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Gialanella
ENGL 2030-014
5 October 2018
1.) The main idea of Jacques’ paper is to view the question “How does crony capitalism
affect the different facets of our society” in all views. Jacques premises is that “Crony
capitalism doesn’t just come in one awful flavor,” which shows that crony capitalism has
various effects rather than just one. Jacques presents rent seeking, regulatory capture, and
bribing to change the policy agenda as evidence of the various of crony capitalism.
2.) The question is divergent and conceptual because there is no single definitive answer to
how crony capitalism affects our society. The question is loaded towards the numerous
ways crony capitalism affects society but there is no paragraph refuting that crony
capitalism does not affect society. Besides the missing counter argument paragraph, the
3.) The subject of crony capitalism’s effects on society is narrowed enough to write about in
four to five pages. The topic is revolved around politics and may require background
knowledge on politics but the audience should have background knowledge on politics
4.) Steyn’s writing is efficient in getting to the point. For example once Jacques inserts a
piece of evidence on a way crony capitalism affects society, there is a sentence following
suggests new directions by suggesting the audience of the paper to pay more attention to
crony capitalism and realize that it has more effect on lives than one may think.
6.) I remember when I asked Jack Gialanella to write out all the to-be verbs on the board and
I think you kind of messed up here Jacques… I’m like 75% sure that ‘have’ was on that
list….
7.) The entire essay stays far away from opinions and holds a formal scientific tone
throughout. There is no opinions whatsoever, but the conclusion that life revolves around
8.) Steyn’s paper relies heavily on focus around politics affecting lives and the way crony
capitalism affects politics which results to crony capitalism affecting lives. I think the
sentences and paragraphs are structured great, but a little more could be explained on
9.) I find the concluding paragraph good because it doesn’t only summarize the main idea of
the paper but also leaves the reader with a message to take away from the paper.
10.) Jacques introduces a passionate voice around the subject as words with the a
negative connotation such as ‘hurting’ and ‘malicious’ are used when referring to crony
capitalism.
11.) The negative connotations goes away later in part 2, making the voice go from
rate this paper a 7 because it is professional and meets criteria on the short time we had
but obviously does not have the pages of evidence and premises that Popper provided.
13.) The paragraph right before the conclusion is less convincing than its potential
because I believe the purpose of that paragraph was to link how crony capitalism affects
society directly but uses only an example for those that have allergies and buy epipens
frequently. I suggest expanding on that paragraph to suit all audience (I have never
bought an epipen in my life) to see how crony capitalism affects their life.
14.) If I were to run this entire paper through text-to-speech, It would flow smoothly in
part 2 and part 1 would be a hilarious passionate section of the paper spoken in a
monotone voice.
15.) I question whether my paper rambles too much or whether the rambling helped
the reader get to the point I was trying to make. It makes me anxious to whether my