Review draft 2

GRADEMARK REPORT
FINAL GRADE

GENERAL COMMENTS

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Instructor

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Comment 1
See my comments in your f irst draf t.

Comment 2
I'm waiting.
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You
Avoid 2nd person the pronouns (you & your) in academic essays because they directly address
a reader, and you want to keep your essays directed towards a general audience. Use
addresses such as one, an individual, people, a person, etc. Or, be specif ic: teachers,
conductors, nurses, etc.

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Thesis Statement Issue

See pages 27-31 in the Hacker handbook and review the hallmarks of an ef f ective thesis
statement.

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Ital.
Italicize

Missing ","

You may need to place a comma af ter this word.

Compound

T hese two words should be written as one compound word.

Possessive

T his word may be a plural noun and may not need an apostrophe.

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Improper Citation
Improper citation:
Improperly cited material. Please use the link below to f ind links to inf ormation regarding specif ic
citation styles: http://www.plagiarism.org/plag_article_citation_styles.html

Hyph.

You may need to add a hyphen between these two words.

Missing ","

You may need to place a comma af ter this word.

S/V

T his subject and verb may not agree. Proof read the sentence to make sure the subject agrees
with the verb.

Missing ","

You may need to place a comma af ter this word.

Missing ","

You may need to place a comma af ter this word.