Mapa Institute of Technology

School of Chemical Engineering and Chemistry

Undergraduate Research/Thesis

Summary of Revision
Group Members

Student Number

Course and Year

Firstname MI. Lastname

Firstname MI. Lastname

Nature of Revision

Previous

Revision/s Made

Inclusion of figure

No 3D graph for the

effect of three
parameters for
degradation and COD

Clarification of
objectives

Specify the main

objective

Table orientation

Table 2.2 must have a

landscape orientation

Figure orientation

Figure 3.4,3.5, 3.6 and

3.7must have a vertical
orientation

Figure location

Transfer figures of COD

set-up in the appendix

Created the two 3D

graph for the
degradation and
COD
Removed
optimization as
objective; only the
effect of pH,
nanoparticles and
hydrogen peroxide
on the degradation.
Changed the
orientation of the
table
Changed orientation
of all the figure
mentioned.
Added figures of
COD set-up in the
appendix
Changed the label of
the figure
mentioned
Compared the
results with previous
study
Italicized all et al
references
Changed into upper
right position

The label of figure3.9,

3.10, and 3.11 not
clearly stated
Did not compare the
results with other
existing methods

Figure label
Improvement of
discussion
format

Format of et al

pagination

Centered page number

Page
Reflected
45, 48

3, 36

9, 10
78, 79
78, 79
45, 48, 50
50
All
All

Approved by:
Firstname MI. Lastname

Firstname MI. Lastname

Thesis Adviser

Course Adviser