Grade 6 Instructional Writing Rubric* (Last Revised 11/1/2012)
Aligned to Next Generation West Virginia Content Standards and Objectives for English Language Arts and Literacy
Smarter Balanced Claim 2: Students can produce effective and well-grounded writing for a range of purposes and audiences.
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Exemplary Exceeds Standard
Purpose/FocusStatement of
The writer
effectively and consistently focuses
on a clearly identified purpose and
topic throughout
effectively introduces claim(s)
The writer
uses a clear organizational structure
that effectively and clearly sequences
claims, reasons and evidence
creating unity
Organization
effectively and consistently uses a
variety of transition words, phrases
and clauses, along with varied syntax,
to:
o effectively clarify relationships
among claim(s) and reasons
provides an effective introduction
provides a powerful conclusion that
follows from and effectively supports
the argument presented
of EvidenceElaborationnt:Developme
The writer
effectively supports claim(s) with
logical reasoning
supplies thorough and convincing
support/evidence with many relevant:
o facts
o definitions
o concrete details
o quotations/other information
o strong examples
effectively uses a variety of
elaborative techniques
effectively uses evidence from
sources that is smoothly integrated,
comprehensive and concrete
ARGUMENTATIVE
Proficient Meets Standard
The writer
adequately focuses on an identified
purpose and topic
adequately introduces claim(s)
The writer
uses an evident organizational
structure that adequately sequences
claims, reasons and evidence
creating a sense of completeness
adequately uses variety of transition
words, phrases and clauses, along
with some variation in syntax, to:
o adequately clarify relationships
among claim(s) and reasons
provides an adequate introduction
provides a conclusion that follows
from and adequately supports the
argument presented
The writer
adequately supports claim(s) with
logical reasoning
supplies adequate support/evidence
with sufficient relevant:
o facts
o definitions
o concrete details
o quotations/other information
o sufficient examples
adequately uses some elaborative
techniques
adequately uses some evidence from
sources that is integrated, though
citations may be general or imprecise
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Partial Approaches Standard
The writer
somewhat focuses on an identified
purpose and topic
introduces claim(s), but claim(s) may
be unclear and unfocused
The writer
uses an inconsistent organizational
structure that partially sequences
claims, reasons and evidence with
some evident flaws
inconsistently uses basic transition
words, phrases or clauses with little
variety and simple syntax to
o partially clarify relationships
among claim(s) and reasons
provides a limited introduction
provides a conclusion that partially
and weakly supports the argument
presented
The writer
partially supports claim(s) with
somewhat logical reasoning
supplies some relevant
support/evidence:
o facts
o details
o quotations
o examples
uses weak or uneven elaborative
techniques
uses evidence from sources that is
weakly integrated, and citations, if
present, are uneven
Minimal Begins Standard
The writer
shows a minimal focus on purpose
and topic, and response may be very
brief
shows an attempt to introduce
claim(s), but claim(s) may be
confusing or ambiguous
The writer
uses little or no discernible
organizational structure
uses few or no transition words,
phrases or clauses (limited language
structures) with frequent extraneous
ideas that may intrude
provides a minimal or no introduction
does not provide a conclusion that
supports the argument presented
The writer
attempts to develop claim(s) but
without logical reasoning
provides little or no relevant
support/evidence:
o facts
o details
o quotations
o examples
uses little or no elaborative
techniques
uses little or no evidence from
sources or evidence that is erroneous
or irrelevant
 VocabularyLanguage and
The writer
clearly and effectively expresses
ideas, using precise words, phrases
and clauses to manage the logic and
clarity of the argument
uses academic and domain-specific
vocabulary that is clearly appropriate
for the audience and purpose
effectively establishes and maintains
a formal style
The writer
demonstrates an effective command
of conventions:
o demonstrates effective use of
capitalization, punctuation, and
spelling, with insignificant errors
that need little or no editing:
commas, parentheses,
dashes to set off
nonrestrictive/parenthetical
elements
o demonstrates few, if any, errors
in grammar and usage:
Conventions
effective and mostly correct
use of pronouns in proper
case
subjective
objective
possessive
effective and mostly correct
use of intensive pronouns
almost always recognizes
and corrects inappropriate
shifts in pronoun
number/person
almost always recognizes
and corrects vague
pronouns
o demonstrates few, if any, errors
in sentence formation
*This instructional writing rubric is designed as an instructional tool for teachers and students to use as they begin implementation of the Next Generation WV Content Standards and Objectives in the classroom. The existing
WV Writing Rubric, aligned to the 21st Century WV Content Standards and Objectives, will continue to be used to assess student writing produced for WESTEST 2 Online Writing, a component of WESTEST 2, through 2014.
Classroom teachers, schools and school systems implementing the Next Generation Content Standards prior to 2014 should use this instructional rubric to assess student growth in writing relevant to the expectations set forth
in the Next Generation Standards prior to 2014-15 when the SMARTER Balanced Assessment is scheduled to be administered as the state summative assessment.
The writer
adequately expresses ideas,
employing a mix of precise with more
general words, phrases and clauses
to support the logic of the argument
uses domain-specific vocabulary that
is generally appropriate for the
audience and purpose
adequately establishes and maintains
a formal style
The writer
demonstrates an adequate command
of conventions:
o demonstrates adequate use of
capitalization, punctuation, and
spelling, with few errors that need
editing but do not detract from
the narrative:
commas, parentheses,
dashes to set off
nonrestrictive/parenthetical
elements
o demonstrates some minor errors
in grammar and usage:
adequate and frequently
correct use of pronouns in
proper case
subjective
objective
possessive
adequate use of intensive
pronouns
frequently recognizes and
corrects inappropriate shifts
in pronoun number/person
frequently recognizes and
corrects vague pronouns
o demonstrates some minor errors
in sentence formation
The writer
unevenly expresses ideas, using
simplistic words, phrases and clauses
to support the logic of the argument
uses domain-specific vocabulary that
may at times be inappropriate for the
audience and purpose
partially establishes a formal style
The writer
demonstrates a partial command of
conventions:
o demonstrates inconsistent use of
capitalization, punctuation, and
spelling, with frequent errors that
need editing to clarify the
narrative:
commas, parentheses,
dashes to set off
nonrestrictive/parenthetical
elements
o demonstrates frequent errors in
grammar and usage:
inconsistent use of pronouns
in proper case
subjective
objective
possessive
inconsistent use of intensive
pronouns
sometimes recognizes and
corrects inappropriate shifts
in pronoun number/person
sometimes recognizes and
corrects vague pronouns
o demonstrates frequent errors in
sentence formation
The writer
expresses vague, unclear or
confusing ideas, rarely using words,
phrases and clauses that support the
argument
uses limited language or domain-
specific vocabulary
rarely establishes a formal style
The writer
demonstrates a lack of command of
conventions
o demonstrates incorrect use of
capitalization, punctuation, and
spelling, with frequent and severe
errors that need editing to convey
the narrative:
commas, parentheses,
dashes to set off
nonrestrictive/parenthetical
elements
o demonstrates frequent and
severe errors in grammar and
usage:
pronouns are not in proper
case
subjective
objective
possessive
incorrect use of intensive
pronouns
does not recognize and
correct inappropriate shifts in
pronoun number and person
does not recognize and
correct vague pronouns
o demonstrates frequent and
severe errors sentence formation