An insprising view

I had an unforgettable memory when I was 16 years old. In that day, I had to
get up at 3 am to study. It was a difficult time to me because I might to
compete with the other member in the class. When I was tired with my
homework, I saw an insprising view. The scene that motivated me was dawn.
The dawn is the best masterpiece that I have seen. At that time, the space
was quite and the sky was still dark. I concentrated on my homework too
much so when I stand up, the sky was brighter than before. I looked through
the window and my heart was stirred by the scene. The sun rose as a canopy
of gold, brighted amid the blue, bidding the stars to take their nightly rest.
When darkness ran away, every colour changed from tinges of charcoal to a
vibrancy. Dawn sent shimmering rays over the placid ocean, bestowing a
golden path from the shore to the horizon. The dawn came with a musical
silence, the soul hearing the melody that the ears could not. Sunlight filled the
air, gently make our skin smooth. The outlines of the houses were becoming
clearer and even the leaves on the trees were looking more green than grey. I
was full of admiration about the beauty of dawn. It dispelled tired and gave
me hope about the future. A new day had come, new possibilities, a fresh page
yet to be written.

Nowadays, we can look dawn esily. However, the dawn that i saw at that
time was the most colorful. It gave me a whole new motivation. It was the
most amazing experience for me.