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Ask yourself:
Will a parent reading your comments:
understand clearly how well his/her child is
achieving in your class/subject?
understand that his/her child has an area(s) of
strength?
understand the area(s) for improvement?
understand how they can help? (This might also
include ways the child can take some
responsibility for his/her improvement and/or
ways the parent(s) can support).
DEECD, November 2014
Strengths
Suggestion
Area for
improvement
Original comment:
Madac demonstrates achievement with good understanding of the math outcomes addressed this term. He
independently reads and represents whole numbers and clearly demonstrates an understanding of place
value to millions. Madac continues to develop the ability to order large numbers from least to greatest. To
improve this skill, he is encouraged to ensure he is looking at each specific digit in a number (i.e. 5 in 653
862) and thinking about its place and value as he writes them. Madac has a good understanding of
multiplication and division and is able to solve problems with these operations. He sometimes makes minor
errors in his computations and is encouraged to regularly check his answers to ensure they are reasonable.
(character count 729)
Revised comment:
Madac demonstrates achievement with good understanding of the math outcomes taught this term. He
understands how to read and use whole numbers. Madac understands place value up to the millions. He
continues to develop the ability to order large numbers from least to greatest. To improve this skill, he is
encouraged to ensure he is looking at each digit in a number and think about its place and value as he writes
them. For example, the 5 in the number 653 862 is in the 10 thousands place and means 50 thousand.
Madac has a good understanding of multiplication and division and is able to solve problems with these
operations. He sometimes makes minor errors in his computations and is encouraged to check his answers
to ensure they are reasonable.
(character count 748)
Dawn has a good overall understanding of the concepts taught in this course. She is
successful with measurement, basic algebra skills (manipulation of numbers and
variables) and financial math. Dawn finds it challenging to apply her knowledge to
real life problem solving situations. Additional practice applying basic algebra skills
in such situations will help her build confidence in applying what she knows to new
problem solving situations. (character count 446)
Original comment:
Ryan demonstrates a thorough understanding of the outcomes in French
Language Arts this term. He appreciates and understands the cultural influences
of the French Language. Ryan confidently converses in French within the
classroom setting. He uses a variety of strategies for generating ideas in writing,
including cartooning and sketching. Ryan is using a variety of sentence patterns
and word choices to make his writing appealing to the reader. He has an intuitive
understanding when reading and viewing the French language and is able to
apply the same strategies used in English Language Arts to his French material.
Ryan is encouraged to seek out more complex text and materials to read in the
French language as a way of challenging himself and further extending his
reading repertoire. (character count 796)
Points to consider when reading this comment:
Are there areas where concrete examples would provide clarification (i.e. cultural influences)?
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