Essay Writing Checklist

Introduction
 The first sentence is the hook and is designed to grab the reader’s attention
 Transition from the hook to the thesis statement
 Give the full title(s) of the work(s) you are exploring as well as the complete
name(s) of the author(s)
 The thesis statement is the last sentence in the introduction paragraph
 The thesis statement clearly and directly responds to the writing prompt or
assignment (the words in the prompt may be used to formulate the thesis
statement)
 The introduction is at least 4 – 6 sentences
Body Paragraphs
 The topic sentence is the first sentence of each body paragraph
 The topic sentences are an extension of the thesis statement—each topic
sentence clearly proves and supports the thesis statement and responds to
the prompt or writing assignment
 Topic sentences do not summarize plot or make general comments
 Body paragraphs are developed with at least two supporting
passages/quotes from the literature
 Provide reader with the context for each supporting quote: speaker +
occasion
 Follow each quote with at least two sentences of analysis that explain how
the quote supports and proves the topic sentence and therefore the thesis
statement
 The last sentence of each body paragraph is a concluding sentence that
summarizes the paragraph and/or transitions to the next paragraph
Conclusion
 Restates the thesis statement
 Summarizes the main ideas without being repetitive
 May possibly revisit the hook or provide an appropriate quotation
 Expands on the ideas in the essay, leaving the reader thinking and pondering
 The conclusion is at least 4 – 6 sentences
 Never write “In conclusion…”
Other Important Aspects
 Use formal writing style, tone, and language
 Avoid slang, poor diction, non-specific language, and contractions
 Avoid addressing the reader and the use of first-person
 Avoid asking rhetorical questions
 Be mindful and aware of MLA format in citing your sources in the text
 Pay attention to spelling, punctuation and grammar
 Always proofread and self-edit your work
  Give your essay a creative, thoughtful and interesting title

Take pride in your work and give the essay 100% of your effort!

Topic Sentence Checklist

An effective topic sentence:

Proves and supports a thesis statement
Tells the reader the focus of the paragraph
States a claim, idea, or assertion—the author’s expert opinion about the
literature
Like the thesis statement, addresses how/why questions
Is very clear and very specific
Avoids 1st person point of view
Avoids plot summary
Avoids stating the obvious
Avoids abstract ideas and language
Avoids passive voice

Using Supporting Details Checklist

Consider the following when using supporting quotes and passages in your writing:
Lead into or set up your quote/passage with speaker (character/narrator) and
occasion (context, or what’s happening in the plot
Follow up a quote with at least two sentences of commentary and analysis
before moving on to the next supporting detail
Avoid excessive plot summary
Be sure the quote is relevant to your topic sentence and thesis—does your quote
help prove your point?
Avoid letting the quote speak for itself—avoid “dropping” the quote

Active and Academic Verbs to Use in Critical Literary Analysis

Emphasizes Parallels
Elucidates Juxtaposes
Compares Implies
Suggests Alludes to
Creates Observes
Illustrates Identifies
Exemplifies Organizes
Reinforces Focuses
Defines Balances
Clarifies Relates
Contrasts Expresses
Argues Insinuates
Mirrors Demonstrates
Echoes
Develops
Connotes
Anatomy of a Paragraph & Paragraph Checklist

Consider the following model of a typical literary analysis paragraph:

Topic Sentence *

Supporting Supporting Supporting

Detail* Detail* Detail*

Concluding Sentence

Each supporting detail is made up of:

1. Lead-in or set-up: Speaker + Occasion

2. Direct quote or passage

3. At least two sentences of following commentary/analysis

The Concluding Sentence:

Wraps up and summarizes the paragraph

Transitions to the next body paragraph
Avoids the words “in conclusion” or “in summary”

Consider the following reminders when composing a literary analysis paragraph:

Use the strongest argument, or supporting detail, last

Be mindful of spelling, grammar, and punctuation
 Use present tense verbs when writing literary analysis
Be mindful of proper MLA format when citing a source
Avoid poor diction and slang
Avoid clichés, first-person point of view, and addressing the reader

Thesis Statements: Strategies,Checklist, & Samples

The thesis statement in an essay of literary analysis functions as follows:

- It narrows your topic to a central idea—all topic sentences and body
paragraphs will develop and support this idea
- It asserts something specific and significant about the topic, conveying your
expert opinion
- It may preview how your ideas will be arranged within your essay
- It is logical, precise, and reasonable

Here are some strategies for formulating a thesis statement:

I. Decode the writing prompt: Pay close attention to the language of the prompt.
Underline or highlight words that indicate specific areas of focus. Use the
language of
the prompt while composing your thesis statement.
* Depending on the prompt or assignment you are given, you may be able
to
simply restate the prompt while including your answer to how/why
questions.

II. Take Inventory: Determine which supporting details or passages could be

used to
prove your thesis.
* Be careful! Avoid arbitrarily selecting quotes. Be certain the supporting
details
you choose do, in fact, support the central idea.

III. Identify Relationships, Distinctions, & Categories: Once you have a variety of
supporting details, determine what various aspects of the thesis statement
each
detail supports. These distinctions or categories will be used to determine
what your
topic sentences and body paragraphs will be made up of.

IV. Revise and Draft Again: Rewrite the thesis as many times as necessary to
achieve
satisfaction. Continually refer to the prompt to be sure you are directly and
specifically responding to its requirements. You may find that after you have
written
the body paragraphs, your paper has taken a different direction. In that case,
you
must revise your thesis statement to suit the rest of the essay.
Consider the following checklist when composing a thesis statement:
Do not use first-person point of view in a thesis statement, unless you are writing a
personal
autobiographical essay. Formal literary analysis requires the use of third person
point of
view.
The thesis statement should be limited to one sentence. In rare cases, two
sentences may
be necessary.
Refer to the writing prompt frequently while composing the thesis and be sure your
statement clearly responds to all aspects of the prompt
The thesis statement is located at the end of the introductory paragraph in a typical
literary analysis essay.
The thesis is a “roadmap” for the ideas presented in the essay; it informs the
reader what
will be analyzed in the essay and in what order.
The thesis statement presents ideas in logical, clear, and specific language; it
avoids vague or
abstract language, poor diction, and slang.
The thesis statement is analytical, not factual; it conveys the author’s expert
opinion, or
assertion and avoids stating the obvious. It answers how and why questions.
The thesis statement is logical, precise, and reasonable.

The Introduction Paragraph: Strategies & Checklist:

The introduction paragraph in an essay of literary analysis functions as follows:

- It focuses the reader’s attention on the topic and arouses curiosity about what
you
have to say
- It specifies your subject and implies your attitude/tone
- It provides background necessary to understand the thesis statement
- It is concise and sincere
- It comes to a point with the thesis statement

Anatomy of the Introduction:

1st Sentence: Hook or Opening Sentence

- Engages the reader’s attention
2nd – 3rd Sentence
- Should mention the author’s complete name
and the complete title of the work being
analyzed
3rd - 5th Sentences
- Function to transition ideas from hook to thesis
Thesis Statement
- Final sentence(s) of the introduction paragraph
Strategies for Composing Hooks or Opening Statements:
- Use a vivid quotation
- Create a visual image that represents your subject
- Create an analogy for your subject
- Offer a surprising/interesting statistic or other fact
- State an opinion related to your thesis
- Ask a question or define a word central to your subject (Note= Use these
techniques very sparingly and cautiously, as they may be considered cliché)

Consider the following checklist when writing an introduction paragraph:

The opening sentence or hook engages the reader’s attention
The introduction avoids 1st person point of view, slang, and poor diction
Specific terms or language are clearly defined
Necessary background information is provided
The paragraph clearly and logically transitions from the hook to the
thesis statement
The thesis statement appears at the end of the introduction
The paragraph is clear, logical, and reasonable
Avoid vague/abstract language
Avoid an attempt to be cute, funny, or terribly clever
The introduction is usually 4 – 6 sentences (longer introductions tend
to ramble and detract from the topic)
Uses present tense verbs consistently

The Conclusion Paragraph: Strategies, Checklist, & Samples

The conclusion paragraph in a literary analysis essay functions as follows:

- It finishes off the essay and tells readers where the writer has brought them
- It restates the thesis and contains echoes of the introduction and body
paragraphs without listing the points covered in the essay
- It creates a broader implication of the ideas discussed and answers the
question “So what?”

Anatomy of the conclusion:

- The conclusion begins with a restatement of the thesis, not

a repetition, and gradually widens toward a final, broad
statement of implication
- Borrows from the body paragraphs, without being flatly
repetitive or listing points already covered
- Creates echoes of the introduction and body paragraphs
to reinforce analysis/ideas
- Moves outward with a statement that relates the
thesis to a broader implication so the reader can see it
in a larger perspective
Strategies for Composing Conclusions:
- Strike a note of hope or despair
- Give a symbolic or powerful fact/detail
- Create an analogy that relates your topic to a larger implication
- Give an especially compelling example
- Create a powerful visual image that represents your topic
- Use a meaningful quotation
- Recommend a course of action
- Echo the approach/language of the introduction
- Reference and make meaning of the title of the work you are analyzing

Consider the following checklist when writing a conclusion:

Avoid first person point of view, abstract/vague language, poor diction, and
slang
Avoid simply repeating the thesis and/or listing the main points
Don’t conclude more than you reasonably can from the evidence you have
presented
Echo the language/ideas from your introduction and body paragraphs
Expand on the implications of your ideas—So what?
Avoid any attempts to be funny, cute, or clever
The conclusion is usually 4 – 6 sentences

Paper Format and Titles

Margins:
In MLA format the margins are as follows:

Top: ½ inch
Left: 1 inch
Right: 1 inch
Bottom: 1 inch

Spacing:
All MLA style papers are double spaced throughout.

Heading and Title:

- An MLA paper does not need a title page.
- ½” down from the top of each page and in the right hand corner is located the
page number followed by the author’s last name and a space
- 1” down from the top (and one double space down from the page number) in
the left hand corner appears the authors name (first and last)
- One double space below the author’s name is the name of the professor or
instructor
- One double space below the professor’s name is the class title and/or course
number
 - One double space below the course information is the date the assignment is
due, listed in the following order: date, then month, followed by year (no
commas)
- One double space below the date, centered in the page, is the title of the
paper.

Titles:

- A title tells the reader how extensive the topic is

- A title should not restate the assignment or thesis statement
- The revision stage is a good time to consider a title because attempting to
sum up your essay in a phrase can focus your attention on the topic, purpose,
and audience
- A descriptive title is often expected for academic writing—it announces the
topic clearly, accurately, and as briefly as possible
- Avoid trying to be funny, cute, or terribly clever in your title