Title: Personal Interim Report Background: My name is Moon, Leung Kwok Leung, .

and I graduated in from the Hong Kong Institute of Vocational Education (Tsing Yi). (This works better as two sentences since its two ideas.) My study subject of study is was Building building Services services Engineering engineering (High high Certificationcertification). (Only proper nouns and adjectives are capitalized in English.) I am have working worked in in the Engineer engineering field for over 10 years old. (Were you 10 years old when you became an engineer or have you been an engineer for 10 years?) I had have the experience of working at for different kinds of companys, include including for a consulting company, a main main-contractor and as well as a sub sub-contractor company. Now, I am currently a position of Project project Coordinator coordinator in at Kingsfield Engineer Co. Ltd. My position isI am responsible client tofor produce producing the Ccombined Services services Drawing drawings for clients and coordinate coordinating the with sub-contractors working sequencing and manage managing their progress. Aspirations, include Including short Short- and long Long-term: My short team objective is can to complete this a degree programme can and graduate in from Converntry University. (I assume its Coventry University you mean, since Ive never heard of Convertry University.) I hope that with this degree can I avoid dismissal from my position by my boss. Also I wish boss can adjust ourto imcrease my salary is great. My long team objective is can to ger promotion promoted to a manager management position. At the same time, I want to improve our communication, of confidence, through to upgradeand improve the my companys English levelproficiency. Self-awareness: I am an always thinking to about trying different things, and like to think that I adaptable adapt well to new things. Some times I have am over to sensibletive to the potentially hidden dangers. that mean more theIt makes me skeptical. (Two ideas: two sentences.) In my life, each thing I want to understanding the reasons behind things or and knowledge when more about things that I am interestinginterested in. My behavior iIn my communications with family members and friends, I is am more a straightforward and brief manner. Through the the feedback I receive from friends reply us and known to self, summary I have this characteristic includedbelieve that I am friendly, cheerful, modest, and helpful. My behavior canI am not easily influenced by social outside pressure when I believe that I am doing the right this thing is true. However, I also think more carefully in mywhen making life-altering make decisions also more carefully or complex to think. Also Occasionaly I do feel we would be feeling the anxietyous and nervous. Therefore, I need the love with committed and faithful toof my family and friends.

Employability: According from above self-awareness characteristic, we developed ourThe s employability skills that make me employable were more likely toinvolve my strengths in problem solving, planning, organizing and learning. (Planning, organizing, and learning what, exactly? Be specific.) In my the past working experience, my duty duties included was solving and identifying problems in the construction process. Also weI also needed to responsive respond to managing managerial time schedules and sets each task priorities for each task. and I also allocating allocated people and other resources in to the site progress. Moreover, I sets up the contingency plans less than site haveto guard against unexpected case influence property loss or other accidentalaccidents. Furthermore, we alwaysI always endeavored to thinking and learning new knowledge techniques to improve the site progress times and how to smoothly to complete each part of the manufacturing process. Developing Interpersonal skillsSkills: Before, when I said that I am was a Project project Coordinatorcoordinator, I meant to emphasize that my interpersonal skills was are important. Therefore, I need to learn or have the effective communication with my teammates. I must Make make sure we everyone understand your my meaning in when discussion discussing topics. And when is being communicateding, when I need to use appropriate wordsvocabulary. In our my experience, clear and specific words and charily listing can lessen than we have conflicts arising from in poor communication. Therefore, I would be exercise and restraint and mediate between others in my working processorder to improve our the continuity of my teams interpersonal skills continuity.

GENERAL COMMENTS 1. Some of your sentences are almost unintelligible. You need to try to form your sentences directly in English rather than translating from Chinese. Chinese and English grammar arent interchangeable, and you often get into a grammatical mess when you translate difficult concepts from one language to another. For example, Through the friend reply us and known to self, summary I have this characteristic included friendly cheerful modest and helpfulmeans nothing in English. 2. You give a lot of vague generalities, but you offer no specifics. You need to give concrete examples from your own past that prove that you have these skills. Tell your reader the exact problem you were having, and how you used your skills to overcome those problems.