Name: Yasar Ahsan.

Class: 10, Section: 4.

Teacher: Mr. Janosch.

Colonialism Essay

In the world here lives different varieties of civilization, there are human beings,

animals and plants etc. As everyday human beings are advancing towards the future

and trying to achieve the peak point of technology as by progressing. There are

different kinds of countries in the world and which the people are trying their best to

reach one another or reaching for their own goals, but there is a recent finding of

civilization which seems to be unusually interesting for this time. On Monday, January

12th on an island in the Atlantic Ocean, as researchers observed the habits and culture

of new indigenous group of civilization called UnItopia. It has been witnessed that the

Utopians have lack of education, technology, medication, and knowledge. As we are

human beings and which we must help each other, as the Unitopians are way behind

normal civilization and which we must help them induce from the darkness by

colonization. Colonization could help the natives by introducing towards new culture,

knowledge and technology which afterwards will help them reach recent civilization or

even go beyond.

As it has been witnessed that the Unitopians have a complex spoken, but no written

language. Which it shows that the Unitopians have the intelligence of using complex

language and if colonization happens they could be given education and due to their

intelligence they may brightly stand up to be an improving community. A similar example

could be shown from a novel called Things Fall Apart by Chinua Achebe which it
defines He went back to the Church and told Mr. Kiaga that he had decided to go

Umuofia where the white missionary had set up a school teaching young christians to

read and write. (Things Fall Apart by Chinua Achebe, Ch-17, Pg-152, Date published-

1994) the quote defines a great leader of Umuofia called Okonkwo as his son Nwoye

decides to join the christian school where he could read and write, due to being called a

lady at Umuofia and indeed due to the education he took Nwoye became a teacher

later. So, colonization will definitely help the Unitopians seek towards a brighter future

by education.

The Unitopians are facing problems being incapable of solving sickness and doesnt

have proper medication. The Unitopians are not capable of curing chicken pox and

which are curable diseases, which they are facing mass amount of death for those

curable diseases. Which I suggest colonization is required so that those innocent souls

are dying due to lack of medication and which we human beings must help them by

giving them knowledge about medication, which will be capable of saving their lives. A

similar situation was seen from a movie which will help the natives is from Avatar by

James Cameron which is SELFRIDGE (contd): We try to give them medicine and

education. Roads! (Avatar by James Cameron, published: 2009) as the quote

describes the humans being are trying to help the aliens Navis by giving them

education and medicine, but in other hand they didnt give them the resources they

wanted and which the human being were not pleased. Colonization is required because

the people need help with medication and their lives are on the risk.
 It has been discovered by the Unitopians that they have a complex communities and

their government seems to be run by a group of women by their tribe, which shows that

they have a government but they have complicated societies and which most tribes

believe women are superior and give charges but the world is equal and every gender

should be given superior roles. Colonization should happen because it will them to build

a prosperous and strong government which will guide the community to a better

direction and will show each gender are equal. A quote from The Real White Mans

Burden by Rudyard Kipling which express about freedom, as it displays And teach the

Philippines What interest and taxes are And what mortgage means(The Real White

Mans Burden by Rudyard Kipling, published: 1899) as the quote is defining that before

America was trying to colonize Philippine at 1899 and either than helping which

America was using the natives and torturing, the author is trying to describe which

America shouldnt take advantage and as they should help them to build a government

and laws. Colonization should happen due to the fact Unitopia is out of range from other

countries, which they need intensive care to build their community by creating a

government and which will help them standing up with their own feet, which other

countries couldnt take the advantage out of them.

As we are human being and must play the role of helping the Unitopians by colonizing

which help them afterwards and help them build a strong community which will indeed

succeed in catching up with recent civilization or even they will lead their of going

beyond others. As to build a proper which they need education to give knowledge to the

natives, give them the knowledge or provide medicine which will help them to cure
themselves from delicate or serious diseases and help them build a strong government

which will help them lead their own path and will not let other countries to take

advantage of them. So, as we are human being and which we must decide a wealthy

and ingenious country which they will not take advantage from the natives, as they

should aid them with proper guidance and creating them a community, which later the

world shall know them by Unitopia and considered to be a powerful nation.

 WORK CITED

The Real White Mans Burden, Rudyard Kipling

Movie: AVATAR, James Cameron
Things Fall Apart, Chinua Achebe

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