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Figure 1. Comparison of deadly Albuquerque Police shootings per 100,000 people. From
the chart below we can see that The Albuquerque Police Department deadly shooting is
twice the rate of Chicago Police per capita in the and eight times as much as
the New York Police Department since 2010.
Source: @krqe. "Comparison: APD Shoots, Kills More than Other Agencies." KRQE News
Albuquerque
Chicago
New York
Source: @krqe. "Comparison: APD Shoots, Kills More than Other Agencies." KRQE News
13. N.p., 2015. Web. 08 Dec. 2016.
Albuquerque
Chicago
New York
Based off of the graph in figure 2 you can see that Albuquerque has considerably low
numbers in comparison to these two major cities but keep in mind that the population size of these
cities is off the charts compared to that of Albuquerque so it is normal to expect these places to
have more police shooting and deaths than Albuquerque. 29% of the police shootings in Chicago
and New York resulted in death since the year 2010 but surprisingly for the Albuquerque Police
Department 70% of the shootings were fatal. When the citizens of Albuquerque and federal
government look at these rates its rises the question if the policemen in Albuquerque are on a
shooting rampage.
Figure 3. shows us a comparison of the percentage of deaths per police shooting from
different police organizations. Even though Chicago and New York have less more
deaths and shootings compare to Albuquerque their death rate is a lot lower than that
of the APD. You can conclude from this graph that police from Chicago and New York
might be better trained to take down people when they have to resort to shooting them.
The student learning outcome I would say I have used for this assignment and all my assignment
in English 219 is Analyze Rhetorical Situation: this student learning outcome is the ability to
analyze rhetorical situations. This means that you will be able to make choices that will allow
you to write as effectively as possible to your audience. This in my opinion is the most important
out of all the student learning outcomes and I say this because I have used it for all my
assignment. This is very import because you have to carefully examine every single situation
provided to you in order to write effectively. You must look for your audience and look at the
situation in order to effectively organize your writing for your audience and for the situation.
In my Analytical report my intended audience was the Albuquerque Police Department because
the issue I found was about them, I made them my audience because I figured that if I could
show them charts and graphs with information on the issue I could have an impact on them to
take my report into consideration and fix the issue. Since my audience was the APD I compared
their number and rate of deadly shootings to that of other police departments in the United States
to show them where they stand with these other departments. This is how I carefully examined
my audience and the rhetorical situation so that I could effectively deliver this analytical report to
the APD.
For the final draft of this analytical report I believe the purpose of the methodology I
created for this assignment was to help me get an understanding of what local problem I
wanted to research and how I would provide the information along with a
recommendation the the problem. The purpose of the report was to help me get a better
understanding of the details and information I would need in order to write my final draft,
I have to look at different sources and evidence and see if they were reliable for my final
draft. I added more information and did more research based off of my first report to
finalize my writing.
The visuals I incorporated to my report where graphs I designed based off of facts and
reports of police shootings from the Albuquerque Police Department, the Chicago Police
Department, and the New York Police Department. I used these graphs to give my
audience a good idea of where they stand in comparison to other departments.
If I had more time and resources I would add a lot more complex and precise graphs and
charts in order to look at the actual rate of deadly shootings of the APD compared to that
of other departments. I would also try to get all information from all the departments in
United States and see where the Albuquerque Police department stands compared to
them. This would take me up to a year to do because I would not only be looking at
online sources but also do my own investigation by asking eye witnesses for their first
and second hand accounts in order to deliver a professional and well thought out
Analytical report.