Writer: Dylan Lannie

Reader: Thomas McCullough

Assignment: Peer Review for My Meaningful Life
Date: 10.5.2016

Three Step Response

Velcro Words and Phrases

"Share," "Joy," "Happiness," "Friendships"

"Helping children whether it be with school work, a sport or growing as
a better person has been something that has really stuck out to me in my life"
"...without family I am nothing, literally."

Feelings

Nostalgic, curious, gloomy, then upbeat, optimistic

Questions
What lessons can you take away from your time working with children that could help
you in the future? What goals do you have that can help you continue to develop a
meaningful life as you grow older?

Writer: Dylan Lannie

Reader: Kaleb Dato
Assignment: Peer Review
Date: 10/5/16

Three Step Response

1

Velcro Words and Phrases: Bringing happiness to others/ really start to look up to you
as a role model and a mentor./Role model/Mentor/Family/gaming

2.

Feelings: Passionate, loving, delighted, lively

3.

Questions: When did you know that you liked wrestling? Will you still maintain good

relationships with you family after you graduate college? What other types of videogames have
you played and which ones are you favorite?

Writer: Kaleb Dato

Reader: Dylan Lannie
Assignment: Peer Review
Date: 10/5/2016

Three Step Response

1.

Velcro Words and Phrases

Loyalty
Equality
Cooperation
Altruistic
Caring about others rather than yourself all the time leads into selflessness
I believe all people no matter the color of their skin, their socio-economic background, or

even their sexual orientation should be treated with equal respect and dignity
Stay faithful and trustworthy
I love to work with people
Magna cum laude honors
People who are filled with hate still have goodness
Group of people who value your opinions and always are there for you
The way I communicate to my friends and family is different than how I communicate to

strangers
Benefit the world by helping other people
I can inspire people
Gives a sense of purpose and self-worth

2. Feelings
Understanding
Encouraged
Optimistic
Thankful
Thrilled

Trusting
Inspired

3. Questions
What does altruism mean?
What stuff kind of things do you do where you work with other people?
How often do you exercise in a week?
Do you have a favorite area in history that you like to study?
Specifically, how do your relationships differ between friends and family?
How are you going to inspire others to do good?
Where do you see yourself job wise with your major?
Are you looking to start your own family?
How often do you socialize with friends?
Where do you see yourself in 15 years in relation to your goals?

Writer: Thomas McCullough III

Reader: Dylan Lannie
Assignment: Peer Editing
Date: 10/5/16

Three Step Response

4. Velcro Words and Phrases

A meaningful life is directly connected to success

Legacy you leave behind
He changed the world
The ones who strive to do the most
Work your hardest
Inventing your own unique solutions and in case sharing them with the world
Perspective Wisdom
An open mind that can accept new information
Innovation
Everyone has the same equal ability to think
I won the North Carolina state championship in Graphic Design
Just short of the 5 minute minimum
Negative experiences are just as or even more important
Your achievement has brought meaning to your hard work
How you conducted yourself
Positive impact
The best things to ever happen to me have almost always been unplanned or

unexpected
Any life can be made meaningful

5. Feelings
Amazed and Inspired
Compassionate
Sympathetic
Moved
Empowered
Surprised
Enthusiastic
intrigued

6. Questions
What field of computer science are you going to get your masters in?
I know nothing of how the scoring of a graphic design national championship

works, is losing a 100 points a lot to lose?

Does that incident at the nationals for graphic design motivate you?
What is your online community you started? And is it still up?
How did the car accident change you to define what your goals are now?
Are you planning on doing anything in the future for your career that will give
you the option to help the community a lot like how you did with your website?