Qui Gons Jedi Test for Ashla Temple

2011

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Conflict: Addiction vs Sobriety in the Force Dramatis Personae: Qui-Gon Jinn Jedi Master Attahox Children Yuuzhan Vong Species Hybrids addicted to the phosvane salts to handle the pain of being in between the Force Peace Brigade Yuuzhan Vong inter-galactic lackeys Red Knights of the Peace Brigade Special Forces of the Peace Brigade Executor Nom Anor Yuuzhan Vong of the Intendent Caste leader of the Praetorite Vong or Special Forces Captain Rex Human Clone Captain 501st Legion Human Clone Troopers Kostin Askor Jedi 21st Legion Troopers allegiant to Kostin Askor Sith Apprentice (Clone of Starkiller) Human clone of Galen Marek Starkiller Sith KKruhk Whipid Jedi Master at Ashla Temple of the Jedi Ahsoka Tano Torgruta Jedi Knight Mischel Deese Human Jedi Master, Gray Jedi Auset Lah Human, Korun padawan, shaped by Yuuzhan Vong Backstory: Qui-Gon Jinn was sent by Daughter the caretaker of Ashla Jedi Temple at Tython to rescue the sick and addicted children on Attahox. But this was a test to see if the Jedi Qui-Gon could negotiate this dispute with nonviolencenot using his lightsabera mark of a true Jedi. Could he wade through several negative and violent forces to rescue the children? Read on! Setting: planet Attahox

Qui- Gon Jinn *lands at Attahox* Now to find the sick children...*walks*

Attahox *children hide behind the space junk and giggle*

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Peace Brigade *Begins scanning the area aboard our ship. Looks for a place to land and avoids garbage space debris. Door hisses open and oxygen begins to roll off the walking platform* This place smells....funny.....who would want to live here? Of all the places we have to go, a wasteworld and I smellPONDWATER! AGGGHHH! Ok men spread out and let's see what we can find in this sector *Days and hours pass by*

Attahox *watch with forlorn eyes and runs to hide*

Qui-Gon Jinn *Walks over to peace brigade* My name is Qui-Gon Jinn. I was sent here to help

Attahox *Snickers of children run in the shadows*

Peace Brigade *The men talk among themselves watching around them when our heads turn hearing giggles, but ignore it. One of the men say* This guy looks familiar for some reason, but I can't put my finger on itHmm? Shh! He's walking over towards us, let's see what he wants *To Qui-Gon Jinn* Excuse me sir...what did you say...???

Qui-Gon Jinn I was sent here to help. I was told there were sick children here.

Attahox *Children laugh in the shadows running away*

Peace Brigade Hmm *Turns head hearing the laughter then back to Qui-Gon Jinn* I know of no children around hear that need help. In fact I know little of this ....place...perhaps you can enlighten me? And maybe I can help to you--offworld...I have many resources and information about much. Free and of no charge!

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Qui-Gon Jinn I was told that they were becoming addicted to the natural salts here. However, I think we can found out right now *listens to the Force. Walks toward alley*

Attahox *The children watch and see his weapons and whisper* Tiz'dag, lightsaber!!! *severs themselves in the Force*

Qui-Gon Jinn *Surprised* They dont want to be found. But why? *Sees a child*

Attahox *Children run and hide unable to be sensed in the Force but can be seen scared*

Qui-Gon Jinn Hmm...maybe I should speak with the adults first, and see whats wrong.

Attahox *The children whoosh around him in Force Speed having stolen his lightsaber* PRATTE JEEDAI! *Laughter echoes*

Qui-Gon Jinn *Uses Force grab and lifts lightsaber and grabs child by the arm* Who are you?

Attahox AAARRRGGGHHH JEEDAI JEEDAI!!! *wriggles out of arms kicking and screaming. The other kids run away scared*

Qui-Gon Jinn Why are they so scared? *Walks into building*

Attahox *One child sits on ground crying sees him then severs himself from the Force* Pratte tur JEEDAI! Rrush ichnar tur JEEDAI!
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Red Knights of the Peace Brigade *Appears out of the dark with a youngling in hand* JEEDAI...you must leave here! *And you see one of my transport ships take off with a few of the children on board. I wave my hand across and I say* These children are in good hands, I guarantee itIt is a nice day today is it not? *My villip opens up*

Executor Nom Anor *Appears in villip* Dwi!

Red Knights of the Peace Brigade *Hides villip from Qui-Gon Jinn* Please excuse me

Executor Nom Anor I need slaves to help the Sandpeople remove all the abominations from Tatoonie. Do not let me down *villip inverts*

Red Knights of the Peace Brigade Yaga Executor *whispers* Belek tiu! *salutes*

Peace Brigade *Walks up behind Qui-Gon Jinn* These children, you have scared them and you have beat them upYou cannot have them...

Attahox PUUL! PUUL!!! *children cry at the Peace Brigade* Tchurrokk! Zhaelor! *cries in extraordinary pain* AAAARRRRGGGHHHH!!!!

Qui-Gon Jinn I did not. But now I know whats wrong! *Activates lightsaber* In the name of The Old Galactic Republic, you are under arrest.

Captain Rex *Ships come and drop off some troops, LAATs, ARC Trooper Captain Fives and me* General any assistance needed?

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501st Legion *Forty troops stand behind Captain Rex and ARC Trooper Captain Fives*

Attahox *Children cry in fear running away seeing all the troopers through all the trash, junk and debris*

The Old Galactic Republic *Comms* Captain! Report to The Old Galactic Republic! You and your Legion is needed elsewhere

ARC Trooper Captain Fives *Comms* The Old Galactic Republic what's wrong?

Kostin Ashkor *Comms Qui-Gon Jinn* Master, do you need any assistance? We're almost there.

Attahox *Children freak seeing all these military and start to run screaming wildly. Some children rock back and forth trying to self-soothe. Others breathe bags of the Phosvane pain killer salts so they get high*

Qui-Gon Jinn Any help will be good. But why are the children afraid of us?

Attahox *A group of children SEVER THEMSELVES from the Force and try to run to the Tabernacle*

Qui-Gon Jinn That may hold the key*Runs to Tabernacle and enters*

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Attahox *Group of kids with no Force Powers huddle together crying. A diverse group of kids with a lot tattoos and some have decorative scarification. Some kids huff Phosvane salts*

Qui-Gon Jinn *Tries to help some children*

Attahox *A child backs away* PRATTE TUR JEEDAI!!! *Another child says in Galactic Basic Standard* Don't touch me! Please! *cries*

Qui-Gon Jinn *Stops and looks at the one speaking basic* Im sorry. Im here to help you.

Attahox *Turns away scared but you cannot sense them* You are going to beat us because we sever ourselves from the Force. That's what they told us.

Qui-Gon Jinn I wouldnt do that. Who told you this?

Attahox *Looks away and runs to breathe the Phosvane salts to ease the pain. A hybrid Twi'lek looks at you wondering* Why are you here JEEDAI?

Qui-Gon Jinn *Walks over to the salt* This is why I was sent here. The salt is making you sick.

Attahox *An older hybrid Togruta appears* JEEDAI the salt eases our pain...Makes us....*smiles* Feel less of your Force...

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Qui-Gon Jinn We will deal with this latter. First, we need to stop the Peace BrigadeI presume they are the ones who lied to you?

Attahox *glares* Peace Brigade protects from infidel JEEDAI!

Qui-Gon Jinn I came to help. The Peace Brigade is somehow connected to the Yuuzhan Vong.

Attahox *Blinks then boys says* They serve the Yuuzhan Vong. They want to be Yuuzhan Vong though they never will be. The Yuuzhan Vong deny us --we hide here.

Qui-Gon Jinn If we get rid of them, you wont have to hide. The Old Galactic Republic will help you, but I need your help.

Attahox *Children cry*

Qui-Gon Jinn It is up to you *Walks toward door*

Attahox *One yells* I want my Daddy!!! *Another child cries* Commander Dak Steng... *Another child sniff* High Prefect Da'Gara... *Another child says* Commander Hazik Carr...

Qui-Gon Jinn *Turns around* Thats why...they are your parents, arent they?

Attahox *Some of the children nod, and then the older Togruta says* JEEDAI, we are the forgotten. We hybrids! Yun Yuuzhan don't want us! We abominations. Infidels. We useless. But she protects us as much as she can.
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Qui-Gon Jinn Who is "she"?

Attahox What you know, JEEDAI? She Senator Yemaja Mlise Lah

Qui-Gon Jinn I will protect you, but you need to trust me.

Attahox *Older Togruta says* Why? You have shown us NOTHING JEEDAI! *walks to a corner and helps a crecheling huff salts that eases the pain of being in between the Force*

Qui-Gon Jinn What do you want me to do?

Attahox What you JEEDAI do best!

21st Legion *Ten Venator-class Star Destroyers exit hyperspace escorted by five squadrons of Z-85 starfighters*

Qui-Gon Jinn *looks out an opening* Our help just arrived. If there is anywhere safer, youd better get your friends there *activates lightsaber*

Peace Brigade *Twenty Peace Brigade members begin to walk up towards you*

Sith Apprentice(Clone of Starkiller) *From out of nowhere* I see your both good friends

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Attahox *Backs away carefully severing selves from the Force with homeless pet hounds. Children start to cry in pain* PUUL! PUUL! GRUVVK!

Qui-Gon Jinn Go. Ill hold them off.

Sith Apprentice(Clone of Starkiller) Pathetic weaklings *Uses Force lightning on a child*

Qui-Gon Jinn *Blocks* The pathetic one is you, attacking the defenseless.

Attahox *Crecheling struck falls to the ground shaking then dies. The older crechelings scream in agony and rage unable to use any Force Powers to protect themselves from another violent intruder* PUUL! YOU ALL ARE EVIL INFIDELS!

Qui-Gon Jinn Get out of here! I cant protect all of you at once!

Jedi Master K'Kruhk With Force Stealth touches Qui-Gon Jinn and uses Force Revitalize and Force Whispers- Never fear we have come to protect you.

Jedi Ahsoka Tano *Jumps down before the children gently edging them with Force Push causing Force Plant Surge to protect surround them and protect them* Jedi Master K'Kruhk, I have them.

Jedi Master Mischel Deese Nods as YT2400 hovers over the children, "Auset, they're all yours! I estimate 80. Geez I can't sense them at all!"

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Auset Lah *Jumps where Ahsoka is with the Crechelings and speaks the Yuuzhan Vong language* Dwi, Zhaelor! Zhaetor Zhae, khotte, Crecheling, Nikk Pyrozz Khattazz, Yun Shuno! *palms their faces* Jedi Master K'Kruhk *bows*

Sith Apprentice(Clone of Starkiller) If i was pathetic I wouldnt have my powers *Force pushes a child*

Attahox *Children crying look up to the Yun Shuno incarnate Auset Lah then to Jedi Ahsoka Tano* Zhaelor! Gruvvk! *hugs both of them*

Auset Lah *Catches child and watches the Sith* Infidel... *smiles* When will you come to the Tabernacle and pray with us?

Jedi Master Mischel Deese Looks down as living vines wrap on to oneself and lifts in a Force Bubble the children while holding the ship steady, "Hold on!"

Jedi Master K'Kruhk -Helps pushing them up in the ship- Good work, everyone! QuiGon. You need to come with us, now. Daughter wants a word with you at Ashla Temple of the Jedi on Tython.

Sith Apprentice(Clone of Starkiller) I do not worship the Yuuzhan Vong gods. As you can see from the dried blood, scars, gashes and bruises you can tell I have fought them *grabs the ship with the force and begins to rip it*

Jedi Master Mischel Deese Ship becomes unsteady while focus is on Force Bubble, "HOLD ON EVERYONE! Jedi Master K'Kruhk!"

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Sith Apprentice(Clone of Starkiller) *Uses force lightning on the ship and pulls it to the ground*

Jedi Master K'Kruhk -nods at Jedi Master Mischel Deese and through Art of Small lifts the water filled with Phosvane Salts and dunks the water on top of the Sith Apprentice(Clone of Starkiller)-- Powerful you are, smart you are not.

Sith Apprentice(Clone of Starkiller) Power has no limit knowledge does *Forces the ship to the ground ignites unusual very rare rainbow colored lightsaber and begins to cut door off of ship

Auset Lah *Force block the ship falling and Force pushes Sith Apprentice(Clone of Starkiller)* Power may have no limits SEETH, but stupidity does! *Helps push crechelings into the ship with Force Calm* Show me what you have got without your Force Powers, Kane a bar!

Jedi Ahsoka Tano *rushes children onto the ship* C'mon, hurry little ones, try harder! You can do it! I believe in you!

Jedi Master K'Kruhk --Force flies metal pieces from the junk laying around to where this is a cut and yells- EVERYONE GET ON THE SHIP! YOU TOO, Auset Lah! --glares at the Sith Apprentice(Clone of Starkiller)-

Sith Apprentice(Clone of Starkiller) *Jumps and lands beside Jedi Ahsoka Tano* I see you have friends *Ignites deactivates saber*

Jedi Ahsoka Tano *She kicks the Sith in the taco and watches the lettuce fall out! Pushes the last child onboard and says* Children are on!

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Sith Apprentice(Clone of Starkiller) *Recovers, uses Force chokes Ahsoka* And to think I thought you would be a nice one!

Jedi Ahsoka Tano *Coughs and gags to break his Force grip*

Sith Apprentice(Clone of Starkiller) *Uses his full Force powers into the choking*

Auset Lah *Severs myself from the Force* The difference between the JEEDAI and me, is I have been blessed by the Goddess Yun Ne'Shels Shaper Hands. *PUNCHES you by an uppercut and whips you around with her Amphistaff. Kicks you in the Gut and watches*

Jedi Master K'Kruhk Auset Lah NO! --takes a deep breath and Fold Spaces the ship with Jedi Master Mischel Deese back to Ashla Temple of the Jedi on Tythonleaving them there to confront the Sith-

Jedi Ahsoka Tano *Falls to the ground hacking up breath* Thanks, but...How are we going to get back to Ashla Temple of the Jedi on Tython?

Sith Apprentice(Clone of Starkiller) By meR2 get over here with the ship now.

Auset Lah *Kicks the droid in a martial arts move* PUUL! I do NOT tolerate Abominations! Get that thing away from me! Leave me here! I will get the next Vua'spar or Miid Ro-Ik! I'll take the punishment!

Jedi Master K'Kruhk Auset Lah -facepalms and sighs- Sith Apprentice(Clone of Starkiller) apologies, but we cannot take that ride. I hope you understand.

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Qui-Gon Jinn We still have the ship that brought me here.

Jedi Ahsoka Tano Master K'Kruhk? Do you think Master Deese will be okay handling the children by himself?

Auset Lah *stays silent as Force Powers weakly return*

Qui-Gon Jinn Are you alright?

Auset Lah JEEDAI Qui-Gon! I'm fine!

Jedi Master K'Kruhk -smirks- Qui-Gon Jinn, your ship has already been to Ashla Temple of the Jedi on Tython, may we catch a ride with you? -looks at Auset Lah and Jedi Ahsoka -

Qui-Gon Jinn Thank you for coming. Of course *walks to ship and starts it up*

Jedi Master K'Kruhk -follows and sits down dragging Auset Lah- Now I "IZAI" Daughter to help you!

Qui-Gon Jinn *Looks at Jedi Master K'Kruhk* It is your choice. We're ready to take off. Is everyone on?

Jedi Master K'Kruhk We will be riding with you --uses Jedi Mind Trick on Auset LahJedi Ahsoka you understand... -sits in the ship-

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Qui-Gon Jinn *Lifts ramp* Maybe another time *Takes off* Setting in course for Ashla Temple of the Jedi on Tython.

Auset Lah *Sits next to Jedi Ahsoka Tano*

Qui-Gon Jinn Thank you all again for coming. We are almost there, but why did you come? What about the children?

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