Student Error Log

Summary:

Sentences with Errors Description of Error/ Explanation and Remarks Correction

Correction Symbol
There existed grade inflation Sentence structure There is/are There was grade inflation at
at that time. that time.
exist

On average, students get Collocation Earn a GPA of On average, students earn a

GPA 3.0 at public schools GPA of 3.0 at public schools
and 3.3 at private schools. and 3.3 at private schools.

Students couldnt concentrate Verb tense Past tensepresent tense Students cant concentrate
mainly on learning mainly on learning.

According to a recent survey Noun--singular or plural Because of the number According to a recent survey
which was carried out by 30,000, there should be a which was carried out by
investigating 30,000 plural word form. investigating 30,000
freshman nationwide freshmen nationwide
Princeton University imposes Noun--singular or plural There should be a plural Princeton University imposes
limitations on the amount of word form. limitations on the amount of
A. As.

Short report:

Sentences with Errors Description of Error/ Explanation and Remarks Correction

Correction Symbol
The policies exerts Verb form Policies is a plural form. The policies exert appreciable
appreciable effects on effects on womens human
womens human rights rights

Why gender equality is so Sentence structure This is an interrogative Why is gender equality so
important that it should be an sentences important that it should be an
individual goal? individual goal?

After Peoples Republic of
China was funded,
government started to carry
out policies to eliminate
gender inequality.
Article There should be an article
before government
After Peoples Republic of
China was funded, the
government started to carry
out policies to eliminate
gender inequality.

Initially, traditional Chinese Collocation Have + adj. status Initially, traditional Chinese
society is male-dominated, society is male-dominated,
and women are at a low and women had low status.
status.