Hi, this is the story I have so far for my new character, what do you think?

“Eluf, behave, or the witch of the mountains will come and take you to feed her wolfs!” that’s the story
parents tell their children when they misbehave; the truth is, that even though Alwmia lived with a pack
of wolfs for a while, she’s not really their owner; she’s more of a friendly neighbor now (and occasionally
student).

Alwmia always wanted to understand the world around her, she spent her childhood investigating bugs,
cats, dogs, and any animal she could. Life was perfect for her and her family in Shimmerene; she would
become an alchemist just like her mother, and would help in her father’s shop “Elixirium”.

But everything changed when Alwmia and her parents had to run away from the city of lights, and
without any explanation, go to Cyrodiil, a “safer place to race a family”. Alwmia missed Shimmerene, her
friends, her pets, everything; so she decided to give herself a mission: to study and understand the
world around her.

Years passed before she felt prepared to travel around the continent and leave her parents, and many
more have passed since she left.