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The zoo visit

On the holidays I went to the zoo. First we got our ticket at the gate. Next we walked around and looked at the animals. I saw a tiger with babies. Then we ate lunch. Finally we cort the ferry to our home. I had a fun day.

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Our Zoo Visit During the holidays I visited the Zoo. First mum paid for our tickit at the gate. I also got a map to see where the animals live. Next we walked around and looked at the animals. I saw a big tiger with cute babies. Then we ate lunch. We sat near the monkeys because we wanted to watch them eat their lunche too. Finally we cort the ferry to home and I fell asleep. I really enjoyed the visit because the baby tigers were really cute.

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Our Family Visit to Taronga Zoo

During the holidays I visited Taronga Zoo with my family. First mum paid for our ticket at the gate. I also got a map to see where the animals live I really wanted to see the elephants so we went there straight away. Next we walked around and looked at the other animals. I saw a big tiger. She had cute babies but they were asleep because tigers are nocturnal and sleep all day! Then we ate lunch. We sat near the monkeys because we wanted to watch them eat their lunch too. Mum kept lafing at the monkeys throwing grass at each other. Finally we walked down to the ferry stop and caught the ferry to home.

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