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A short story
By Natasha Tracy
Her hair was wild, unencumbered, reaching in all directions at once. She painted it
blueberry, raspberry or cherry blossom because it made her smile and laugh. Its
unruly curls refused to be tied down by mere elastics or metal clips, almost
eschewing the dregs of such convention. Each day it was a new creation. It
But laying there, on a metal gurney clad with thin, green sheets, her hair was
crestfallen, flat and dull. It was tied back and out of the way of the doctors. Now
Renee and I met two years ago when she drew me across the room in a
coffee shop. I thought she must have been very important to be working away on a
laptop in the middle of a Sunday afternoon, but as it happened, she was a writer,
stealing glances at me over her screen. Later she told me she found it inconceivable
that a girl with my beauty had been there alone. She charmed me out of my shell
with bubbling chatter of beauty, travel and the seals sunning themselves in front of
us. We echoed each other’s smiles and laughter as we closed down the coffee shop
together. She was achingly brilliant and witty and I raced to catch up with her
ideas. I giggled and pondered and fascinated over the paths her mind took, from
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By the time we had spent a full day together eating a picnic of brie and
strawberries on a rocky cliff, pretending to fly with our arms outstretched into the
wind and sipping perfect lattes across a stone-top table, I knew she was like no one
I had ever known. She seemed to chart new courses even just weaving from a
barista stand to the counter burdened with six kinds of sugar. Sometimes she tried
Forming the apples of her cheeks there were pink contradictions and pulling at the
corners of her lips, puzzles. Enchantment flashed across her skin. I was drawn to
her. Mercilessly.
She reached her hand out to me and I approached the gurney to clasp it.
There were streaks down each side of her face where tears had fallen, dried and
then fallen again. She tried hard to blink away fresh tears and screw a smile into
place.
I didn’t know what to say to her. I wasn’t going to be in the room. I wasn’t
going to apply the electrodes. I wasn’t going to manage her anesthesia. I wasn’t
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I tried to reassure her with a smile, weak as it was.
She kissed my hand, pulled me close, grabbed a fist of hair at the back of my
head and kissed me in a way that reminded me of who was still inside her.
“I love you,” she said, the water pooling at the corners of her eyes now
“I love you too,” I said, aware of the two doctors and two nurses watching
The tables at the hospital-embedded Starbucks were inlayed with tile. Little
black and white checks in a metal frame, designed to be used indoors and out. I ran
my finger along the grout and thought about our lattes over grey stone tables.
Renee had told the barista not to make formal crema art on top; she liked to use the
white and caramel swirls as a creative Rorschach test, or treat it like tea leaves,
telling our future. Looking into our lattes, I didn’t see what would happen next, but
The day after we’d met I was naked in her bed. Naked in her bed in a pair of
inky-black leather restraints posing for the camera. How she knew that was what I
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wanted I’ll never know. I had never been with a woman before. I had never been in
restraints before. I had never been photographed, milky flesh against stiff leather,
before. And somehow, right then, it was the most right thing in the world. She had
And then my heart belonged to her. It wasn’t that she was older and wiser,
although she was; it wasn’t that I had lost my virginity to her, although I had; it
wasn’t that she slayed me with wit and humor, although she did; it was that she
was a pulsating, shining, swirling, enigmatic, force of nature. It was that being near
her resulted in me wanting to be near her more. She was a drug of passion and
effervescence.
The rest of the summer we played at lovemaking and held each other’s hand
as we stumbled along the rocks at the beach. Her hair grew wilder in the winds
blowing in from the sea, and her eyes reflected the orange and pink glints from the
water at sunset.
It had been two hours and no one had called me to tell me that Renee was
awake. Two hours seemed like a long time for a procedure that only took minutes.
I started to pace between the brown leather ottomans scattered across the waiting
glanced at others waiting for their loved ones too: there was an old man with grey
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hair and a cane leaning to his left that looked more like he should have been in a
bed in the hospital rather than in a waiting room, there was a woman in her 40’s
with two deep-set crevices in her forehead where the worry for her sick child had
set up camp, and a couple in their 60’s holding hands, their two grey heads of hair
blending together as one, their faces contented as if they were on a park bench
feeding the pigeons together. None of these people were waiting to hear about their
loved one undergoing shock therapy. There wasn’t enough terror across their faces.
I paced and clucked quietly and sickly remembering the information from
the doctor-provided pamphlet. The first set of treatments is called an index series.
It’s usually eight to twelve treatments under complete anesthesia. It isn’t called
as ECT. Renee said it was to try and make you forget the fact that it still involves
zapping your brain with electricity and invoking a seizure. No three letter acronym
I sat down knowing that my pacing was bothering the others stuck in their
own holding patterns. The last few months had been impossible for Renee. All the
colours and streaks of light around her darkened and life itself seemed to want to
kill her from within. Her brain used to fly from shiny to impossible to erudite
subjects, it now only lobbed from darkness to irrational, to suicidal tactics. Over
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and over I heard her tell me that she didn’t want to live. Over and over I heard her
talk about how much pain she was in. Over and over I watched her cry, scream,
beg and bleed. She was her own mirror image. Hopelessness deadened her eyes,
flattened her features and danger laden her skin. She carved nothing matters into
the flesh of her thigh with a hunting knife. There was nothing I could do to stop
her.
It had happened before, she said, many times before. But I had only seen her
I got up to pace again, but the tiny shift in the old man’s gaze asked me not
to. Instead I walked across the room to the elevators and poked at the down button
until the doors opened. The elevator sunk to the brick-lined basement where an
ECT room was stuck in a corner. The fact that shock-therapy happened at all
seemed to be a secret that the hospital wanted to keep. I walked into the smaller
waiting room, reserved for people waiting to go into ECT; no leather or tiled tables
The only people in the room were another patient and her mother. The girl
looked to be 25 and had long, flat ropes of dark hair dropping from each side of her
head. She wore hospital-issued pajamas that billowed from her sunken frame. Her
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face was stiff with despair; her eyes didn’t even seem to blink. This emaciated girl
was dying right in front of me. Her mother couldn’t do anything but worry.
The nurse walked crisply in from the left and I realized I had been staring.
“Hello Jane,” she said brightly, “Renee is awake. We just had to give her
some medication for the pain. You can see her soon. Come through and sit here.”
Another waiting room. Smaller still. This one with a paper-covered table,
chairs, a mini-fridge and a coffee-maker. The patients were given food after
treatments as they couldn’t eat beforehand. I looked at the limp plates of plastic-
wrapped fruit and the individual portions of cereal. There were Fruit Loops and
When they brought her in she needed to be held upright by a nurse and her
stainless steel I.V. pole. Somehow they had crushed her body to match her
diseased mind and even that had gotten worse. She was shrouded in confusion and
complained of pain. I poured her some decaf coffee into a plastic cup designed to
hurt anyone it might be thrown at. I unwrapped the plastic from a paper plate of
tepid fruit. I poured milk into the paper bowl containing the Lucky Charms. When
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prodded, she picked up pieces of food and put them in her mouth, seemingly
without comprehension of why she should bother. Eating made her pain worse.
only come out in fits and starts. I didn’t know what to say to her. I couldn’t find
words to reach through her pain. She asked for more pain pills.
I took her back to her apartment and tucked her into bed so she could sleep
off the anesthesia, medication and pain. I waited in her living room, going through
anything. The books had titles I couldn’t understand and some weren’t even in
English. I brushed her cat, getting orange fur all over Renee’s red couch. I tried to
wipe it off, but no matter what I did, dissonant orange hair remained.
When she reappeared from her bedroom a slight hue had returned to her face
and she summoned the strength to force a smile. I still didn’t know what to say to
her but even in her deadened state she filled in the gaps explaining she wasn’t
“Is there anything I can get for you? Anything at all?” I asked, almost
plaintively.
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“No,” she said flatly, “I’m fine.” She couldn’t hide the hopelessness in her
eyes.
I drove home that night colourless and barren. Feeling blunted. Feeling
sorrow, pain, loss, hopelessness and uselessness flowed over my cheeks, down my
chin and dripped onto my chest. An amorphous, wet spot formed on my white shirt
and I couldn’t make it stop getting bigger. It got wider and wider. I slunk down the
wall and knelt on the floor. I was helpless to stop the brackish cavalcade. I was
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Renee called the next day and left a voicemail message saying that she was
thinking a bit more clearly now and she thanked me for going with her for her first
appointment. Some tone had returned to her voice and she made a joke about just
sticking her finger in an electrical socket next time. I smiled lightly knowing she
left that joke there just for me, to convince me that she was OK, to make sure I was
OK.
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Images of Renee flashed across my mind all that day, and into the next, into
But I never could think of a thing to say to the girl who was once
unconvincingly lying about being OK. I never returned her call. I never returned
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