. But I showed her Purdue OWL, which was an exciting Sentence/Speaking foray into the world Style, Citations of technology. Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization

Writing

Ozyegin

Writing

Taylor

Writing

Public Policy

Writing Writing

Schlabach Murphy

Writing

DiNitto

Writing

N/A

Writing Writing

Schlabach

Writing Writing

Owens Coleman

Writing Writing Writing

Bragdan N/A Ashworth

Worked on the thesis, making sure that it reflected the Sociology scope of the paper. 5 page paper for environmental freshman seminar. Sentence/Speaking Mostly responding Style, to teacher's Environmental Grammar/Mechanic comments on first Science s, Citations draft. Paragraph Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style, Grammar/Mechanic s, Citations Public Policy Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph American Studies Organization Biology Planning/Prewriting Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paragraph Made an outline for Organization, East Asian Studies Planning/Prewriting a book review. Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Grammar/Mechanic Two essays for Other NOAA scholarship s Paragraph Organization, Citations Africana Studies Grammar/Mechanic -summer research Other s, overall flow final paper Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Theatre, Speech Organization and Dance Grammar/Mechanic Neuroscience s, overall flow wanted to make Paper/Speech sure organization Linguistics Organization was logical. advice for writing Other GRZ? English Planning/Prewriting

Skype - Writing Writing

Baake Cross

Other Education

Writing Writing Writing

Manna

Public Policy Neuroscience Other

Angelane

Writing Writing Writing Writing

Alexander Cross Bennett Kambis

English Education English Other

Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style, Formatting Paper/Speech Organization Thesis and Argument Clarity, Grammar/Mechanic s Grammar/Mechanic s Conclusion Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paragraph Organization Grammar/Mechanic s Paper/Speech Organization Paper/Speech Organization

Mostly just helped her make her thesis sound a little more native

Music

Writing

Ashworth

English

Writing

Writing Economics Writing Writing Writing Writing Writing Writing Writing Writing Writing

N/A Froitzheim Peterson DiNitto Castillo Fowler Davis Palmer Manna N/A

English Personal Statement/Applicati on Government English Japanese Studies Women's Studies Environmental Science Philosophy Theatre, Speech and Dance Public Policy Other

Worked on a short paper for freshmen seminar. Focused on expanding on Thesis and arguments to make Argument Clarity, them stronger and Paragraph avoiding ambiguity. Organization, Also a couple of Sentence/Speaking instances of Style, repeating ideas in Grammar/Mechanic the same s paragraph. Thesis and Argument Clarity, Sentence/Speaking Style, Grammar/Mechanic s, Formatting

Writing

Other

Writing

N/A

Other

Writing

Ashworth

English

Thesis and Argument Clarity Thesis and Argument Clarity, Personal statement Grammar/Mechanic for a Masters in s Finance program Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Planning/Prewriting We worked on the consistency of her thesis and how to create a conclusion that organically flows from the rest of her paper.

wanted to make sure his cover letter for the School of Education was tothe-point and effective.

Writing

Alexander

English

Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization

Psychology Other

Writing Writing Writing Writing Writing Writing

Savage Taylor Schechter Blossom Manna Arehart

English Environmental Science History Finance Public Policy History

Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style, Grammar/Mechanic s

Worked on a paper for Shakespeare. Focused on adding analysis to quotes and furthering arguments.

Writing Writing Writing Religious Studies Writing Writing Writing

Saporito Harris Dessler Jerome Bragdan Kitamura

Sociology Kinesiology & Health Sciences Government Religious Studies Linguistics History

Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization

We worked on the consistency of her thesis throughout her paper and the clarity of her argument.

Writing

Peterson

English

Writing Writing

Cross N/A

Education Other

Writing

Schtecter

Writing Writing Writing Writing

Joanne Hinkle Prokhorov

Writing

Davis

Global Studies Personal Statement/Applicati Grammar/Mechanic s on Grammar/Mechanic Other s Russian and Post- Thesis and Soviet Studies Argument Clarity Grammar/Mechanic Geology s Paper/Speech Organization, Grammar/Mechanic English s

Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Clarifying the Paragraph overall argument Organization Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style, Grammar/Mechanic s Grammar/Mechanic s Sentence/Speaking Style, Grammar/Mechanic s

Writing

Public Policy

Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paragraph Organization

wanted to see how he could properly organize compare & contrast, structure of argument, and strength of argument.

Philosophy

Writing

Costa

Philosophy

Thesis and Argument Clarity

Writing Writing

Froitzheim

English Government

Writing

N/A

Writing

Wu

Thesis and Argument Clarity Planning/Prewriting Sentence/Speaking Style, Personal Statement/Applicati Grammar/Mechanic s on Thesis and Argument Clarity, Sentence/Speaking Style, Grammar/Mechanic Art History s

He showed up super late and then wanted time by himself to read over his notes so we really only had 10 or so minutes to work. He didn't seem very confident in his writing or in his understanding of the text. wrote body paragraphs before writing thesis. we were able to formulate an actual thesis by outlining together.

We don't have a "Law" option under major, which would obviously be useful for law students. Not that we get that many of those, but still. We also don't have a "Law" option under "Subject of Assignment". This consultation was actually really rewarding. I got to teach her how to use thesaurus.com as a resource, explained what "connotation" means, and got to talk about strategies for creative writing as opposed to academic writing. She came in with a reflection and a review of an article. We worked on varying her sentence structure. She is a grad student in Higher Education Administration. I gave her some techniques for changing the structure of her sentences.

Writing

Jennifer

Other

Sentence/Speaking Style, Grammar/Mechanic s, Figurative Language

Writing

Barber

Education

Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style, Grammar/Mechanic s

Writing

Wilcox

Economics

Writing

N/A

Writing

Palmer

Writing Writing

Clemens Cross

We made sure she addressed each element of her thesis. We also worked down making her sentences and word choice more clear. Since we finished early, she asked for some advice on another paper - in the government department. We discussed techniques for analyzing an argument rather Thesis and than summarizing Argument Clarity, Sentence/Speaking one and being more direct rather than Style, Chinese Language Grammar/Mechanic eloquent in government writing. and Culture s Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph Organization, Sentence/Speaking Research proposal Style, Grammar/Mechanic for Monroe Scholars program Other s Thesis and one of the harder Argument Clarity, consultations I've Paper/Speech had lately-- she'll sit Organization, there and just totally Paragraph reject your prodding Organization, to get her to write Theatre, Speech Sentence/Speaking for herself. why. and Dance Style why why why. Thesis and His first paper--he Argument Clarity, seemed very Formatting, Government nervous. Citations Sentence/Speaking Style Education Discussing a personal statement for grad school applications. Almost entirely worked on grammar and some ideas/priorities for Grammar/Mechanic adding/cutting s Other details. Paragraph Personal NOAA Scholarship, Organization, Statement/Applicati Sentence/Speaking polished his essay on structure Style Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Heavily worked on Organization, Sentence/Speaking the introduction and argument. English Style We talked about what a research paper needs to have - thesis, citations, etc. We talked about how to cite sources as well Thesis and and what resources Argument Clarity, online are useful for Planning/Prewriting these things.

International Relations

Writing

N/A

Writing

N/A

Writing

Meyers

Writing

Foster

Accounting

Writing

Public Policy

Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph Organization, Grammar/Mechanic s, Citations Focused on argument development and reasoning.

English

Writing

Root, Regina

Hispanic Studies

Writing

Meyers

English

Thesis and Argument Clarity Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style

Writing

Kaziewicz

English

Writing

Root

Hispanic Studies

Writing Writing Writing Writing International Relations Writing Writing

Clemens Diapola Schechter Schechter Schechter

Public Policy Public Policy Education History History History

Writing Other Writing Writing

Peterson Schechter Meyers

English History English

Writing Writing

Preston Barber

Theatre, Speech and Dance Education

Writing

Moyer

Other

Writing

Barber

Education

Focused on the thesis and argument Thesis and development. Very Argument Clarity nice paper. We worked on Sara's thesis and how it connected to the rest of the paper. She had many ideas, but her thesis was not specific enough to touch on these points. We worked Thesis and to unify her thesis Argument Clarity, and improve Grammar/Mechanic common grammar s problems. Sentence/Speaking Style, Grammar/Mechanic s Citations Just citations. Grammar/Mechanic s Grammar/Mechanic s Paper/Speech Organization Grammar/Mechanic s Paper/Speech Organization, Citations Paper/Speech Organization Thesis and Argument Clarity Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style Citations Paragraph Organization, Grammar/Mechanic s Paper/Speech Organization, Citations

Writing

Schnectar

Writing

Bass

Writing

Birkly

Writing

Shen

Writing

Writing

Wesiss

Writing

Fiorini`

Writing

Writing

Sher

Writing

DiNitto

A strange assignment where he was to create a dialogue between famous religious philosophers. A lot of focus was put on grammar, but it was Grammar/Mechanic overall a totally fine consultation. Global Studies s Paper/Speech Organization, Grammar/Mechanic s Education Sentence/Speaking Style, Grammar/Mechanic Other s Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph Organization, Sentence/Speaking especially focused on wordiness and Style, Grammar/Mechanic structure/organizatio Biology n s Sentence/Speaking Personal Style, Statement/Applicati Grammar/Mechanic worked on diction mostly on s Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paragraph Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style, Grammar/Mechanic Anthropology s Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style, Talked about proper Grammar/Mechanic analytic structure in s History a paper. Sentence/Speaking Style, Grammar/Mechanic s Biology Paragraph Organization, Sentence/Speaking Biology Style Writing a peer review of another Thesis and class member's Argument Clarity, paper. Mostly Grammar/Mechanic discussing his s, Analyzing an organization and argumentative grammar and how Japanese Studies paper to critique that. his paper was amazing. that is all. i felt bad because i had nothing to say except "maybe add a transitory word here but otherwise this paragraph is perfection."

Writing

Public Policy

Writing

Thesis and Argument Clarity Sentence/Speaking Personal Style, Statement/Applicati Grammar/Mechanic on s

Writing

Minear

English

Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization

Psychology

Writing

N/A

Writing

Schechter

Writing

English

Writing

N/A

Had lots of grammar issues, but the argument needed much more work so it was not Thesis and focused upon. Personal Argument Clarity, Tried to show how Statement/Applicati Paragraph one sells oneself on on Organization an application. A rather cool creative assignment: a Sentence/Speaking dialogue between Style, different Grammar/Mechanic non/religious s History philosophers. Sentence/Speaking Style, Grammar/Mechanic Art s Thesis and Argument Clarity, Personal Paper/Speech Statement/Applicati Organization, Boren Scholarship on personal statement Interesting making sure everything was as concise as possible, and that the "dry" sections were still clear to the reader.

Writing

Biology

Writing Writing Writing

Peterson Meyers

English English English

Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paragraph Organization Sentence/Speaking Style, Grammar/Mechanic s Paragraph Organization Thesis and Argument Clarity, Citations Thesis and Argument Clarity

Writing Writing Writing Writing Writing

Glaser Melfi Schechter Manna Peterson

Biology English History Public Policy English

Writing

Schechter

History

Writing

Schechter

History

Thesis and Argument Clarity, Sentence/Speaking Style Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style We worked on the clarity of the Sentence/Speaking expression of her Style, ideas, focusing Grammar/Mechanic mostly on sentence s structure. Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style Thesis and Argument Clarity, Worked on Paper/Speech developing Organization, arguments and Sentence/Speaking shortening Style sentences

Writing

McGlennon

Government

Writing

Wiggins

English

Government

Writing

Clemens

Government

Writing

Ashworth

English

Thesis and Argument Clarity, Citations, Planning/Prewriting

Writing

Biology

Writing

Mansour

Other

Writing

Clemens

Government

Writing

Story

Psychology

Writing

Berkly

Other

Writing

DiNitto

Japanese Studies

Writing

Ball

Psychology

Paper/Speech Organization Sentence/Speaking Style, Grammar/Mechanic s, Formatting, Citations Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paragraph Organization Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style, Grammar/Mechanic s Paper/Speech Organization, Grammar/Mechanic s Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style

Completely restarting a paper, working from ideas. Outlined a new paper. wanted to work on paper organization, grammar, and instances of redundancy.

Writing

Riofino

Hispanic Studies

Writing Writing

Berkly Weiss

Other Anthropology

Writing

Wesiss

Anthropology

Writing

Riofrio

Hispanic Studies

We talked a lot about her ideas and formulated them into a coherent Thesis and argument and Argument Clarity, Planning/Prewriting thesis. She is an ESL law student. She came in with a short Sentence/Speaking memo and wanted Style, help with very Grammar/Mechanic specific phrasing s issues. Thesis and Take home Exam Argument Clarity Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph Organization Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style Looked over first section of his honors thesis for AFST. Mostly discussed grammar, Grammar/Mechanic and what a literatary s review entails. Paper/Speech Working on a 35 Organization, min presentation Planning/Prewriting outlining

Africana Studies

Writing

Jhidley

Africana Studies

Oral

Ashworth

English

Music Music

Writing Writing Writing Writing Writing

Xin Galambushe Galambushe Dessler Manna

Art History Religious Studies Religious Studies Government Public Policy

Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph Organization

Restructured her paper by reordering paragraphs, developing a thesis, and looking at sentence flow/fluidity.

Paper/Speech Organization Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style Paper/Speech Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style Thesis and Argument Clarity, Planning/Prewriting Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Paragraph Organization Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paper/Speech Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style

Writing

Sher

Biology

book review

Oral

Ashworth

English

History

Writing

Meyers

English

Writing

Peterson

English

Writing

Meyers

English

Writing

Pease

English

Writing

Quark

Sociology

Writing

Quark

Sociology

Writing

Geology

Writing Writing

Begley Meyer

English Anthropology

Working on a blog post for expository writing. Mostly talking about voice and argument. He had really great analysis, so he just needed help add elements that clarified his argument--topic sentences, a more direct thesis. He Thesis and also needed help Argument Clarity, breaking up Paper/Speech sentences that were Organization, a little unclear Sentence/Speaking because they had Style so many clauses. He had really great analysis, so he just needed help add elements that clarified his argument--topic sentences, a more direct thesis. He Thesis and also needed help Argument Clarity, breaking up Paper/Speech sentences that were Organization, a little unclear Sentence/Speaking because they had Style so many clauses. Paragraph Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style Thesis and Argument Clarity, Paragraph Organization, Sentence/Speaking Style Prepping for a term Planning/Prewriting paper

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