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Contents
Introduction
PETER HÜHN . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1
18TH CENTURY
Daniel Defoe: Moll Flanders (1722)
KATRIN KROLL. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 49
CONTEMPORARY
John Fowles: “The Enigma” (1974)
PETER H Ü H N . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 175
Conclusion
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1 Introduction
Peter Hühn
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1 This is basically the definition adopted, e.g., by Prince (2008: 19): “an object is a narrative if
it is taken to be the logically consistent representation of at least two asynchronous events
that do not presuppose or imply each other”.
2 See e.g. Genette (1980), Chatman (1990), Tomashevsky (1965), Rimmon-Kenan (2002),
Abbott (2002). For a critical overview of these narrative parameters and a useful discussion
of their theoretical difficulties and problems cf. Pier (2003).
3 See e.g. Sternberg (2001: 115f.) and, generally, Sternberg (1990; 1992).
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4 These genres might be called proto-narrative. To become fully narrative a link with the
attribution to a character is required.
5 Bruner (1991: 11–13).
6 Cf. Pratt’s (1977: 136, 144ff.) application of this notion to literary texts. Cf. Prince (2003:
97, 83; 2008: 2325). Fludernik (2003b: 245–46) refers to the dynamics between narrativity
and tellability or point, drawing on Labov and other discourse analysts. Though based on
her specific concept of natural narratology and experientiality, her notion that events
(“points”) do not constitute narrativity in themselves but only through their emotional and
evaluative overload can be linked to the approach adopted here for a description of event-
fulness.
7 The basic requirement of a “point” for narratives has been most extensively discussed by
scholars analysing everyday or “natural” storytelling: cf. Labov & Waletzky (1967), Labov
(1972); Ochs & Capps (2001); Prince (1983). Pratt (1977: 51ff., 136, 144ff.) discusses this
point by applying Grice’s maxims to literature, especially to novels: she analyses the “dis-
play text” (i.e. the thematisation of the unusual), tracing the similarity between novels and
natural narratives in this respect to the notions of the detachability of the display text and
its susceptibility to elaboration.
8 Cf. Hühn & Kiefer (2005).
Introduction 3
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9 Cf. the general overview of dimensions and aspects of tellability provided by Ryan (2005:
589–94) and Prince (2008: 2325).
10 These two senses can be distinguished as an extensional and an intensional definition of
narrativity – see Prince (2008: 20).
11 Cf. Prince (1983), who discusses message and point as part of narrative pragmatics. He
links the term “point” (pointless vs. pointed) to the phenomenon of relevance and stresses
its context-dependence under two aspects: for the text and for the receiver. The need for a
reconstruction of the context for the receiver is due to the fact that literary texts are not
closely tied to the context of their production (534). Polanyi (1979: 209) seeks to answer
the question “What do Americans tell stories about?”, using point (the noteworthy, the
narratable, the interesting) as the main focus. The point of narrative, she argues, emerges
from context reference, which is dependent on narrative or event structure (time), descrip-
tive structure (material) and, most importantly, evaluative structure. She further distin-
guishes between the culturally interesting (with the broadest appeal, to the entire culture),
the socially interesting (appeal to a group) and the personally interesting, noting that the in-
teresting (in America) can be equated with the odd or the unexpected, the violation of a
norm (211–12), although it is highly variable from a cultural perspective.
12 For an (earlier) summary of the approach outlined in this introduction, see Hühn (2008).
For a general, comprehensive overview of aspects of event and eventfulness, see Hühn
(2009).
4 Peter Hühn
2. Modelling Eventfulness:
Schema Theory and Lotman’s Concept of Sujet
and the other arts (intertextual references 21 to literary models such as the
detective’s search for the solution of a mystery) 22 . Furthermore, there are
intratextual scripts which are established in the course of the work in
question itself (such as the chain of illusory triumphs over illusion in
Joyce’s Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man).
A narrative text that conforms closely to a schema is, however, not
noteworthy and therefore not eventful, since such a text only reproduces
what is already known and expected. Eventfulness thus involves departure
from a schematic pattern or script activated in the text. 23 Moreover, de-
parture from an established pattern may vary in degree by dint of being
more or less unexpected or exceptional, so that the concept of eventful-
ness is necessarily gradational. 24 Also to be taken into account are two
important conceptual consequences entailed in cognitivist theory. Sche-
mata (frames and scripts) are not inherent in textual structures in any on-
tological sense but must be inferred by the reader (and the literary critic)
from specific cues or signals in the text, activated in his or her mind on
the basis of his or her knowledge of the world, and correlated to the nar-
rative. 25 In addition, relevant schemata will vary both diachronically and
synchronically, the analysis of eventfulness thus involving identification
and specification of those schemata that can be shown to be culturally,
historically and generically germane: what counts as an event will thus
have to be assessed with reference to the context in terms of genre, 26
culture, social group, historical period and author. For texts from a remote
period and from a foreign culture, the relevant context in terms of world
knowledge has to be reconstructed carefully. Furthermore, since the actual
relevance of schemata and the status of events depend on the conscious-
ness of a perceiving subject for whom a schema is relevant and, conse-
quently, to whom an incident appears to be eventful, eventfulness will
vary in relation to the entity or level in the textual setup (protago-
nist/character, narrator, author or reader). Thus, a development may be
eventful for the protagonist or one of the other characters but not for the
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21 Cf. Pier (2004).
22 Cf. the analysis of Fowles’s “The Enigma” in the present volume (175î84).
23 See Herman (2002: 85–86).
24 Cf. Herman’s (2002: 86, 91, 100ff.) scalar definition of “narrativity” in contrast to the
binary category of “narrativehood”. Schmid (2003) also conceives of eventfulness as a gra-
dational category.
25 See Herman (2002: 91, 95–96): the text cues recipients to activate certain kinds of world
knowledge. See also Todorov (1977) and Barthes (1977).
26 Herman (2002: 105) describes genres as script-based macrodesigns; Pratt (1977: 86) speaks
about genres in terms of communicative conventions and felicity conditions. See also
Schaeffer (1989).
Introduction 7
narrator and the reader or vice versa, as in James Joyce’s short story
“Grace”. 27
The cognitivist description of eventfulness and tellability may be sup-
plemented by Lotman’s concept of sujet, which is centrally based on the
notion of the event. 28 Lotman, too, construes eventfulness as a departure
or deviation from a norm, the violation of an established order. He de-
scribes the basic normative order typically underlying a narrative text as a
“semantic field”, using metaphorically spatial terms. This semantic field is
sub-divided into two sub-fields (or sub-sets) by a boundary (or border) 29
which separates the scope of a particular set of features, norms and values
from the domain of a different order with opposite norms. In Samuel
Richardson’s novel Pamela 30 , for instance, the semantic field can be iden-
tified as the hierarchical structure of society split into the two sub-fields of
the lower (working) class and the aristocracy, which are defined by a con-
comitant set of contrastive features and norms: low vs. high status, poor
vs. rich, being required to work vs. enjoying a leisured existence, depend-
ent vs. independent (etc.). People belong to their respective class on ac-
count of their birth and origin. Crossing the boundary is normally impos-
sible or prohibited for the figures within this sub-field, and, if it occurs,
brought about by the protagonist (who thereby becomes a mobile figure),
this fact is something noteworthy or significant in itself and constitutes an
“event”. In Richardson’s novel, the servant-girl Pamela is finally married
by an aristocrat (on account of her superior morality and exemplary social
graces), thereby crossing the boundary between the two sub-fields, which
counts as highly eventful because practically exluded by the prevailing
social order. The elaboration of the semantic field and its binary subdivi-
sion is always culturally and historically specific î in this example condi-
tioned by the context of the contemporary class-structure in Britain. Like
Schmid, Lotman also defines events in gradational terms, since the extent
of “resistance” a boundary puts up to being crossed (i.e. its degree of in-
violability) conditions the degree of eventfulness.
Although the terms of “field”, “boundary” and “boundary crossing”
are not meant primarily spatially, but serve as metaphors for the modelling
of abstract normative orders (although changes and events in literary texts
do often manifest themselves in spatial form), Lotman’s terminology
tends to suggest arrangements that are too simple and too concrete. For a
more flexible and differentiated application of this approach, one must
take into account that these norms may be situated on various levels and
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27 Cf. the analysis of Joyce’s “Grace” in the present volume (125î32).
28 Lotman (1977: esp. 23340); cf. Shukman (1977).
29 These two terms are used as synonyms in the following analyses.
30 See the analysis in this volume (63î73).
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31 See the analysis in the present volume (87î103).
32 The need for just such a research programme into diachronic and synchronic variability is
mentioned by Herman (2002: 107–13; see also 86) and Fludernik (2003a).
Introduction 9
3. Types of Eventfulness
Events and the sequences in which they occur are usually ascribed to a
figure, either an agent or a patient, i.e. to a character who actively initiates
or passively undergoes a change. The decisive change can also occur in a
collective, a group of people (as the ship’s crew in Conrad’s The Nigger of
the ‘Narcissus’) or in the physical or social setting of a story (as the national
rebellion in Conrad’s Nostromo), but change of this kind will normally
have a subsequent impact in the form of changing fortunes, relations,
emotions and attitudes in one or more individuals. The causes of change
are an important issue: Individual changes can be caused by physical, so-
cial, interpersonal or psychological actions or occurrences (such as a flash
of revelation, epiphany or crisis). These individual sequences form differ-
ent storylines (or plotlines), which – in a long story or a novel – usually
interact and combine to produce the complex overall plot of the text.
Three types of event can be distinguished, 33 according to the level of
the narrative text on which the figure is located and on which the decisive
turn or deviation takes place or, more precisely, to which it is ascribed: 34
(a) events in the happenings or story-world events situated at the level of
histoire or story, within the narrated incidents, with the protagonist as
agent or patient (as, for instance, in Richardson’s Pamela, where the
change of the heroine’s social and marital status constitutes the event;
prototypical examples are fairy tales with the hero or heroine convention-
ally undergoing an eventful change); (b) presentation events, located at the
level of récit or discourse, with the narrator as protagonist who typically
experiences a change in his or her attitude or consciousness, constituting a
story of narration 35 (as, for instance, in Virginia Woolf’s “An Unwritten
Novel”, 36 where the narrator radically changes her concept of making
sense of other people by inventing stories about them; another example is
John le Carré’s The Russia House and the narrator’s eventful change of
attitude – in the course of his narration – from committed spy to critic of
the secret service); (c) reception events, located at the level of reading, with
the reader as agent; this type refers to cases where neither the protagonist
nor the narrator is able or willing to undergo a decisive change, which the
composition of the text (i.e. the implied author), however, signals as nec-
essary or desirable and which the (ideal) reader is meant to perform vi-
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33 See Hühn & Kiefer (2005: 246î51).
34 Stories and events do not exist in the world. Rather, they are constituted by the mediation
through discourse in the first place. But the text can ascribe them either to the story-world
or to the discourse level or else delegate them to the level of reception.
35 Cf. Schmid (1982; 2005: 18, 268f.).
36 See the analysis in the present volume (145î55).
10 Peter Hühn
cariously in his or her own consciousness 37 (as, for instance, in the short
stories of Joyce’s Dubliners 38 , where characters invariably fail to achieve
the eventful escape from the paralysing atmosphere of the city, an event
the reader is induced to perform in his or her mind instead; examples of a
different genre are jokes, which specifically require the reader to make the
necessary connections and discover the point).
This new approach to the plot analysis of narrative fiction from the aspect
of eventfulness as constitutive of narrative tellability is explored in fifteen
British novels, tales or short stories, i.e. examples taken from the corpus
of narrative fiction written in the British Isles. These analyses have a two-
fold aim: first, to investigate the form, place and (degree of) realization of
events within the narrative setup of the texts and, second, to determine
the relevant contexts (and their types) on which the eventfulness in each
case depends, and to trace changes (or continuities) of this context-
dependence through the course of history. The historical range of the
texts selected stretches from the late Middle Ages to the end of the 20th
century with a special focus on the transition from 19th-century Realism to
20th-century Modernism (Charles Dickens, Thomas Hardy, Henry James,
James Joyce, Joseph Conrad, Katherine Mansfield, Virginia Woolf, D. H.
Lawrence). This period is especially focused on because it is during these
decades that the notion of eventfulness, which still seemed largely intact
during the 18th century, was variously problematized and eroded. For the
sake of contrast, a small number of texts from different periods are
grouped around this focus: two texts from the early stages of English
fiction (Geoffrey Chaucer of the 14th, Aphra Behn of the 17th century) and
three novelists from the 18th century (Daniel Defoe, Samuel Richardson,
Henry Fielding) precede the transitional period around the turn of the 20th
century and two examples from the end of the last century (John Fowles,
Graham Swift) follow it. Most of the authors chosen belong to the canon
of English/British fiction.
The primary aim of the essays that follow is to demonstrate the
method of applying the analysis of eventfulness to texts of different struc-
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37 Of course, readers are always meant to re-create the eventful change mediated by a text in
their consciousness. But, in the case of reception events, the text refrains from narrating
the event so that readers are required to complete the eventful development in their minds
in direct contrast to what is narrated. Whether they actually do so is another matter.
38 See the analysis of “Grace” in the present volume (125î32).
Introduction 11
tures and from different periods and illustrate the benefits of this ap-
proach for an understanding of the plot-structure of these texts and its
dependence on various context features. They are intended as models of
how the approach outlined in this introduction could be put into practice,
and not to provide comprehensive interpretations on the basis of a de-
tailed discussion of previous assessments; references to criticism have
therefore been restricted to selected representative works.
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Introduction 13
Peter Hühn
The story in Chaucer’s verse tale, or, more accurately, fabliau 1 “The
Miller’s Tale” 2 encompasses four characters: three men (the carpenter
John, the student Nicholas and the parish clerk Absolon) and one woman
(John’s wife Alisoun), along with their actions. These actions are pre-
sented in the shape of three interwoven, event-containing plotlines, and
each of these plotlines is in fact constituted through the relation of occur-
rences (in the form of both actively initiated and passively experienced
incidents) to one of the three men as a protagonist. In contrast, Alisoun
does not underpin an eventful plot sequence. The three plotlines, each
related to one of the men, are constructed as analogous and competing in
that they are all – although in different ways – directed at Alisoun, so that
the woman represents the narrative object and, as such, merely reacts,
developing no narrative strand of her own.
The interweaving of the three plotlines is effected in the way they are
actionally and thus also chronologically correlated and embedded. The
base story is concerned with the carpenter and his emotional and intellec-
tual state, particularly his obsessive love for Alisoun, and the behaviour it
determines. In keeping with the conventions of the genre of the fabliau,
the characters are not complexly psychologized in the modern sense, but
are rather defined by a few attributes of personality and status. Thus the
carpenter is characterized as rich, old and jealous, good-tempered and
gullible. Decisive for the plot is first and foremost that he is governed by
his affects, namely by his excessive love for Alisoun, and that he does not
allow himself to be guided by reason or insight. Because of this, he is,
despite his age, tempted into marrying the pretty and sensual eighteen-
year-old Alisoun. This is, as the narrator explains at the outset (322732),
a mistake caused by a lack of insight and one which violates the relevant
code (the principle of equality as a basis for marriage). This comment
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1 On the characteristics of the “fabliau” genre, as well as on the partial deviation of “The
Miller’s Tale” from these, see below, ch. 3.
2 Text quoted from Robinson (1966: 4855). Translations from Hill (2007: 6474).
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3 “He knew not Cato (for his wit was rude), / Who bade men wed in some similitude; / Men
ought to mate with those of like condition, / For youth and age are oft in opposition”.
4 “since he had fallen in the snare, / He must endure, like other men, his care”.
5 “Skilled both in mirth and secret love he was; / And he was sly and subtle as could be”.
6 “wanton eye”.
7 “She granted him the love he asked at last”.
8 “For this was his desire and hers as well”.
9 “secret, discreet”.
Geoffrey Chaucer: “The Miller’s Tale” 19
ingenious ruse (“a wyle / This sely jalous housbonde to bigyle”, 3403f.) 10 .
The resultant difficulty of crossing the border and the strategy employed
by Nicholas to overcome it (predicting a flood, procuring and separately
hanging up kneading troughs) increase the eventfulness of the night they
spend together when it is finally realized, especially by means of the elabo-
ration of the joke with which the carpenter is deceived: “Withouten
wordes mo they goon to bedde / Ther as the carpenter is wont to lye”
(3650f.) 11 . With that, the love story, as it initially appears, reaches its suc-
cessful climax and is concluded.
The story of Nicholas’ courtship and seduction of Alisoun is then
contrasted with a rival’s – Absolon’s – courtship of Alisoun, introducing a
third plotline. The frame, erotic love, mirrors that of Nicholas’ story. The
script (courtship and the striving for gratification) is structurally similar in
both, though with characteristic cultural differences. Where Nicholas, in
his seduction techniques, is aggressive and unambiguously sexually inter-
ested (“and prively he caughte hire by the queynte”, 3275)12 , Absolon
orientates himself towards the cultivated form of the script of courtly
love, albeit in a highly, even grotesquely coarsened manner, with parodic
implications: he courts his beloved with guitar music and singing, inter
alia below her bedroom window (3352ff.), reacts to her indifference with
stylised heartache (“this joly Absolon / So woweth hire that hym is wo
bigon. / He waketh al the nyght and al the day”, 3372f.; 13 also 3658) and
finally requests the favour of a kiss (3680, 3714ff.). The parodic compo-
nents of his reference to this script reveal themselves in exaggerations and
inappropriateness; for example, that he pays court in the same way to all
the women in his vicinity, that he, during collection in church, does not
accept donations from women on principle (3349ff.), that he sometimes
courts Alisoun via middlemen and with gifts (of money) (3378ff.) and that
he places excessive importance on his fashionably elegant exterior and his
fine manners (“he was somdeel squaymous / Of farting, and of speche
daungerous”, 3337f.) 14 . As with Nicholas, the interweaving of plotlines
determines the difficulty in crossing the border and in the realization of
the event: the rivalry with the luckier Nicholas prevents Absolon’s suc-
cess: “She loveth so this hende Nicholas / That Absolon may blowe the
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10 “a subtle plot … This simple, jealous husband to deceive”.
11 “And with no further word they went to bed, / There where the carpenter was wont to
be”.
12 “And caught her stealthily between the thighs”.
13 “this jolly Absalon / So wooeth her, that she is woe-begone. He neither sleeps by night nor
yet by day”.
14 “the man was far from daring / In breaking wind, and in his speech was sparing”.
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bukkes horn” (3386f.) 15 . The contrast between the two competing plot-
lines, especially regarding the differences in the difficulty of crossing the
border, is underlined by the direct synchronisation (again with a slight
chronological staggering) of Nicholas’ success and Absolon’s failure: Ab-
solon undertakes a renewed, optimistic attempt at courtship on, of all
nights, Nicholas and Alisoun’s eventful night of passion. As a result of
this coincidence, the previous failure of his courtship worsens (clearly
because of a mischievousness caused by the sexual gratification of the
happy lovers) to become an explicit rejection (3709ff.) and subsequently a
humiliating duping by Alisoun (a kiss on her naked bottom, the so-called
“misdirected kiss”, 3720ff.).
This drastic prevention of the border crossing and denial of the event-
ful fulfilment of Absolon’s love plot produces in him an abrupt change in
frame and script, with the occurrence of a contrary positive event of a
different type: his fervent loving, not just for Alisoun but in general, is
completely extinguished (“Of paramours he sette nat a kers”, 3756)16 , and
he is healed 17 (“For he was heeled of his maladie”, 3757) 18 ; that is, he
suddenly gains insight into the falseness of his previous conduct and is
henceforth capable of assessing things correctly. 19 Absolon’s plotline is
thus framed in a new way and its polarity re-directed – from the erotic to a
cognitive dimension – and, in this respect, brought to an eventful conclu-
sion. This conclusion has the practical consequence that Absolon’s hard-
won insight turns him into a well-suited means, for his part, of punishing
false behaviour in others. This punishment is subjectively motivated as
revenge for the ignominy suffered (3746ff.) and this motivation is indeed
portrayed as problematic, in that he is even willing to sell his soul to Satan
for it (3750). 20 However, the motivation for an act of punishment clearly
must be separated from its function – in the sense of an overarching gov-
erning principle, so to speak – in the sanctioning of wrong behaviour.
While Alisoun’s trick appears to be justified, since she wants to take re-
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15 “it is Nicholas she loves, indeed, And Absalon may go and blow the horn”. Compare the
generalised explanation with a proverb in 3392f.
16 “He rated love not worth a piece of cress”.
17 Calabrese (1994) points to Ovid as the source for the mechanisms appearing here for
curing passionate love (recognition of drastic female physicality).
18 “He was clean purged of all his malady”.
19 The assumption of a cure is suggested by the narrator’s use of the term “maladie”, though
Absolon’s reaction of hysterical repugnance tends not to communicate the impression of
sobering insight. Cf. also Walker (2002: 78), who sees in Absolon a manifestation of child-
ishly immature ideas about female sexuality, as fostered in the context of the Marian cult
(89ff.).
20 Cf. Novelli (1968) on details of the conversion as well as Walker (2002) on the problemati-
zation of the cure aspect.
Geoffrey Chaucer: “The Miller’s Tale” 21
men, namely that their actions, guided by affect and not reason, contrib-
ute, obliquely and without their knowledge, to their punishment, establish
a form of poetic justice behind the backs of the characters.
“The Miller’s Tale” can basically be assigned to the genre of the fabliau (or
fablel), the genre, practised in the 13th and 14th centuries, particularly in
northern France, of the merry, frivolous and coarsely realistic verse tale,
using a sharp wit to lampoon the behaviour of stylised characters or
classes, mostly with an emphatically amoral tone and a tendency to sub-
version regarding the established moral and social order, especially in the
presentation of the gratification, with relish, of officially unaccepted urges
such as sexuality. 37 These specific features of the genre essentially deter-
mine the concrete burlesque circumstances of the plotlines in “The
Miller’s Tale”, i.e. the entirety of the erotic motifs used, the cunning of
the tricks and pranks, and the coarsely frivolous comedy of punishment. 38
As a result of this second contextual frame of reference, the conventions
of the genre, it initially appears that the hierarchical relation of the levels
of morality and eroticism has been inverted. This is because the genre-
specific comedy of this arrangement of themes has, by nature, the ten-
dency to undermine the relevance and seriousness of the cognitive-moral
dimension of eventfulness. 39 This shows itself, for instance, in the way the
central principles of human self-denial, particularly in the prohibition of
the investigation of God’s secret resolutions (“pryvetee”, 3454), are
coarsely attenuated by the incorporation of the same word into completely
different, ignoble contexts: for example when, in the prologue, God’s
secret is offhandedly equated with that of a wife (“An housbonde shal nat
been inquisityf / Of Goddes pryvetee, nor of his wyf”, 3163f.40 ), 41 or
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soun” [“divine reason”], IV.P6.61-63, Robinson 1966: 368) rules over the world: “O thow
Fadir, … that governeth this world by perdurable resoun” (III.M9.1-3, Robinson 1966:
350).
37 On Chaucer’s use of the conventions of the fabliau cf. e.g. Muscatine (1957), Cooper
(1991: 95ff.), Cooke (1978: 176184).
38 Cf. David (1976), 95ff., who sees a connection here with native traditions (of “festive
comedy”) and the carnivalesque (following Bakhtin).
39 Cf., by contrast, Cooke (1978: 183), who sees no contradiction here, but rather emphasises
the aesthetically satisfying balance of the denouement, which he does not see as moral.
Cooper (1991: 101ff.) and Kolve (1984: 160, 214f.) emphasise the removal of a moral sense
by the genre context of the fabliau. Kolve (1984: 158ff.) justifies these amoral tendencies
by the dominance of natural elements, the youthfulness of the characters and the playful-
ness of the piece.
40 “A husband should respect, upon his life, / The privacy of God and of his wife”.
26 Peter Hühn
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45 Kolve (1984: 215f.) briefly points out this self-regulating, immanent order.
46 Her amoral sensuality (as it is underlined by the accumulation of animal and plant meta-
phors in her desciption, 3233ff.) is even, in a sense, given acceptance and reward by the
plot.
28 Peter Hühn
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30 Peter Hühn
Aphra Behn’s tale Oroonoko 1 is, in many respects, shaped by the interfer-
ence of differing, partly contradictory, ideologies, normative systems, tra-
ditions and genres, especially that of heroic romance and a tendency to
realism, of an aristocratic code of honour and bourgeois acquisitiveness,
of a conservative adherence to social hierarchy and a progressive desire
for mobility and liberalism, of public, collective values and individualist,
private attitudes. 2 This internal contradictoriness is evident in the struc-
ture and course of the narrated story, with the discrepant superimposition
of a range of heterogeneous discourses onto a traditional script. 3 These
consist, on the whole, of possible references to contexts outside the work,
which constitute its specific meaning, on the one hand an intertextual
reference to a traditional genre (the script for the plot), and, on the other,
references to social or political normative and action systems within Eng-
lish society at the time (the varying discourses). As a result of the interac-
tion of these discourses, the eventfulness of the narrated story presents
itself in an ambivalent manner unusual for the period. The ambivalent
status of the event and the problem of its meaning are also decisively de-
termined by the way they are conveyed, through the attitudes, values and
commentaries of the narrator, who vouches emphatically for the truth of
the narrated happenings, but who is simultaneously (and opaquely) linked
closely to a number of these contradictory discourses.
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1 Edition used: Behn (1992: 73141).
2 See e.g. the listing of various aspects by Holmesland (2001); cf. also Ferguson (1994:
155ff.).
3 The term discourse will be used – provisionally and somewhat formulaically – in the fol-
lowing to denote a system of meanings, orders and norms, which is largely coherent in it-
self, and which determines the perception, interpretation and assessment of a socio-cultural
environment as well as the practical behaviour of the characters within it, i.e. connecting
language and behaviour. Discourses of this sort are established in contemporary (for the
author) extratextual reality – as those parts or segments of a period’s or society’s doxa that
apply to particular social domains – and form, in this sense, the context of the work, which
is to be reconstructed and consulted to facilitate a (historically) appropriate understanding.
The manifold literature on Oroonoko denotes these structures with various terms, such as
code, discourse, ideology, narrative.
32 Peter Hühn
The script underpinning the tale can be reconstructed as the classical plot
paradigm of the heroic romance’s love story, as it is found in the Greek
novels of late antiquity, in the French novels of the 17th century 4 , which
were also popular in contemporary England, as well as in the pastoral
novel 5 and also in English Renaissance drama. 6 In its basic elements, this
model concerns itself with the development of the love of an ideal couple
(or multiple couples), against resistance and through perils, until their
unification and marriage are finally achieved. Despite numerous variations,
the following three phases are prototypical of this romance script: firstly,
the original encounter of the lovers and genesis of their love; secondly, the
extended middle section, consisting of separation, threats, ensnarement
and, in general, the obstruction of their relationship, in which they prove
and preserve themselves with their steadfastness and their loyalty in their
love; thirdly, their eventual re-unification after the overcoming of all ob-
stacles. The dynamism of this script is produced by the conflict between
the passionate desire of the lovers to be united in marriage and the oppos-
ing circumstances of the world around them, which thwart this desire over
and again (in the form of coincidences, rivalries, envy, revenge etc.). The
lovers are physically, morally and socially outstanding representatives of
their gender and station: he brave and strong, she virtuous and steadfast,
both beautiful in their own way, both displaying perfect conduct and an
exemplary and also moral disposition. The ideals they embody are differ-
entiated by gender and are of an explicitly aristocratic nature. This is par-
ticularly evident in the characteristics represented by the man: chivalrous
courage and political capacity to rule as well as social dexterity, but also in
the dignity, grace, modesty and refinement of the woman. These ideal
characteristics, motivated by the strength and purity of their love for one
another, make it possible for them to overcome all obstacles and to with-
stand all attacks. The script clearly relates to a particular social and cul-
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4 As well as, incidentally, in the German Baroque novel.
5 Examples – Greek: Heliodorus’ Aethiopica (3rd century AD), Achilles Tatius’ Leucippe and
Clitophon (3rd century AD); French: Madeleine de Scudéry’s Artamène ou le grand Cyrus
(164953) and Clélie, histoire romaine (165460), Honoré d’Urfé’s L’Astrée (160727), La
Calprenède’s Cléopâtre (164758); English: Emanuel Ford’s The Most Pleasant History of
Ornatus and Artesia (1598?, 1634), George Mackenzie’s Aretina; or, The Serious Romance
(1660), Roger Boyle, Earl of Orrery’s Parthenissa (1654î76) as well as Thomas Lodge’s
Rosalynde, Euphues Golden Legacie (1590), the material for Shakespeare’s As You Like It.
6 Examples: Shakespeare’s As You Like It with a positive and Romeo and Juliet with a nega-
tive outcome. Brown’s reference to the “Herculean hero” and the aristocratic coterie thea-
tre, inter alia with the conflict between love and politics (188ff.), does not seem particularly
convincing, since he restricts his discussion to the figure of the hero.
Aphra Behn: Oroonoko 33
Oroonoko confronts this script with various social and economic struc-
tures, as well as corresponding normative systems, 8 by placing it in two
real geographical areas – the west African country Coramantien (the Gold
Coast, now Ghana) and the West Indian (at the time still English, and
shortly thereafter Dutch) colony of Surinam (now Suriname). As a result,
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7 Lotman (1977). Lotman contrasts the aesthetics of identity and the aesthetics of opposi-
tion.
8 Cf. the clear distinction between these areas in Rosenthal (2004: 152f.).
34 Peter Hühn
ity operates in Surinam, which aims at the selfless recognition and protec-
tion of man in his humanity. This code is often at odds with the society’s
political and economic values, but is not supported by everyone (and,
crucially, not by those in power).
The (realistic) element binding the two areas together, albeit with
characteristic differences between them, is slavery and the slave trade, i.e.
the systematic use of people as objects, as commodities and capital
goods. 12 Whereas slaves in Coramantien – as prisoners of war who have
been sold – represent booty and trophies from heroic, quasi-national hos-
tilities, and augment the honour of the victors, 13 i.e. principally function in
the aristocratic discourse, 14 in Surinam they serve primarily in the mercan-
tile discourse as an economic factor (a workforce) and as items of trade
that are bought according to need and cost. 15 In practice, the connection
between these two areas is established by slave traders, as exemplified by
the English captain who buys slaves in Coramantien and sells them in
Surinam, abiding by no moral norms whatsoever as he does so. Thus he
unscrupulously takes his trading partner, Oroonoko, captive as he tarries
on the ship, flagrantly breaking his word and enslaving him too. Slavery is
legal in both countries, though in Surinam it comes into conflict with the
moral discourse in certain circumstances, albeit only in cases of socially
high-ranking, educated slaves such as Oroonoko, “the royal slave”. Here
the aristocratic discourse again exerts influence through its value system,
which stems from England in the form of Royalist ideology and which
had asserted its validity in the conflicts of the civil war between Royalists
and Parliamentarians, with the eventual victory of the former in the Resto-
ration, and which interferes with other discourses in the trading and plan-
tation society of the colony. Its basis is adherence to the social hierarchy,
with the absolute authority and power of the king (cf. the allusions to
Charles I and Charles II, 80 and 115). This value system is now applied to
Oroonoko.
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12 Cf. the precise description in Rosenthal (2004: 152) and Lipking (2004).
13 The practice of slavery reflects the hierarchical social structure of Coramantien: only the
ordinary prisoners of war are sold into slavery; those of higher rank buy their freedom
(78f.).
14 Whereby the sale, as a commercial act, actually constitutes a contradiction of the feudal
principles, though it is not perceived as such.
15 Whereby the contradictory socio-political discourse is also involved here, in so far as the
planters are aristocrats and in that the Stuart kings also participate in the slave trade (see
below).
36 Peter Hühn
The two protagonists are portrayed as the ideal male and female embodi-
ments of exemplary characteristics (79ff.). Oroonoko is distinguished by
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16 As an example of a different event construction, cf. Visconsi (2002), who reads this turn of
events allegorically as the (anticipated) triumph of barbarism over civilisation in England.
17 The positive or negative event bound up with this script is, incidentally, not primarily
mental (as in later centuries), but manifests itself entirely physically and socially.
Aphra Behn: Oroonoko 37
his high birth (“prince” and the grandson of the king, thus “royal”), high-
est military leadership qualities and bravery (commander in chief after the
death of the old general), by his great beauty, sense of honour, magnanim-
ity, love of justice, extensive education and perfect manners (including the
European languages, taught by a French tutor), and combines martial
toughness and competence with fine sensibilities and an ability to love
(“as capable of love, as ’twas possible for a brave and galant man to be”,
81). As such, he represents the ideal of a universally educated and talented
aristocrat, something akin to the “uomo universale” of the Renaissance:
capable even of reigning well, and of governing as wisely, had a great soul, as
politic maxims, and was as sensible of power as any prince civilized in the most
refined schools of humanity and learning, or the most illustrious courts (81).
As the narrator emphasises, these are all core European values, so that
Oroonoko corresponds entirely to the image of the ideal English aristo-
crat, whereby his black skin colour signifies a merely superficial difference
(80f.). 18 Imoinda represents (equally conforming to European – again,
gender-specific – norms) the precise female ideal counterpart, with the
characteristics of high social station (daughter of the old general) and of
beauty, “modesty”, “softness” and ability to love as well as perfect man-
ners (“sweetness of her words and behaviour”, 82): “she was female to the
noble male; the beautiful black Venus, to our young Mars” (81). Their
initial encounters trigger spontaneous affection and love on both sides
and swiftly lead to marriage vows, which conform to European norms of
a permanent exclusive relationship (in contrast to African polygamy, 83).
This marriage needs only to be physically consummated after the obliga-
tory prior notification of the king.
It is at this point that the resistance and obstacles set in. The king, de-
spite being old and impotent (he is over 100), desires and claims Imoinda
for himself, and takes her into his harem, albeit a break with moral con-
ventions (the protected validity of an extant marriage, 85, 86), but also a
sign of his absolute power, superior to all other rights, according to the
absolute hierarchical structure. This prerogative signifies their separation,
but does not yet preclude a later honourable unification, as Imoinda’s
“virgin honour” (94) remains intact. After this, the lovers are brought
together twice more, albeit each time in strictly limited and restrictive
circumstances, which, although they make the physical consummation of
their love possible, deny them the recognition of their love as well as of
their personal rights and their social status. On the first occasion, they
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18 Cf. Brown (1999: 186ff.). In contrast, Gallagher (1996) makes the black skin the central
interpretative moment of the text in terms of three references (authorship, kingship, com-
modification), which seems to me to amount to an over-interpretation.
38 Peter Hühn
meet secretly in the king’s harem and consummate their love and their
marriage (94). This unification is, however, limited to that moment, must
be hidden and leads, because it is discovered, to a significant intensifica-
tion of their separation – a sign of the extreme inclemency of the first
field for their love: the king, now regarding Imoinda as “polluted” (96),
sells her into slavery while Oroonoko believes that she has been sentenced
to death as a punishment.
On the second occasion, they unexpectedly encounter one another
some time later by chance in Surinam (111ff.), to where both have been
sold independently of one another – Imoinda as a result of repudiation by
the king, and Oroonoko after having been kidnapped through the under-
handed betrayal of the English slave trader to whom he had sold his pris-
oners of war. Due to the generosity and liberalism of Trefry, the adminis-
trator of the governor’s estate, the lovers – as slaves, renamed Caesar and
Clemene and thus robbed of their original identity – are able to marry and
lead a normal marriage in relatively pleasant living conditions (113) and
are expecting a child. They are also promised that they will soon be freed.
However, the lovers perceive their unification as incomplete (113), as they
are denied their freedom, the recognition of the social position to which
they are entitled and even their identity (in the allocation of new, foreign
names). The lack of social recognition injures particularly Oroonoko in his
aristocratic self-image (“his large soul, which was still panting after more
renowned action” (114), in his identity based on his heroic achievements
and honour: “he accused himself for having suffered slavery for so long”
(ibid.). They are painfully aware of the constraints of captivity, particularly
in light of the imminent birth of their child, since this enslaved existence
will extend into all subsequent generations of the family: “he was the last
of his great race. This new accident [Imoinda’s pregnancy] made him
more impatient of liberty” (113), “Imoinda […] did nothing but sigh and
weep for the captivity of her lord, herself, and the infant yet unborn”
(125). The promised manumission is a long time coming and eventually
becomes untrustworthy. The actual crossing into the second sub-field,
however much it already seems partially realised and despite the promise
that it will be completed in the near future, effectively does not take place.
The narrator and other well-meaning people attempt to distract
Oroonoko from what he is missing and from the unsatisfying situation
with conversation and opportunities for replacement sporting activities
(“diversions”, 115; “diverted”, 125). But these attempts ultimately trigger
his decision to become active himself and force the crossing of the border
– by means of a militarily organised escape with other slaves (125ff.).
The plan to cross the border actively does not only aim to serve the
realisation of their love in freedom, in the self-determination of the indi-
Aphra Behn: Oroonoko 39
vidual with social recognition of his high station, but its methods also
involve Oroonoko’s aristocratic identity as a successful military leader and
heroic fighter. After initial successes (a rousing speech, departure and
combat with the white militia) the descent into defeat and catastrophe
begins, often interrupted, but always taken up again: when the whites use
whips, the traditional means of punishing slaves, against Oroonoko’s fol-
lowers, they desert him and surrender (129f.). He, too, eventually surren-
ders under the promise of a general pardon (131f.), which, however, is
immediately broken by the deputy governor of the colony, Byam, who has
Oroonoko captured and whipped – a further link in the chain of his be-
trayals by whites, from which he has ultimately learnt nothing. That
Oroonoko, despite his bad experiences of betrayal and breach of trust, is
repeatedly taken in by false promises is a symptom of tactical-cognitive
deficits in his character, but must also, over and above that, be assessed as
an indication of weakness in the aristocratic code based on honour and
trust, 19 particularly when in confrontation with such different discourses
as the unscrupulous profit motive of mercantilism. Oroonoko’s reaction
to this extremely destructive humiliation is an act of desperation, revenge
on Byam, which, however, also fails (135ff.). In light of the hopelessness
of a positive change to his and Imoinda’s situation, he plans his revenge as
a heroic act, recovering his honour by the commitment and sacrifice of his
own life as well as that of Imoinda. He kills her first to prevent her being
raped but is then unable to summon the physical strength to carry out his
revenge. As a further sign of his disintegration, he mutilates himself as he
is discovered. His eventual execution after having been restored to health
is staged, to his absolute humiliation and destruction, as an intensifying
fragmentation of his physical integrity (hacking off of his limbs, his nose
and ears etc.). 20 In this state of deepest degradation and violation, he dem-
onstrates stoic steadfastness and strength in that he gives no sign that he is
in pain and smokes a pipe until the end.
Despite the fact that Oroonoko retains his composure during his
gruesome humiliating death and demonstrates in passive suffering the
strength that he would otherwise employ in martial activity, the end of the
plot is a story of radical failure. Not only does the actively pursued posi-
tive border crossing fail, but a return to the status quo ante is no longer
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19 Both the large relevance of honour and trust as aristocratic values, as well as of their ex-
pected validity among the whites and in the colony, is indicated in Oroonoko’s declaration
as he leaves the slave ship of the treacherous captain: “let us […] see if we can meet with
more honour and honesty in the next world we shall touch upon” (106). Cf. also 107, 114,
127.
20 Gallagher’s (1996) thesis that Oroonoko, as a result of this self-fragmentation, becomes, in
line with the two bodies theory of kings, “all the more singularly immortal” (253) is diffi-
cult to follow through.
40 Peter Hühn
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21 A different construction of this event can be found in Ortiz (2002), who – by mixing the
levels of plot development and the narrator’s control – investigates the narrative position
between imperialist authority and its undermining (particularly at the end).
22 For a different interpretation, cf. Gallagher (1996).
23 Cf. Holmesland (2001: 70f. as well as 65 and 67).
Aphra Behn: Oroonoko 41
deputy governor Byam (134). Trefry even abstains – for moral, humane
reasons – from bending Imoinda to his will, though he desires her. How-
ever, the efficacy of the moral discourse is clearly qualified. Trefry gives
his promise of manumission only half-heartedly and does not seriously
pursue it; he, together with Byam, convinces Oroonoko to surrender, and
thus supports, through his gullibility, Oroonoko’s betrayal and subsequent
punishment (129, 131); in the end, he allows himself to be duped by Byam
so that the latter can illegally seize and execute Oroonoko. The narrator
shares the others’ fear of mutiny and an uprising of the slaves (132), flees
and is not present at the execution. This conduct, however, does not only
indicate that the liberal, humane forces are comparatively weak and inef-
fective, but rather that, without determined resistance, they, to some ex-
tent, can be misused or even secretly share the attitudes of the governing
power in the colony in its interest in control over the slaves. 24 This inter-
pretation is strengthened by the fact that even the liberal whites are, as
colonists, beneficiaries of an economic system based on slavery and are in
no way opposed to slavery in general (but merely, as an exception, lend
their support to educated, aristocratic slaves, i.e. those of equal station 25 ).
As a result of her passionate endorsement of colonialism (115) and sup-
port for the Stuarts, the narrator reveals herself to be particularly com-
promised in this regard, since the Stuart kings were actively involved in
the slave trade and profited from it. 26
These tendencies interact with the effect of the aristocratic discourse –
which, despite differences of degree, connects the African country with
the West Indian colony (as well as, ultimately, the English motherland) –
on Oroonoko’s role as a slave and his reaction to slavery. 27 Thus,
Oroonoko and Imoinda are treated with respect by well-meaning liberals
such as Trefry and the narrator, separated from the other slaves and re-
lieved of work duties (108f.), since they are of equal station to the Euro-
pean aristocrats. In this respect, the moral discourse is applied only in
accordance with the aristocratic discourse. Oroonoko’s understanding of
himself, even in slavery, is also based on just such a fundamental social
distinction between the classes. As a result, he feels nothing in common
with the other slaves and can contemptuously explain and criticise the
flight of his followers in the escape attempt in terms of their inborn slave
nature (“he was ashamed of what he had done, in endeavouring to make
those free, who were by nature slaves“, 130). Accordingly, he sees no
contradiction between his own current complaints about his enslavement
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24 Cf. Ferguson (1999: 217), with reference to the conduct of the narrator at the end.
25 Cf. Ferguson (1994: 177ff.; 1999: 218).
26 Cf. Lipking (2004: 173f., 179).
27 Cf. Brown (1999: 195f.).
Aphra Behn: Oroonoko 43
and the fact that he himself had previously sold free people into slavery,
who were actually brought to Surinam with him, and that he encounters
slaves previously sold by him, whom he allows to revere him as a great
man (109). That he sees no contradiction in this as a result of his self-
definition as aristocratic becomes even more apparent when he promises
to pay for his freedom from slavery with a great number of slaves (113).28
On the basis of this view of social hierarchy, the narrator produces, in
her presentation of the happenings, an analogy between the execution of
Oroonoko and that of Charles I, 29 which Oroonoko himself had men-
tioned with abhorrence at the beginning:
he had heard of the late Civil Wars in England and the deplorable death of our
great monarch, and would discourse of it with all the sense, and abhorrence of
the injustice imaginable (80).
Seen from this perspective, characteristics of the aristocratic martyr are
implicitly attributed to Oroonoko. It is also ultimately to this discourse
that the motive out of which the narrator has written the present report
belongs: for the glorification of this great man and for the safekeeping of
his renown (108, 140f.), both also pre-eminently aristocratic values.
The practical validity and moral justification of the aristocratic con-
cept of social hierarchy are, however, called into question by a series of
examples of failure by the authorities and of the misuse of power for base
human desires. 30 In Coramantien, this pertains to the old king, who uses
his autocratic power in contempt of the rules protecting marriage in order
to satisfy his lust, his jealousy and his vanity; in Surinam, this applies to
Byam, who, entirely without scruple, unrestrainedly, underhandedly and
brutally exploits his power to satisfy his aggression and desire for revenge
(128f.), but it also pertains ultimately to the governor himself, who,
through his absence and his lack of control over his deputy, neglects his
duties. The cases of misuse of autocratic power contribute directly to the
failure of the love plot. As mentioned above, the breaches of promise can
be viewed as dishonourable and unaristocratic, and one can judge the fact
that Oroonoko repeatedly falls victim to them as a sign of his rigid adher-
ence to aristocratic principles, despite his contradictory experiences, and
as strategic and political deficits as a result of this.
This tendency is strengthened in another respect by further examples
of human misconduct and deficient morality, namely by the countless
cases of betrayal and breaches of promise to Oroonoko by the Europeans
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28 Cf. Lipking (2004: 172) and Holmesland (2001: 68).
29 Brown (1999) sees here – over-subtly – an allegory of the end of the kingship system as a
result of the victory of mercantile capitalism (197ff.), Visconsi (2002), in even more general
terms, the return of barbarism.
30 Cf. Rosenthal (2004: 158ff.).
44 Peter Hühn
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18TH CENTURY
4 Daniel Defoe: Moll Flanders (1722)
Katrin Kroll
Defoe’s novel The Fortunes and Misfortunes of the Famous Moll Flanders 1
presents the life of the eponymous heroine which covers about 70 years
and which she herself tells retrospectively and chronologically. The story
can roughly be summed up as follows: Moll is the daughter of a convicted
criminal in London’s famous prison Newgate. Soon after her birth she is
abandoned because her mother is deported to the American colonies. She
spends a short time with relatives, later with gypsies and finally comes to
live most of her childhood in an orphanage. At fourteen, she becomes the
housemaid of a wealthy family and after some time the mistress of their
eldest son. Later she marries five times and between the third and the
fourth marriage, she works as a high-class prostitute, until her main occu-
pation becomes theft and robbery. Moll is already 48 by then. At 60, she
returns to Newgate – this time as a convicted criminal. She almost faces
capital punishment, which is then reduced to deportation to the American
colonies. In America, Moll attains freedom, builds up a plantation with her
fourth husband, who was deported along with her, and finally returns to
England as a rich lady at the age of 70. If we want to find out whether this
story contains events and, if so, what constitutes them, there are two
frames which promise to be interesting: first, the socio-economic, frame
which refers to Moll’s outer development, and second, the moral-religious
frame, which helps to assert the inner development Moll does or does not
undergo.
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1 Edition used: Defoe (1989).
50 Katrin Kroll
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2 Cf. also Hühn (2001: 337ff.).
3 Interestingly, it remains obscure how that comes about – whether the gypsies kidnap her or
whether she readily and freely joins them.
Daniel Defoe: Moll Flanders 51
and is at last able to live quite luxuriously (cf. 424). When she returns to
England she brings at least £1,000 6 with her. As Moll herself says about
her and Jemy’s situation in America, they live “in very considerable Cir-
cumstances” (426). Moll’s wish of becoming a gentlewoman has finally
come true – she attains financial wealth, becomes a landowner and enjoys
social respect. This situation has to be understood as permanent and final,
which is implied in the fact that the novel ends thus and gives the reader
no reason for doubts. A significant change in Moll’s situation is improb-
able – as Moll herself assumes (cf. 415) – because the fortune she accumu-
lated seems more than enough to finance her remaining years (in the
meantime she has turned 70).
The crucial question that remains is how and through what forces the
crossing of the boundary is facilitated. Clearly, Moll herself actively works
on achieving her aims – by two sometimes overlapping schemes. Her first
strategy is to gain wealth by an advantageous marriage (cf. 99f., 103f., 126,
196 199, 241). This procedure is a relatively conventional strategy – and a
legal one. However, almost from the beginning this strategy is undermined
by a second one which finally prevails. In order to become a gentlewoman
she more and more resorts to morally doubtful and even criminal means
a course of action to which the protagonist’s name already alludes. At
Defoe’s time, a number of famous female criminals were named “Moll”:
Moll Pines, Moll Hawkins, Mary Firth (who is mentioned in the novel and
was better known as Moll Cut-Purse, cf. 266) and, above all, Moll King.
The latter seems to be the main model for the fictional Moll Flanders –
Moll Cut-Purse was a known pickpocket arrested in 1718 and then de-
ported to America. Furthermore, the surname ‘Flanders’ is suggestive, too:
in England women from Flanders had been particularly popular as prosti-
tutes since the middle ages. 7 Consequently, it is no surprise that until she
is convicted a number of elements of her life fit into a particular social
script: the course of lives of contemporary criminals. 8 Even while she still
primarily follows the marriage scheme, first signs of this script manifest
themselves in as much as Moll deludes all of her husbands, except the
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6 During the nine years she spends in Virginia – apart from her and Jemy’s starting capital of
about £600 (cf. 392), which they invest in goods – the plantation she inherits from her
mother yields about £100 a year, her own plantation earns her £300 in its eighth year.
7 Cf. Blewitt (1989: 4). Apart from that, the name, of course, refers to a kind of cloth (“Flan-
ders Lace”, 275) which Moll, among other things, steals in the novel and which signifies,
thereby, criminal activities.
8 One reason why Defoe knows his topic so well is, among others, that he spent some time
in prison, which, apart from Moll Flanders, is evident in the biographies of criminals and es-
says on this topic he wrote, e.g. The History and Remarkable Life of John Sheppard (1724),
The True and Genuine Account of the Life and Actions of the Late Jonathan Wild (1725), An
Effectual Scheme for the Immediate Preventing of Street-Robberies (1728).
Daniel Defoe: Moll Flanders 53
second spouse, in one way or the other: 9 she deceives her first husband
with regard to her virginity and attracts her third and fourth husband by
pretending to be rich. The time in which she works as a prostitute (be-
tween her third and fourth spouse) is a more direct anticipation of her
later career as a criminal. Moreover, since she is never divorced from her
second husband (and, by the way, the fourth) – which would have been
difficult to achieve at the time –, she lives in bi- or rather polygamy for
many years. Finally, Moll falls into a criminal life after her fifth husband
dies and a new one is not available. She becomes a thief of various kinds
now, especially a shoplift and pickpocket, which were typical female forms
of crime at that time, 10 and again works as a prostitute for a short period.
Both strategies, however, do not lead to the crossing of the boundary:
Moll does not control her life; it is more as if things happened to her.
Furthermore, there are several forces and circumstances which make the
boundary resistant to her attempts of crossing it. Above all, the society she
lives in is characterized by rigid class barriers – there is no character in the
novel that rises in society without making (criminal) detours on their way.
Second, Moll’s world or rather the society she lives in is marked by its
deviousness. Throughout the novel, Moll is subdued by numerous decep-
tions which make it difficult for her to see through the motives of others,
to assess the consequences of her own actions, and, hence, to act success-
fully. 11 A striking example of this is the failure of Moll’s marriage strategy.
Her first lover behaves as if he wanted to marry her but at no time intends
to do so; the second pretends to be a gentleman but is in fact bankrupt. 12
What contributes to foiling Moll’s crossing of the boundary are unlucky
incidents which she cannot control. At various moments, Moll thinks that
she has reached the second sub-field of wealth and social esteem, which,
however, turns out to be a misapprehension: her first husband, the young
gentleman, dies an early death, just as her happy life with her fifth hus-
band ends, when he dies. Unlucky circumstances and – unintended – de-
ception finally come together in her marriage with her third husband, a
wealthy plantation owner in Virginia, who turns out to be her half-
brother. But the reason for the difficulty of crossing the border is not only
grounded in bad luck and a rigid society but also in Moll herself, i.e. her
lack of reasonable judgement and her questionable choice of means. In
the case of her second husband Moll lets herself be easily deceived and
does not inspect the bridegroom’s financial circumstances thoroughly (cf.
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9 Cf. Arnold (1985: 217).
10 Cf. McLynn (1991: 93).
11 Cf. Hühn (2001: 337f.).
12 What has to be mentioned, though, is that Moll pretends to be rich, too, i.e. has started to
resort to deception as a means as well.
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intended to be a social fall turns in the novel into a social rise. The fact
alone that her sentence is turned into deportation is not unusual since
deportations were common practice at Defoe’s time. 13 However, a de-
ported person would hardly have the chance to become a respected mem-
ber of middle-class society. Most of them became workers or even slaves
at the plantations and did not have any opportunity to save large sums of
money; many of them returned to England as soon as possible but only to
become criminals again. 14
Moll’s fate also turns out to be highly eventful when seen in an inter-
textual context – against the backcloth of contemporary criminal biogra-
phies, a genre to which I will return later in more detail. This genre was
widely known and accepted at Defoe’s time; the texts followed a number
of conventions so that we can suppose that contemporary readers must
have had specific expectations towards texts of this genre. The plot of
Moll Flanders, however, significantly deviates from the script established
in this genre, mainly because the actual cause for and integral part of
criminal biographies does not occur in it: the delinquent’s execution.
Quite in contrast to the laws of the genre, Moll not only survives but even
becomes rich in the end. 15
The only aspect which might be seen as limiting the degree of event-
fulness is the fact that not only Moll but also Jemy and her mother un-
dergo a similar development. Both of them are deported too, and then
become socially and economically successful as farmers. Consequently, we
have to say that for these two – although the novel does not focus on
their fates – the two sub-fields are obviously constituted like Moll’s and
they too, cross a boundary in the novel.
The crucial question that remains is whether the change in Moll’s outward
situation corresponds to an inner change, i.e. whether the social rise is
connected to a transformation of Moll’s moral and religious views and
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13 Cf. McLynn (1991: 277, 285ff.). After the number of deported criminals had sunk between
1685 and 1718 due to the resistance of American settlers, deportations became more fre-
quent again with the Transportation Act of 1718.
14 Cf. McLynn (1991: 289).
15 Moll’s assertion that a lot of readers would have preferred a “compleat Tragedy, as it was
very likely to have been” (369) seems to allude to this prominent deviation from the script.
56 Katrin Kroll
behaviour. 16 In the following, it will become clear that the answer to the
question of whether the moral-religious frame contains an event or not,
depends on the respective narrative level – on whether we adopt the per-
spective of the protagonist, the empirical author, the contemporary reader
or a modern reader.
For Moll, the protagonist and narrator, there definitely is an event: she
vehemently claims to have undergone a decisive inner change by referring
to the script of conversion. According to her, the conversion comes about
while she is in prison – this is where and when the moment of crossing
the boundary would have to be located. If we follow her train of thought,
her inner change begins when she first sees Jemy in prison. Her compas-
sion for him and the notion of being responsible for his fate trigger feel-
ings of guilt and remorse in her (cf. 356ff.). She ends her reflections on
Jemy with “in a word, I was perfectly chang’d, and become another Body”
(357). However, this short résumé does not seem to refer to actual inner
change but to the fact that Moll’s mind and spirit are no longer in a state
of resignation (cf. 355) and are woken to new life. She does not feel true
repentance at this point (cf. 358). But when she is waiting for the death
sentence to be carried out, she starts seeing a chaplain under whose influ-
ence the said conversion is brought about:
It was now that for the first time I felt any real signs of Repentance; I now began
to look back upon my past Life with abhorrence, [...]. The word Eternity repre-
sented itself with all its incomprehensible Additions, and I had such extended
Notions of it, that I know not how to express them […]. With these Reflections
came in, of mere Course, severe Reproaches of my own Mind for my wretched
Behaviour in my past Life; that I had forfeited all hope of any Happiness in the
Eternity that I was now going to enter into […]. (364f.)
The evaluations Moll uses (“wretched”, “abhorrence”) clearly demonstrate
her realisation that her past deeds were morally reprehensible and that her
feelings of repentance have a Christian dimension. This becomes espe-
cially evident when she calls into play the concept of “eternity”. Through-
out the novel, there are further indications of Moll’s inner change: she
frequently declares her repentance (cf. 266, 268, 421, 427) and often ap-
pears as an overt narrator retrospectively condemning her behaviour be-
fore her imprisonment (cf. 64, 67f., 168, 177, 415, 420f., 427), emphasising
the moral lesson which the reader can learn from her story (cf. 62, 179,
243, 369, 409). In addition, her newly-won belief in providence as the
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16 This question has been frequently and controversially discussed in the secondary literature.
Blewett (1989) e.g. assumes a fundamental change, while Suarez (1997) and Caton (1997)
deny the change and Faller (1993) considers it ambiguous. Often, the problem of Moll’s
change is connected with the question of which position the abstract or even real author
takes, cf. the overview in Goetsch (1980: 271ff.).
Daniel Defoe: Moll Flanders 57
shaping force of her life seems to verify her inner change: Moll states that
her transgressions as well as the unlucky coincidences in her life (before
her conversion) have to be ascribed to the “Devil in my Bosom” (199, cf.
also 254, 263, 268) or were brought about by an “invisible Hand” (251, cf.
also 44, 138, 154, 213, 268, 336). Similarly, she attributes the happy turns
to a “merciful Providence” (369, cf. also 408, 420, 421). If we follow
Moll’s interpretations and statements, the first sub-field of the semantic
field is marked by moral corruption and, along with it, a lack of belief and
conduct according to Christian values. In contrast, the second sub-field
has to be constructed as a morally and religiously stainless life marked by
repentance and by obeying God’s commands.
On second glance, however, Moll’s crossing of the border within the
moral-religious frame appears doubtful. From a modern perspective it is
disconcerting that even after her conversion Moll so strongly pursues
material goals. While still in prison Moll realises that material goods are
unimportant:
how gross, how absurd did every pleasant thing look? I mean, that we had
counted pleasant before; especially when I reflected that these sordid Trifles were
the things for which we forfeited eternal Felicity (364f.)
but her actions show that material interests remain the guiding force for
her decisions: her preparations for the journey to America predominantly
consist in settling her financial affairs and in providing herself with goods
for her life in Virginia and devices supposed to make the trip more agree-
able (cf. 389, 393). Consequently, Moll and Jemy pass the journey itself
quite conveniently if not luxuriously. Apart from furniture which Moll
buys only for the crossing (cf. 389), she and Jemy reside in a comfortable
passenger cabin, eat at the captain’s table and provide themselves with
“several Necessities” such as
Brandy, Sugar, Lemons etc. to make Punch, and Treat our Benefactor, the Cap-
tain; and abundance of things for eating and drinking in the Voyage; also a larger
Bed, and Bedding proportion’d to it; so that in a Word, we resolv’d to want for
nothing in the Voyage (397f.).
After arriving in the colonies, Moll devotes all her actions to building up a
profitable plantation – with success, as we know. This behaviour implies
that Moll still has not given up her main aim in life: becoming a gentle-
woman. 17 Even when she meets her son again her main concern in her
dealings with him is to secure her inheritance, the estate of her mother (cf.
410f.). That Moll has not given up her economic view of life also mani-
fests itself in the résumés which she as the narrator makes at the end of
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17 Cf. also the luxury articles she has others send her from England so that Jemy, who has
less means than she, can look like a gentleman again (424).
58 Katrin Kroll
each phase in her life: these résumés have a predominantly financial focus,
they are balances in the true sense of the word (cf. 102, 107f., 156, 180,
253, 392, 426).
However, if we take into account the historical-cultural context of
Calvinism it soon becomes obvious why Moll’s continuing economic per-
spective on life would not have contradicted her proclaimed conversion in
the eyes of contemporary readers and Calvinist Defoe. 18th-century Cal-
vinism does not see a conflict between material striving on the one hand
and belief and morality on the other. The frames ‘religion’ and ‘economy’
are not conceptualised as opposites, on the contrary: in their continuous
striving for certainty of their salvation Calvinists used to interpret eco-
nomic success as a sign of God’s saving grace and of being among the
chosen ones. 18 Consequently, Moll perfectly fulfils the script of the rueful
penitent in the specific historically and culturally determined form of a
Calvinistic story of conversion, so that for the empirical author Defoe and
contemporary readers Moll’s story would have constituted a moral-
religious event. From their perspective, the relation between the two
frames can be constructed as a causal one: the inner, moral-religious
change would have been seen as prerequisite of the later economic and
social rise – only after she repents, turns to God and strives for social
advancement with legal means can Moll succeed.
A modern reader or a reader who does not share the Calvinist world
view, however, will have difficulties in finding Moll’s continuing material
striving in accordance with a conversion. Especially the fact that Moll
does not offer any compensation for her deeds, but, on the contrary,
keeps her hauls and builds her future life upon them is hard to reconcile
with a moral-religious change. Consequently, Moll’s assertion that she
wants to begin her new life on a “new Foundation” (383) can be under-
stood as highly ironic.
However, even if we neglect the problem of Moll’s pursuit of profit,
the text contains other indications that leave room for doubts whether
Moll’s repentance continues after the described moment in prison and
whether she fundamentally changes. Firstly, there are the statements of
the fictive editor. With regard to Moll’s life, he explicitly speaks of two
contrasting phases of her life, a “criminal Part” and a “penitent Part” (38),
but at the same time he mentions that it was necessary to polish up the
manuscript: “the Copy which came first to Hand, having been written in
Language more like one still in Newgate, than one grown Penitent and
Humble, as she afterwards pretends to be” (37). At the end of the preface,
he furthermore assumes that towards the end of her life, Moll has been
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18 Cf. Arnold (1985: 52).
Daniel Defoe: Moll Flanders 59
in which she can believe. Hence, Moll’s reference to the script of conver-
sion also has the function to create identity. And there is one more aspect
to it: by interpreting her life as a story of conversion Moll also gains assur-
ance of her spiritual salvation, i.e. of a positive future after her death. 22
Finally, in correspondence with the ambivalence of Moll’s inner
change, the novel activates two diverging scripts belonging to the con-
temporary genre of criminal biographies mentioned before. This genre has
two main forms, picaresque biographies – which foreground the adven-
turous and, partly, the fantastic, which have an episodic structure, glorify
the protagonists and primarily intend to entertain the reader – and the
predominantly religiously oriented biographies. 23 The latter are dominated
by their devotional function: they denounce the delinquent’s crimes and
focus on his final turning to God. Typically both variations manipulate or
at least stylise the facts in order to produce the effect they aim at. 24 Taking
into account the mentioned discrepancies, Moll’s interpretation of the
story can be seen as an attempt to write a spiritual criminal biography,
which is, however, undermined by the ambiguity of her inner change.
Apart from the fact that the missing execution and Moll’s final wealth are
deviations from both genres, the novel contains numerous elements
which do not fit into the script of the spiritual criminal biography: the way
Moll’s life before her imprisonment is rendered in a rather episodic way
and the admiration she sometimes expresses for her deeds and adventures
are features which Moll Flanders shares with the picaresque criminal biog-
raphy. One could argue that by this deviation from the script of the spiri-
tual criminal biography, the moment of stylisation is laid bare as a consti-
tutive mechanism of the genre and its devotional function. If we follow
this line of thought, the novel even seems to possess a meta-fictional qual-
ity (which, though, does not constitute another event, to be more specific:
a presentation event). Still, in a very subtle way the reference to the said
genres highlights the (potential) events in the happenings and, at the same
time, their ambiguous relation to the literary as well as the cultural-
historical context.
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22 Cf. also Hühn (2001: 338f.).
23 Cf. Faller (1993: 4ff.), Gladfelder (2001: 33), Arnold (1985: 70ff.) and Bell (2004: 409). This
connects Moll Flanders, of course, to genres akin to the criminal biography, i.e. the pica-
resque novel, the confessional novel and the Puritan spiritual autobiography.
24 Cf. Faller (1993: 22), Arnold (1985: 95).
62 Katrin Kroll
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5 Samuel Richardson: Pamela; or, Virtue Rewarded
(1740)
Peter Hühn
1. The Social Order and the Two Conventional Scripts for Love Stories
the lower-class sub-field turns out to be unstable and insecure from the
start. This is due to two aspects of her situation, both connected with her
sex and age: her role as an unprotected servant girl in an aristocratic family
after her benevolent maternal mistress’s (Lady B.’s) death and her being a
sexually attractive, nubile young woman. As far as her relations with the
opposite sex are concerned, two scripts are available to Pamela (according
both to social norms and literary conventions): marrying someone from
her own class or being seduced by a member of the aristocratic class. 4
Whereas the first alternative is apt to complete and consolidate her social
integration in the first sub-field, the second option, while seeming to per-
mit the crossing of the boundary into the higher, aristocratic sub-field,
would eventually result in her moral and social degradation and cause her
to be expelled from her original social position into a morally inferior
second sub-field (she would be “ruined”, as the usual phrase puts it). This
change would entail a re-definition of the structure of the semantic field in
primarily moral terms (albeit with social consequences).
In the course of the novel’s development, these two alternative scripts
are actually presented to Pamela as practical possibilities, in the form of
two different plotlines. The main plotline is constituted by Mr B., the
libertine son of her former mistress, attempting to subject her to the sec-
ond (seduction) script, by persistently and perfidiously trying to seduce
her, against her strong and virtuous resistance, by flattery, the use or threat
of force and, ultimately and most elaborately, by tempting her with the
promise of an established position in aristocratic circles as his kept mis-
tress, with the prospect of marriage sometime in the future. At one point
in this plot progression, she is offered marriage by a member of her own
class, Mr Williams, 5 in accordance with the first script, as a means of
warding off the threat to her moral integrity and securing a safe and firm
position for her in the first sub-field.
With respect to the second alternative, the seduction plotline and the
concomitant prospect or illusion of a boundary crossing, the novel pro-
vides explicit definitions of the boundary from either side, as it were, cor-
roborating the rigorous separation of the two sub-fields. At the very be-
ginning of the novel, Pamela’s parents, warning her against Mr B.’s
designs, specify the constitutive norms of the lower-class sub-field, in
opposition to the corrupt standards of the aristocracy, as moral integrity
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4 These two scripts actually underlie the plot patterns of two types of the female love novel
prevalent at the time: the courtship novel and the seduction/rape tale. See Doody (1974:
18ff.).
5 Though Mr Williams’s position as a clergyman is somewhat higher up the social scale than
that of the servant girl Pamela, the society of the novel clearly places them in the same
class, far beneath the aristocracy.
Samuel Richardson: Pamela 65
and religious strictness: honesty, goodness, hard work, virtue, piety and
trust in God and his Providence. Virtue is considered superior to wealth
and even to life:
“we had rather see you all cover’d with Rags, and even follow you to the Church-
yard, than have it said, a Child of ours preferr’d any worldly Conveniencies to her
virtue” (14).
With reference to a flattering gift by Mr B. to Pamela, her father admon-
ishes her:
“Arm yourself, my dear Child, for the worst; and resolve to lose your Life sooner
than your Virtue. […] what signify the Delights that arise from a few paltry fine
Cloaths, in Comparison with a good Conscience?”,
adding, “It is Virtue and Goodness only, that make the true Beauty” (20).
While the parents thus define the boundary from below, Lady Davers
demarcates it from above later in the novel, again with direct reference to
Pamela’s person and position, when her brother contemplates taking her
as either a mistress or a wife. She admonishes her brother in a letter:
“ruining a poor Wench that my Mother lov’d, and who really was a very good
girl; […] of this you may be asham’d; […] it would be very wicked in you to ruin
the Wench […]. So that I beg you will restore her to her Parents, and give her
100 £ or so, to make her happy in some honest Fellow of her own Degree”;
but marrying her would be “utterly inexcusable”, a gross violation of the
superior state of the noble and old family tradition:
“ours is no up-start Family; but as ancient as the best in the Kingdom; and for
several Hundreds of Years, it has never been known that the Heirs of it have dis-
graced themselves by unequal Matches; […] [a] handsome Gentleman as you are
in your Person; so happy in the Gifts of your Mind, that every body courts your
Company; and possess’d of such a noble and clear Estate; and very rich in Money
besides, left you by the best of Fathers and Mothers, with such ancient Blood in
your Veins, untainted! for you to throw yourself thus, is intolerable” (257).
Because of their literary and social conventionality, the practical reali-
zation of either of these two scripts would not rank high on the scale of
eventfulness. Marrying Mr Williams, on the one hand, would merely con-
firm and perpetuate Pamela’s original membership, by birth, of the first
sub-field, corroborate the existing order and thus prove not at all eventful,
which is highlighted by the explicit advocacy of such a marriage by the
two staunch defenders of the inviolable boundary between the fields men-
tioned above: Pamela’s father (159f.) and Lady Davers (cf. 257). If Pamela
were to succumb to seduction, on the other hand, this would ultimately
lead to her moral and social debasement, thereby undermining her place in
the first field and relegating her to an altogether inferior position. This
course of action would constitute a negative event, but one of a relatively
66 Peter Hühn
the aristocracy – an event prepared over a long period of time and finally
brought about largely as a result of decisive changes in Mr B.’s attitude: a
conception of love for Pamela (83); offer of cohabitation with a vague
prospect of marriage after a test year (191f.); recognition from her journal
and letters of her unselfish loving attachment to him in spite of his brutal
and deceitful behaviour (250f.); and finally, unreserved declaration of love
and proposal of marriage (259ff., esp. 270) as well as acknowledgement of
her moral superiority as a model for his own life (269ff.):
“let me tell my sweet Girl, that, after having been long lost by the boisterous
Winds of a more culpable Passion, I have now conquer’d it, and am not so much
the Victim of your Love, all charming as you are, as of your Virtue; and therefore
I may more boldly promise for myself, having so stable a Foundation for my Af-
fection; which, should this outward Beauty fail, will increase with your Virtue,
and shine forth the brighter, as that is more illustriously display’d, by the aug-
mented Opportunities which the Condition you are now entering into, will afford
you” (341).
In the final analysis, the crossing of the boundary is essentially effected by
the overriding of social with moral norms. 9
Although Pamela’s transition from the first to the second semantic
sub-field, i.e. from the lower to the higher social status, is ultimately
achieved with the brief, but legally and religiously binding, ceremony of
the wedding in the chapel (344ff.), the boundary is crossed not as a sud-
den or random occurrence, but as an integral part of a protracted process
which, in addition to the preliminary psychological and moral changes,
includes the customary wedding preparations and especially the long
drawn-out efforts to overcome various serious obstacles resulting from
family and social circumstances, such as Lady Davers’s hostile opposition
(415ff.) and the neighbouring gentry’s reservations or outright antago-
nism. 10 Nor is the achievement definitive and final: the two-volume sequel
of the novel published a year later (1741) reveals that Pamela’s position in
the second sub-field is not yet secure, but must be earned and further
confirmed through her exemplary behaviour. All these difficulties testify
to the inherent strength and stability of the subdivision of the semantic
field and the firm resistance of the boundary to transgression. Therefore,
the fundamental transformation of Pamela’s social status represents a very
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9 Cf. Morton (1971), who ascribes the decisive movement of the plot to the spiritual regen-
eration of Mr B. and other characters through the effect of Pamela’s virtue. He locates in
the novel “two planes of action, the vertical plane of the social scale and the horizontal
plane of spiritual regeneration; and their intersection comes at the point of B’s repentance”
(256).
10 Mai (1986), in his detailed formal analysis of the structure of plot-development, distin-
guishes two successive conflicts which postpone the final resolution: the threat to Pamela’s
virtue and the hostility of society, both of almost equal length.
68 Peter Hühn
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13 For a comprehensive description of the relevance of Providence for the world order in the
novel and its religious foundation, see Fortuna (1980).
14 For the significance of the underlying concept of woman’s role in love, cf. Watt (1963:
160ff.).
15 Cf. Flint (1989: 505). Koretsky (1983) also stresses that Pamela’s very exceptionality argues
against her being an example of social advancement (e.g. 53).
16 In addition, the social status of her family is curiously raised towards the end of the novel
so as to enhance her affinity with the aristocratic sub-field. Cf. Flint (1989: 506f.).
17 Cf. Bowen (1999: 267, 269, 272). What was new and provocative was attributing such an
attitude to a servant-girl. Cf. Watt (1963: 172).
70 Peter Hühn
on Mr B., his sister and others, she can even be seen as improving and
strengthening the cultural superiority of the aristocratic order.18
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18 The relation between social and moral norms has been variously interpreted, e.g. as incom-
patible tendencies by Flint (1989). However, since the class boundary is unmistakably cor-
roborated despite Pamela’s rise, one can argue that the moral reformation of the aristo-
cratic family of the B.s through the influence of her essentially bourgeois values does not
so much symbolize the rise of the middle class as strengthen the superiority and legitimacy
of the aristocracy.
19 For a detailed overview of contemporary reactions, see Keymer & Sabor (2005).
20 Cf. Keymer & Sabor (2005: 83ff.).
21 Cf. Bowen (1999: 258ff.) and Doody (1974: 71ff.). One underlying motive seems to have
been the anxiety that Pamela might encourage female servants’ sauciness or even their aspi-
rations of upward mobility.
22 “[Pamela] overthrew classical literary decorum in making a low, ungrammatical female its
heroine; it overthrew social barriers in presenting a misalliance as not only possible but in
given circumstances desirable. […] Shamela shows what a revolutionary book Pamela could
seem. Richardson’s novel affronted the old Etonian in Fielding, and he registered the reac-
tion of the Establishment” (Doody 1974: 74).
23 Cf. Doody (1974: 74ff.).
Samuel Richardson: Pamela 71
tially unknown, but revealed later on). 24 As a result, the high degree of
eventfulness of Pamela’s marriage is considerably reduced, apparently
because this radical deviation from the established social order was felt to
be unacceptable – another indirect indication of the dependence of the
event on the class context.
That such a marriage across the class-divide is both highly exception-
al 25 and of profound relevance becomes particularly apparent through
reference to the historical context, i.e. the social, cultural and religious
conditions and practices in force at the time the novel was written. Central
contextual features are, firstly, the hierarchical class system in Britain and
its practically impermeable boundary between the lower (the working and
the middle) classes and the aristocracy; secondly, the ethical emphasis on
which the middle class bases its dignity and self-respect, the norms of
honesty, working for one’s living and, especially with regard to women,
sexual “virtue”, in contradistinction to the aristocratic values of rank,
wealth, leisure, pleasure and, with particular respect to men, loose sexual
morals; and thirdly, the ban on female initiative in pursuing love and mar-
riage and the repression of female self-awareness with regard to feelings
towards men, which delimits the agency of women as protagonists, con-
fining their scope of action to reactivity and submissiveness. In addition,
the notion of divine Providence guiding human destiny functions as an
important overarching schema, 26 especially for Pamela, since it shifts (or
projects) the agency denied to women onto a superior, benevolent power
and thus religiously sanctions her violation of social boundaries: in the
end, she can “acknowledge, with thankful Humility, the blessed Provi-
dence, which has so visibly conducted me thro’ the dangerous Paths I
have trod, to this happy Moment” (274). It is only retrospectively that
Pamela is able to recognise the religious consistency of her eventful social
transformation, which, in the final analysis, may be identified as a partly
secularised version of the puritanical conversion-and-redemption script
and is thus specifically dependent on the cultural and historical context of
Richardson’s novel. 27
The novel certainly contains numerous indicators of these contextual
norms and values. For instance, Lady Davers’s letter to her brother for-
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24 For a detailed discussion of Kelly’s novel, see Keymer & Sabor (2005: 66ff., esp. 77f.).
25 Cf. Bowen (1999: 261).
26 For an overview of the relevance of this theological notion for Richardson and his time, cf.
Fortuna (1980).
27 In addition, one can read the novel in yet another, political context, as Dussinger (2001)
has suggested, by construing an analogy between, on the one hand, Pamela’s letter-writing
as a means of articulating as well as fortifying her moral self-confidence and Mr B.’s at-
tempts at getting hold of these letters and controlling their effect on others and, on the
other, the “ferocious print wars” between opposition and government at the time.
72 Peter Hühn
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6 Henry Fielding: The History of Tom Jones,
a Foundling (1749)
Markus Kempf
the second of which is again subdivided into two shorter phases. The first
section (books I–VI) covers Tom Jones’s formative years up to the age of
21 at Allworthy’s country seat Paradise Hall. The second – decisive – sec-
tion starts with Tom’s banishment from Paradise Hall owing to his own
acts of indiscretion and the intrigue of Blifil, Squire Allworthy’s nephew,
against him. This narrative section, which covers only a few days, presents
the protagonist’s adventures, first, on the road and in country inns on his
way to London (books VII–XII) and, subsequently, within the aristocratic
society of the capital (books XIII–XVIII). 4
In semantic respects, the two-part plot-structure is centrally condi-
tioned by the fact that Tom crosses the same boundary twice. The plot
starts with an unmerited, passive, premature crossing of the (social)
boundary: Tom, as a foundling, an illegitimate baby of presumably socially
low descent, is graciously adopted into the aristocratic family of Squire
Allworthy, a social elevation which is later reversed (when he is banished
by the squire). But in the end – having acquired moral maturity through
his experiences in the country and the metropolis, discovered his true
identity and married Sophia – he crosses the boundary again and this time
for good. Thus, Tom’s plotline consists of the repetition of a specific
eventful movement, failing the first time, succeeding at the second at-
tempt.
The semantic field and the final boundary crossing, in Lotman’s
terms, are essentially defined by oppositions in three respects: lower class
vs. aristocracy 5 (regarding Tom’s position in society), desire vs. fulfilment
(in his relation to Sophia), immaturity, naivity, impulsiveness, credulity,
carelessness vs. maturity, world knowledge, self-discipline, prudence (with
regard to his mind, attitude and behaviour). Accordingly, Tom’s plotline is
framed in three ways: social status, love, cognitive and moral psychology.
These three frames are interrelated and partly mutually dependent, as is
shown, e.g., by the play with the multiple meanings of the name “Sophia”,
which refers to the person of the concrete woman as object of Tom’s love
as well as to his personal wisdom and maturity. In the last analysis, how-
ever, the frames are arranged hierarchically with the moral-cognitive as-
pect claiming a position of relative priority. Tom’s cognitive and moral
improvement functions both as a precondition for his marriage to Sophia
and as a justification and confirmation of his (eventually revealed) aristo-
cratic rank.
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4 Watt (1963: 288f.) points to the neat subdivision of the novel into three compositional
groups of six chapters each.
5 Although it turns out in the end that this social opposition does not actually apply to Tom
after all on account of his concealed aristocratic birth, the class difference serves an impor-
tant function for the plot-development in large parts of the novel.
76 Markus Kempf
As mentioned above, the novel sets in with the event, at its very begin-
ning, of the protagonist’s rise into the upper class in spite of his alleged
socially and morally dubious descent. Although Tom is supposed to be the
illegitimate child of the schoolmaster Partridge and his maidservant Jenny
Jones, Squire Allworthy adopts him, gives him his own Christian name
and the surname of the presumed mother and brings him up together with
Blifil, the son of his widowed sister Bridget, who lives with him in Para-
dise Hall. During this first phase, Tom’s personality is characterised by
two traits primarily: on the one hand, he possesses a benevolent, good-
natured and compassionate disposition and, on the other hand, he is in-
clined to act impulsively and imprudently; besides, his is a passionate na-
ture and he is careless in questions of sexual morality. Although, since
their early youth, there has been a mutual attraction between him and
Sophia, 9 the daughter of Squire Western, Allworthy’s neighbour, Tom
indulges in a sexual affair with the seductive and devious Molly Seagram –
for a while it even looks as if he were the father of her child. Because of
his ambivalent and immature behaviour Tom violates the expectations and
moral standards of his environment, so that he is vulnerable to attacks and
his position in the second field becomes increasingly insecure.
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6 Fielding (1985: 130 / IV, 5).
7 For a description of the role of “Fortune” in producing the difficulties Tom has to face,
see Crane (1995: 686ff.).
8 For a structural analysis of these episodes, see Crane (1995: 696).
9 The final mutual recognition of their love is narrated in Fielding (1985: 187ff. / V, 6).
Henry Fielding: Tom Jones 77
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10 Fielding (1985: 116ff. / III, 10).
11 Fielding (1985: 124ff. / IV, 3).
12 Fielding (1985: 249ff. / VI, 10 & 11).
78 Markus Kempf
His banishment from Paradise Hall initiates the second phase of Tom’s
development, which comprises only a few days. On the road, in country
inns and in the metropolis, he is involved in numerous adventures and
entanglements, which cannot be reconstructed here in detail. In the man-
ner of comedy plots Tom’s path repeatedly crosses Sophia’s, who – ac-
companied by her maid – flees to a relative in London, her cousin Lady
Bellaston, to escape the forced marriage with Blifil, whom she loathes,
pursued by her father. In the course of this flight Tom saves a traveling
lady from being raped and then gets involved with her himself. 14 When
Sophia learns about his infidelity, she is disappointed and turns away from
him. 15 The final phase is set in London, where Tom has followed Sophia
and where both are exposed to further seductions and intrigues, particu-
larly by the ageing Lady Bellaston and her libertine friend Lord Fellamar.
While Squire Western saves Sophia from being raped by Lord Fellamar, 16
Tom is arrested for duelling 17 and sentenced to death on the basis of evi-
dence manipulated by Blifil. He is saved at the last minute by Allworthy,
who at long last has seen through Blifil’s machinations. 18 He disowns him
and remorsefully receives Tom back into the family. 19 At the same time
Tom’s identity and descent are clarified:20 He turns out to be the illegiti-
mate son of Allworthy’s sister Bridget (before her marriage to Captain
Blifil and the birth of her legitimate son) and is therefore Blifil’s half-
brother. Sophia and Tom are reconciled and marry.
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13 Fielding (1985: 195; V, 7).
14 Fielding (1985: 400ff. / IX, 2 ff.).
15 Fielding (1985: 439ff. / X, 5).
16 Fielding (1985: 657ff. / XV, 5).
17 Fielding (1985: 725ff. / XVI, 10).
18 Fielding (1985: 781ff. / XVIII, 6f.).
19 Fielding (1985: 795ff. /XVIII, 9f.).
20 Fielding (1985: 788ff. / XVIII, 8).
Henry Fielding: Tom Jones 79
The concept underlying the event in Fielding’s Tom Jones and its context
can best be assessed in contrast to another 18th-century novel, Richard-
son’s Pamela of 1740. 24 In Tom Jones, Fielding endorses a moral code
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21 Fielding (1985: 802 / XVIII, 10).
22 Gooding (2001: 31–35) questions the positive quality of “prudence”, pointing to its nega-
tive representation in Blifil and the Man of the Hill. But even though prudence can be per-
verted, in Tom’s case it appears as a valuable and necessary corrective.
23 Fielding (1985: 802f. / XVIII, 10).
24 See the analysis of Pamela in the present volume (63î73).
80 Markus Kempf
in Tom’s acts and attitudes. Tom does not possess an exceptional person-
ality nor a distinct individuality; and – unlike Pamela – the interior, psy-
chological dimension of his character is largely left aside. 32 The concept of
life and eventfulness in Tom Jones is largely defined by the neo-classical,
enlightened notions of a stable public (and hierarchical) order of society,
the universality of human nature and the rationality of moral norms. 33 The
advocacy of a renewed, enlightened stability has to be seen against the
background of “an atmosphere where social and moral demarcations were
subtle and uncertain in ways that reflect the amorphous state of [Field-
ing’s] changing world” 34 .
These contextual references to an enlightened, rational, publically ori-
ented concept of human behaviour also determine the narrative mediation
of the plot. Fielding does not offer a subjective self-presentation of a life
either in retrospect (as, e.g., in Defoe’s first-person narratives) or in its
actual ongoing performance (as, e.g., in Richardson’s epistolary novels): in
both cases the protagonist-as-narrator tends to treat his own standpoint
and standard of value as absolute. Instead, Fielding objectifies the narra-
tive through the critical distance of an omniscient extradiegetic narrator.
For every narrative about oneself is subjectively limited and unavoidably
biased by one’s own standpoint, as is also stressed by the narrator:
[…] for let a man be never so honest, the account of his own conduct will, in
spite of himself, be so very favourable, that his vices will come purified through
his lips, and like foul liquors well strained, will leave all their foulness behind. For
tho’ the facts themselves may appear, yet so different will be the motives, circum-
stances, and consequences, when a man tells his own story, and when his enemy
tells it, that we scarce can recognize the facts to be one and the same. 35 .
Through this distanced perspective the behaviour of the protagonist and
the other characters is permanently judged and exposed in their limitation
and blindness towards oneself and others from a superordinate reasonable
point of view, but less by means of explicit criticism than indirectly
through irony. This narrative technique obliges the reader constantly to
examine whether the actions and moral attitudes of the hero and the other
characters are in accordance with the general values and norms. This as-
serted objectivity of reasonable judgement is another contextual reference
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32 This view, which is a consensus of Fielding critics, is rejected by Chibka (2008). It is true,
as Chibka demonstrates, that the reader is often informed about the mental activities of the
characters, their knowledge, thoughts and emotions, but these are typically only stated and
summarised rather than shown.
33 Cf. Watt (1963: 282ff.). In the last analysis, these concepts are endorsed by the novel
despite the pervasive irony – pointed out e.g. by Hudson (2007) – which seems to ques-
tion all fixed values and norms.
34 Hudson (2007: 90f.).
35 Fielding (1985: 340f. / VIII, 5).
Henry Fielding: Tom Jones 83
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PREMODERN AND MODERNIST
7 Charles Dickens: Great Expectations (1861)
Peter Hühn
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1 Page references, to Dickens (1985), are cited in the text.
2 For a reconstruction of the arrangement of storylines on a psychoanalytical basis, cf.
Brooks (1984). For an overview of the life stories and their historical setting, cf. Paroissien
(2000).
88 Peter Hühn
Pip’s story is presented directly: he himself tells his life story chronologi-
cally and retrospectively. But this presentation is explicitly structured with
respect to its eventful turns by an editor, as is apparent in the subdivision
of the 59 chapters into three phases of almost equal length (19 or 20 chap-
ters each) and especially in the sentences concluding the first two phases,
in which Pip the narrator is referred to in the third person: “This is the
end of the first [second, resp.] stage of Pip’s expectations.” 3 These con-
clusions to each phase constitute significant, eventful turning-points in
Pip’s development. The first phase, i.e. chapters 1 to 19, is marked, as
already indicated in the title, by the anticipation of a social elevation from
the lower classes to the status of gentleman. This is to be seen within the
context of traditional British class society, with the still strict separation
between the lower, working population (the labourers, craftsmen, servants
and employees) on the one hand and the affluent and therefore leisured
upper class of the aristocracy on the other. 4 This division of society, with a
boundary between the two sections, also functions as the semantic field
underlying the happenings in the first part of the novel. What had
changed since the previous century 5 was a greater “permeability” of the
boundary and increased social mobility for individuals, a sign of the evolv-
ing modernization of society. 6 Belonging to the upper class, though still
highly restrictive, was no longer based exclusively on birth, on being de-
scended from an aristocratic family, but could also be achieved by the
acquisition of wealth and the purchase of land (by “self-made men”), as
exemplified by the rise of successful entrepreneurs and businessmen since
the beginning of the Industrial Revolution (famous examples are Peel,
Disraeli, and Gladstone).
It is through reference to the hierarchical stratification of society as
the relevant context that the schemata of Pip’s life story can be deter-
mined. Social status, i.e. belonging to a particular social class as a central
point of reference for one’s identity, provides the frame for the plot, while
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3 At the end of ch. 19 (188) and 39 (342), resp.
4 According to Cannadine (2000: ch.s 2 and 3), the 18th and 19th centuries were generally
characterized by a pervasive, acute awareness of the rigid stratification of the British soci-
ety. Furthermore, see Gilmour (1981) for an account of the general social situation (115)
as well as for a description of the conditions in Great Expectations (10546). Herbst (1990:
119f.) uses the reference to the socio-historical context for a primarily moralistic interpreta-
tion.
5 Cf. the analyses, in the present volume, of Defoe’s Moll Flanders (49–62) and Richardson’s
Pamela (63î73).
6 Cf. Checkland (1964: 281324, esp. 289ff.), also Gilmour (1981). For a general account of
the process of modernization, see Luhmann (1993).
Charles Dickens: Great Expectations 89
moving upwards in society, especially into the class of the wealthy, who
on account of their wealth are entitled and able to lead a life of leisure and
pleasure, i.e. the position of a gentleman, serves as the script. The script
thus consists in a programme for crossing the social boundary in the se-
mantic field. Since this crossing is expected here, the degree of eventful-
ness is not very high, in any case considerably lower than in Richardson’s
Pamela, where such a script did not yet exist. The wording of the title
suggests a further specification of the script: what is envisaged is not ele-
vation through personal effort and active achievement, but the passive
acceptance of such privileges; for example, by inheritance or adoption.
The pattern inherent in this script is thus ultimately still aristocratic, the
expectation of an inheritance due from one’s parents or family. To pin-
point the internal contradiction underlying this script: to be able to orient
oneself on this script presupposes the growing modern mobility in society,
while its content is still pre-modern and traditional, i.e. the reference to
social status (the status of gentleman) as granted and not earned. In addi-
tion, a gender-specific male aspect distinguishes Pip from Pamela: social
elevation is not effected by marriage into an aristocratic family.
Pip’s life story begins with the description of his family background,
social status and living conditions, together with the emergence of his
“expectations”, i.e. of the script of social ascent as the guideline for his
life. His initial situation, on the one hand, places Pip clearly inside the first
semantic sub-field, the lower-class working population: he is an orphan
growing up in a small-town environment and in the poor household of his
brother-in-law, the good-natured and warm-hearted, but uneducated,
blacksmith Joe Gargery, and his wife, Pip’s care-worn and heartless sister,
practically playing the role of an evil stepmother. On the other hand, his
position is relatively unstable and unfixed, which shows the potential for
positive or negative development. Owing to the death of his parents (the
novel starts with a scene in the graveyard where Pip the child is trying to
decipher the inscriptions on their tombstones), Pip lacks a firm family
basis for social integration: his brother-in-law and sister provide only a
weak substitute, the former on account of his childlike (albeit good-
natured) disposition, the latter because of her attitude of brusque rejec-
tion, which gives him the feeling of not being welcome and being “nater-
ally wicious” (i.e. “naturally vicious”, 57, see also 46, 54). Psychologically,
his position is further undermined by the need to conceal his enforced
support of the fugitive convict Magwitch (whom he encounters, tellingly,
in the same initial scene in which he verifies the death of his parents).
These circumstances induce in Pip a separate interiority and a mental dis-
tance to his environment, which is ambivalent in that it can lead either to
criminal behaviour or to intellectual independence (cf. 38ff., 54f., 74).
90 Peter Hühn
social class, Biddy. Pip is officially apprenticed to Joe, with Miss Havisham
providing the requisite apprenticeship premium (126, 127ff., 132f.); and
Biddy appears to be a socially as well as psychologically suitable spouse for
Pip: as an orphan, she is in a similar situation (74), she is obviously in love
with him – as he might be with her, were it not for his overriding fixation
on social advancement (154 ff., cf. also 186). In a long conversation with
Biddy (154–160), Pip explicitly lays out the opposition and rivalry between
the two scripts, the integration into the first sub-field as an alternative to
crossing over to the second, with respect to position and choice of
spouse, but also his determination to opt for the second script.
As indicated in this passage, the two alternative scripts and aims do
not appear neutrally side by side, but are contradictorily judged by pro-
tagonist and implied author. While Pip decidedly opts for advancement
and change, rejecting integration into the first sub-field as humiliating, this
option is criticized indirectly by the implied author through the clearly
negative characterization of Estella’s coldly arrogant behaviour (as repre-
sentative of the second sub-field) as well as more or less directly through
the emotionally and morally unambiguously positive, warm-hearted role-
models Joe and Biddy (as significant representatives of the first sub-
field): 10 Joe advocates “common” moral rectitude and openness as op-
posed to ambitious striving for higher (“oncommon”) education (100f);
Biddy is quite outspoken in advising Pip against aspiring to the status of a
gentleman: “Oh, I wouldn’t, if I was you! […] I don’t think it would an-
swer” (154) and “don’t you think you are happier as you are?” (155). The
second sub-field, as imagined by him, is, moreover, discredited by the
attitude of condescension and haughtiness which Pip, anticipating his
future gentleman-status, adopts towards Joe’s simplicity, of which he is
ashamed (101, 134 ff.), as well as towards Biddy, when he tells her that he
regrets not being able to fall in love with her instead of Estella (158f.).
Yet, in spite of opting for social advancement, Pip does not find it easy to
solve the conflict between the two scripts, as indicated by intermittent
doubts and insights:
[…] having states and seasons when I was clear that Biddy was immeasurably bet-
ter than Estella, and that the plain honest working life to which I was born, had
nothing in it to be ashamed of, but offered me sufficient means of self-respect
and happiness. (159, cf. also 157)
This clear expression emphasizes the positive alternative (favoured by the
implied author) to the scenario of advancement once again, immediately
before the “great expectations” are actually fulfilled. This ambivalent
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10 Cf. Landau (2005), who – on the basis of a Marxian approach – analyses the novel’s im-
plicit critique of the gentleman-status as an existence exempt from the need to work.
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evaluation of the alternative script does not raise the expected event in its
degree of eventfulness, but renders its status problematic.
This phase of Pip’s life story is finally closed by the actual announce-
ment of the event, when Jaggers, a lawyer from London, informs Pip that
an unnamed benefactor has bequeathed him a fortune and will have him
educated as a gentleman:
it is the desire of the present possessor of that property, that [Pip] be immediately
removed from his present sphere of life and from this place, and be brought up
as a gentleman – in a word, as a young fellow of great expectations. (165)
In this formulation, the eventfulness of the movement into the second
sub-field is described with unusual clarity as a radical social as well as spa-
tial boundary crossing, which is here announced and prepared for in prac-
tical terms.
Before that crossing is put into practice, however, within the last two
chapters (chapters 18 and 19) of this first phase of Pip’s story, the implic-
itly negative qualifications (by the implied author) of the imminent event-
ful change become more pronounced, especially in Pip’s behaviour to-
wards Joe and Biddy. That Pip attributes enviousness of his good fortune
to Biddy (170) and feels ashamed of Joe’s lack of education and good
manners (175ff., 185) betrays his new snobbishness, his sense of being
superior to his plain lower-class relatives and acquaintances. A more sub-
tle critique of this crossing is implied when it is characterized as a dream
come true (165) and associated with a fairy tale (184f.), since this implicitly
undermines his sudden stroke of luck as illusory. That Pip secretly (and
erroneously) ascribes his good fortune to Miss Havisham (165, 184f.)
contributes to the sense of wishful thinking in connection with this immi-
nent change in his life, since he interprets this as the confirmation and
continuation of the great plans which he had ascribed to her from the very
beginning (82, 98, 124f.) – in blatant contradiction to her real intentions as
had been indicated earlier (89, 123) and will become plain later.
restore the desolate house […] in short, do all the shining deeds of the young
Knight of romance, and marry the Princess. (253)
More serious, however, is the moral discredit that Pip’s behaviour brings
upon his desire to rise in society, which continues and corroborates the
critical implications from the end of the first part (see above). One impor-
tant indicator of implied criticism is Pip’s condescension to both Joe and
Biddy as well as his feeling ashamed of Joe’s low rank and lack of educa-
tion (208f., 240f., 265, 267, 301ff.), an arrogant form of behaviour which
even he himself is later critical of and feels guilty about. In addition, Pip
accuses Biddy of envy and of lacking the proper gratitude for his contin-
ued contact with her and Joe despite his own social elevation (302, 304, cf.
176), an attitude, the open arrogance of which he is unwilling to acknowl-
edge, even with hindsight as retrospective narrator.
In another respect, his friend Herbert functions as a central instance
and standard of criticism. By calling Pip “Handel”, in allusion to Händel’s
song of the “harmonious blacksmith” (202), he subtly points out to him
how inadequate his behaviour is for a gentleman. Herbert defines a gen-
tleman on the basis of his inner moral qualities and not, as Pip does, in
social and financial terms: “no man who was not a true gentleman at
heart, ever was [...] a true gentleman in manner” (204). Furthermore, Her-
bert’s own behaviour represents a practical (and critical) counter-script to
Pip’s exclusively external conception of social elevation: he is not ambi-
tious for the sake of mere success and, though of aristocratic (if impover-
ished) origin, he marries a woman (Clara) not befitting his rank, because
he loves her, in opposition to the class-conscious demands of his family
(272f.).
The critique of this script and the concomitant notion of eventfulness
is thus consistently conveyed through various channels, mainly through
the implied author’s evaluative perspective, which is implicit in plot-
development, characterization and character constellation, 11 but also
through Herbert’s figural point of view, that is to say, predominantly from
outside Pip the narrator’s consciousness and attitude. But a corresponding
tendency also expressses itself, as mentioned above, in sporadic feelings of
guilt and self-accusations on the part of Pip the adult. This critique finally
culminates in his conscious, if partly suppressed, negative assessment of
this script, when he admits to being unhappy and having chosen the
wrong way of life:
As I had become accustomed to my expectations, I had insensibly begun to no-
tice their effect upon myself and those around me. Their influence on my own
character, I disguised from my recognition as much as possible, but I knew very
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11 Cf. Landau (2005).
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well that it was not all good. I lived in a state of chronic uneasiness respecting my
behaviour to Joe. My conscience was not by any means comfortable about Biddy.
When I woke up in the night […] I used to think […] that I should have been
happier and better, if I had never seen Miss Havisham’s face, and had risen to
manhood content to be partners with Joe in the honest old forge. (291)
What is clearly revealed here, as well as in other passages, is Pip’s split
attitude between the emotional attachment to the conventional script of
his social origins and the ambitious fascination with the more highly val-
ued, seductive advancement script.
At this point, the social and historical context in which the desire for
advancement and its critique are situated can be specified more clearly.
This is the tension between, on the one hand, the traditional structures of
society in which rank, calling and identity are determined by origin and
family and, on the other, the possibility and, indeed, the necessity of mo-
bility and activity for the individual, as increasingly brought about by the
process of modernization, frequently motivated by the desire to improve
one’s personal situation and social status. 12 The novel does not view these
divergent tendencies neutrally, but implicitly critizes and devalues the
desire for social advancement in moral terms (see above). This critique is
corroborated by the following features of Pip’s development: his complete
passivity in rising to gentleman status (he does not earn it through
achievement or exemplary behaviour), his fixation on such mere externals
of the elevated position as enjoyment of leisure and pleasure as well as
prestige (he treats the lower ranks with arrogance and recognizes only
claims and privileges but no duties or responsibilities), and finally the
provenance of the property from a criminal, which signifies (at least in this
case) that social advancement is contaminated by criminality (though
Magwitch came by the money through honest work and legal inheritance).
This practical erosion and moral discrediting of the first positive event
during the second phase of Pip’s life story now provides the background
against which the new, suddenly erupting and totally unexpected negative
event acquires a high degree of eventfulness. In the presentation of the
story, this event is specifically announced beforehand by the narrating self:
“a great event in my life, the turning point of my life” (318), whereas for
the experiencing self this turning point is totally unexpected. It is only in
retrospect that the narrating self is able to understand its almost fatal in-
evitability and predetermination, as referred to by Pip immediately before
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12 Cf. Gilmour (1981).
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the beginning of the last chapter of this second part of the novel: “the
event that had impended over me“ and “all the work […] that tended to
that end, had been accomplished; and in an instant the blow was struck,
and the roof of my stronghold dropped upon me” (330). This fatal inevi-
tability is caused by the concatenation of various storylines (see below).
Magwitch’s disclosure to Pip that he intends to make him into a gen-
tleman in gratitude for his support during the escape from the convict
ship completely destroys this gift and thereby Pip’s reliance on the ad-
vancement script. This is because the money, though earned through hon-
est work, is sullied by association with a convict, aggravated by the fact
that Magwitch’s presence in England is illegal, since he is serving a sen-
tence of deportation, and would, if discovered, face the death penalty.
This disclosure opens Pip’s eyes to his true situation and produces in him
a new moral self-awareness, which has far-reaching consequences for the
structure of the semantic field as a frame for behaviour, orientation and
understanding. Pip can no longer follow his old aim of social advance-
ment, for its link with a criminal has definitively undermined the value of
his “expectations”. In other words, the disclosure of the real provenance
of the money given to support his gentleman-status from a member of the
lower classes (and a criminal at that) destroys the justification of these very
class differences. 13 But Pip cannot return to the first sub-field and resume
the alternative course in life (apprenticeship at Joe’s) at the point where he
had abandoned it in favour of becoming a gentleman (341). That is to say,
neither the quasi-modern advancement script (enabled by the increasing
mobility resulting from the modernization of society, but still based on
pre-modern hierarchical concepts of identity and evaluation) nor the tradi-
tional script (conservative orientation on family and class origins) are ulti-
mately viable for Pip. His previous behaviour (especially towards Joe and
Biddy) is irreversible. As a consequence, Pip is now forced to re-structure
his system of values and his world-view. This re-orientation underlies the
developments in the third part of the novel (chapters 40 to 49).
What happens at the end of the second and in the course of the third
part amounts to a re-definition of the former second as a new first sub-
field and the corresponding conceptualization of a new second sub-field. 14
In the new first (i.e. the former second) sub-field, Pip’s existence as a
gentleman, as is particularly clear in retrospect, turned out to be unstable,
unhappy and unfulfilled right from the very beginning. And the first, posi-
tive event is then ultimately annulled by the negative event of Magwitch’s
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13 See Gilmour (1981: 141) and Landau (2005).
14 Gold (1972: 243) describes the three phases of Pip’s development concisely but unspecifi-
cally with the religious terms “Birth”, “Fall” and “Redemption”, a sequence which he sees
foreshadowed as early as the initial chapter.
Charles Dickens: Great Expectations 97
disclosure, which expels Pip from the second sub-field and initiates a de-
velopment, towards a new second sub-field, the definition of which begins
to emerge only slowly. In contrast to the first two events, both of which
were given (by the same person, Magwitch) to a passive Pip without any
effort on his part, he is now obliged to become active himself. The first
step is the conscious renunciation of the great expectations, which Pip
puts into practice without hesitation in financial terms: he refuses to ac-
cept any more money from Magwitch, and from Miss Havisham, for that
matter (409, 421). He retains, however, his emotional attachment to
Estella, a relic of his former wishful thinking about the second sub-field,
which she symbolically embodied for him from the very beginning (257).
Although he loses her to Drummle (another similarly discrediting repre-
sentative of this old second field), he still defines his identity in an almost
Petrarchist manner through his unhappy love for her (378).
Pip’s eventful re-orientation manifests itself in two ways: he renounces
his former attitudes in economic-vocational and in psychological-moral
terms. 15 In other words, the frame for the meaning of the happenings, i.e.
the relevance of the changes in Pip’s behaviour and the results of his ac-
tions, is re-defined – as a shift from passive membership of a (higher)
class to active achievement and, in conjunction with that, from a class-
bound sense of personal superiority to an attitude of caring sympathy and
moral responsibility for others. Instead of relying on gifts from others, Pip
now begins to earn his living through work (albeit initially prompted from
the outside, i.e. following Herbert’s advice), namely as, firstly, an employee
in Herbert’s firm (459f.), then as his representative abroad and, finally, as
his partner (488f., 492), which supplies him with a good income, though
not with a fortune. Thus he replaces an aristocratic, leisure-based ideal
with a markedly middle-class, achievement-oriented concept, which is also
clearly distinct from the career as a craftsman (blacksmith) originally in-
tended for him and does in fact constitute a moderate rise in society. The
other aspect of Pip’s re-orientation concerns his attitude towards other
people, which, since his elevation to the position of gentleman, had related
almost exclusively to their social, class-specific status, not to them as per-
sons and human beings in their own right. This shows particularly in his
condescension to, and distancing of himself from, Biddy and Joe, and later
also Magwitch, in whose case the low social rank is exacerbated by the
stain of the condemned criminal (352ff.). Now Pip recognizes his moral
responsibility for Magwitch (induced, again, by Herbert, 359), tries to
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15 Newey (2004: 18589) describes this development in the sense of a “developmental
novel”, as a process of moral maturing, gaining of insight and overcoming mistakes.
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secure his rescue, accompanies him on his escape (428ff.) and finally feels
deep sympathy and gratitude:
my repugnance to him had all melted away, and in the hunted wounded shackled
creature who held my hand in his, I only saw a man who had meant to be my
benefactor, and who had felt affectionately, gratefully, and generously, towards
me with great constancy […] I only saw in him a much better man than I had
been to Joe. (456 f.)
At the very end, during the proceedings in court and Magwitch’s convic-
tion, Pip openly attests his loyalty to him by holding his hand (466ff.), and
he eases Magwitch’s death by revealing to him that his daughter Estella is
alive (469ff.).
An important stage in Pip’s development of sympathy and under-
standing for other people is his clandestine, generous financial support for
Herbert, which has already begun during his aristocratic phase (314, 317f.)
and continues in the third part (408f., 427f.). A comparable shift to hu-
mane moral maturity occurs in his relations with Miss Havisham – from
sympathetic understanding to forgiveness for the suffering she has in-
flicted on him (408415). Pip’s behaviour towards Joe and Biddy is now
marked by humility, feelings of guilt and an awareness of his own mis-
takes. In the end, he even wants to marry Biddy but is not angry that she
prefers Joe, sincerely wishing them happiness (487ff.). The second sub-
field, which Pip enters by slow degrees after the de-stabilization of his
position in the world of “great expectations”, is defined by emotional
sympathy, human solidarity and social equality as well as the determination
to earn his livelihood by work and personal achievement – a decidedly
middle-class and non-aristocratic concept. It is only with respect to Estella
that Pip clings to his original great expectations. But she, too, has been
humanized through suffering (“I have been bent and broken, but – I hope
– into a better shape”, 493), and in the end Pip even envisages their ulti-
mate coming together in the future: “I saw no shadow of another parting
from here” (ibid.).
Entering the adult middle-class existence secured by work and regu-
lated by interpersonal norms of solidarity and sympathy 16 , as such, did not
possess a high degree of eventfulness in the 19th century. But here the
degree is considerably – and deliberately – heightened by the fact that this
development presents itself as a deviation from the (failed and morally
discredited) aristocratic way of life. In the novel, the pattern of a middle-
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16 Using a psycho-analytical approach, Brooks (1984) interprets this last phase of Pip’s devel-
opment as a liberation from plot, in the sense of a disillusionment. From the perspective of
the present study, the analysis of plot-constructions on the basis of schema theory, Pip’s
final development can plausibly be described as the realization of a specific (bourgeois)
script.
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class life story as a model (and as a script for living) is represented primar-
ily by Herbert and Clara (e.g. 389, 459f., 489), but also – later – by Joe and
Biddy (though on a socially lower level). Both life-stories serve as a foil or
contrast to Pip’s precarious, problematic development: Herbert (together
with Clara) functions as an ideal and a model, all the more so when one
considers that he follows the bourgeois script despite possessing aristo-
cratic status; and Joe and Biddy represent the lower-class alternative which
had been offered to Pip but was rejected. Because Herbert’s difficulties
are merely of a practical and psychological nature (he lacks seed capital
and needs a little “push”), his life story appears less eventful than Pip’s,
who has to overcome the strong internal resistance of ethical and ideo-
logical identity concepts (his pompous fixation on aristocratic values).
However, Pip’s attainment of a mature, responsible, successful mid-
dle-class existence is a qualified one, both economically and morally. On
the one hand, he is not granted the opportunity to realize this life in Eng-
land and with a family of his own, but only abroad and as a bachelor
(489) 17 – and he is unable to overcome his ideologically contaminated
obsession with Estella. On the other hand, Pip’s moral reformation is not
complete. Although he feels deep sympathy for Magwitch and recognizes
his goodness, Pip retains relics of moral self-righteousness and presump-
tuousness towards him, as is betrayed in an allusion to the biblical parable
of the pharisee and the publican (Luke 18: 1014), which he misquotes
revealingly, when he says “O Lord, be merciful to him, a sinner!” (470)
instead of “God be merciful to me a sinner” (emphasis added). 18 The end
of the novel thus presents a qualified positive eventfulness.
The course of Pip’s life, with all its eventful turns, is largely determined by
two storylines, which start before his childhood and remain hidden in the
background during the first phase of his development. 19 These are the
life-stories of Miss Havisham and Abel Magwitch, both of which are seri-
ously interrupted and ultimately destroyed by negative events, caused in
both cases by the same person: Compeyson, an unscrupulous, brutal and
cold-blooded criminal of aristocratic origin and education – yet another
indication given by the implied author of how morally discredited the
aristocratic rank is. Compeyson enters Miss Havisham’s life as her fiancé,
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17 Cf. Herbst (1990: 137f.).
18 See Newey (2004: 194f.).
19 Cf. Brooks (1984), who reconstructs the configuration of the two open and the two re-
pressed plots, analyzing the various processes of reading and decyphering.
100 Peter Hühn
but then seizes hold of part of her fortune with the help of her corrupt
(drunkard) brother, fails to appear at their wedding and disappears with
the money – a seriously traumatic event for her, destroying her vitality and
practically arresting her life and its development, which she expresses
symbolically by wearing her wedding dress and preserving the room deco-
ration of the wedding day. In Magwitch’s case, Compeyson acts as his
instigator and partner in numerous joint criminal activities, frequently
betraying and taking advantage of him. In the end, when they are arrested
and taken to court, Compeyson manages to secure a mitigation of the
penalty for himself and a heavier sentence for Magwitch (deportation for
life) by shifting the blame – on account of his status as a gentleman – onto
his socially inferior associate, Magwitch (361ff.). In addition, Compeyson
also seems to be partly responsible for the breakup of Magwitch’s family
and the loss of his beloved daughter (Estella), together with her mother
(418f.). In both cases, the negative events cause the interruption and seri-
ous blockage of their lives’ development. In Miss Havisham’s case, the
eventful transition to fulfilled adulthood as a woman is arrested: the non-
occurence of the (planned and expected) positive event constitutes a nega-
tive one of a high degree. In Magwitch’s case, a continued life in freedom
in his native country and the emotional fulfilment of his roles as father
and husband are withheld from him, which, because of his criminal past,
may rank somewhat lower on the scale of (negative) eventfulness.
Both Compeyson’s victims design compensatory plots to overcome
the negative events and make up for their destructive effects, and both
utilize a child for this, i.e. they project the blocked positive development
onto a young substitute figure and this figure’s development, manipulating
(“plotting”) it by means of money. 20 Miss Havisham uses Estella as an
invulnerable, vengeful substitute for herself: she trains her to be an unfeel-
ing, seductive lady, attracting men and making them unhappy. Magwitch
uses Pip (in gratitude for the help with his escape) in two respects – as a
child-substitute for his lost daughter and as a positive substitute figure for
himself: he has Pip educated as a gentleman so that he will be spared his
own negative experience on account of his low rank, and so that he may
be able to lead a fulfilled life. 21 So the motives differ in moral terms. While
Miss Havisham uses Estella merely as a means for translating hatred and
revenge into action (against men), Magwitch’s motives of gratitude and
(transposed) love refer to Pip as object. That is to say, Miss Havisham
intends – by way of compensation for the negative event in her life caused
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20 For an analysis of the destructive effects of “plotting” people’s lives, cf. Barfoot (1976),
also Hara (1986).
21 Cf. Gold’s (1972: 246f.) description of the mechanisms of compensation employed by
Magwitch and Miss Havisham in contrast to the secret strategy of support for Herbert.
Charles Dickens: Great Expectations 101
The staggered events of Great Expectations and their reversals and shifts
in the course of the plot-development are to be understood, as indicated
above, in reference to the context of the British class hierarchy and its
socio-historical changes from the 18th to the 19th century, which is gener-
ally relevant to large sections of English fiction at the time: that is, the
traditionally strict separation between the lower and middle classes, de-
fined by the need to work for a living, and a privileged upper class, enti-
tled to a life of leisure, good living and self-cultivation. This hierarchy was
subject to change in two respects. Socially, it became possible, to a certain
extent, to cross the strict class boundaries (for wealthy middle-class entre-
102 Peter Hühn
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22 Cf. e.g. Checkland (1964: 281324).
23 See above pp. 45î58 and pp. 59î69.
24 For a general description of this complexity, cf. Gilmour (1981: 10546).
25 Cf. Landau (2005).
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Joe/Biddy) and contrast (with the failed examples of Miss Havisham and
Magwitch).
References
Thomas Hardy’s short story “On the Western Circuit” 1 is set in the (fic-
tive) idyllic provincial town of Melchester in south-west England, in a
typical Victorian middle-class environment. The narrative traces the tragic
development of the (erotic) relationship between one man and two
women: the young London lawyer (barrister) Charles Bradford Raye, who
practises in the south and south-west of England and regularly does his
rounds of the courts “on the Western Circuit”, intelligent 30-year-old Mrs
Edith Harnham, who is married to a rich wine-merchant, and the pretty
but naïve country-girl Anna, whom Mrs Harnham has taken into her
household to train as a servant.
ond, they get to know each other by exchanging letters and reveal their
feelings for each other, and in the third, they overcome all doubts and
agree to get married. This plot-development is characterised by a positive
conventional event: the desire of the lovers is fulfilled by their union in
marriage.
This “positive” sequence pattern is interlaced with a second, “nega-
tive” schema, ancient tragedy. 3 This script radically and paradoxically al-
ters the love story script; it transforms the positive development towards
the desired union of a young couple into a catastrophic story of an unde-
sired, “wrong” marriage but only in the perception of the narra-
tor/reader as well as Edith and, at the very end, Charles; not, however, in
the perception of Anna. The coupling of the two schemata is hierarchical,
inasmuch as Charles and Anna’s love story serves as concrete subject mat-
ter and medium for the tragedy script, which is located at a higher level of
abstraction. On this superordinate level, the tragedy script prescribes the
ultimate outcome of the plot the protagonist’s failure and, in addition,
provides a number of additional genre-specific elements and features.
These include the increased occurrence of coincidences, which propel the
plot into unforeseen and adverse directions, as well as the presentation of
blindness and misjudgement (hamartia). In the context of the present
analysis of eventfulness, another feature specific to tragedies is of particu-
lar relevance: anagnorisis, the tragic hero’s sudden recognition of the true
state of affairs a feature that Hardy takes up in his tale as well.
The fatal entanglement leading to the love story’s failure is effected by
the character constellation that underlies the plot-development. In the
manner of an experimental design, as it were, Anna’s position in the love
constellation Anna / Charles is duplicated by the introduction of the fig-
ure of Edith, thereby successively transforming a two-person relationship
(Charles, Anna) into a triangular relationship (Charles, Anna, Edith).
Within this setup, Edith initially acts as a helpmate for Anna. Since Anna
is illiterate, Edith at her request and in her name secretly writes her
letters to Charles in order to facilitate and stabilize the love between them.
Subsequently, however, it is precisely because of this well-meaning assis-
tance that Edith increasingly becomes Anna’s rival and finally takes over
her position altogether, without treacherously having intended this and
without Charles or Anna being aware of it. On account of writing and
reading these letters she inadvertently falls in love with Charles and he
with her, unaware of the real identity of his correspondent. Only on the
wedding day does Charles discover that he had corresponded with Edith
all along and that she is really the one he loves. On the other side of the
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3 For this script, cf. e.g. Frye (1957: 20623).
106 Markus Kempf
relationship, Edith, too, realizes only on the wedding day what catastro-
phic consequences her interference in this relationship has had. Anna is
the only character who does not understand the true situation – not even
at the very end. For her, the wedding is the fulfilment of her greatest wish.
The process that leads to this tragic result is triggered and propelled
both by the individual psychological dispositions of the characters (which
in turn are conditioned by the contemporary social context) and by a
chain of coincidences. In the following, I will first analyse the causes of
the love story’s tragic failure, and then discuss the technique of mediation
and finally the problem of eventfulness. The degree and quality of event-
fulness in this story are largely dependent on the position and perspective
of the instances concerned and differ considerably. 4
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4 Hardy’s “On the Western Circuit” has received little critical attention. Ray (1997: esp.
20117) concentrates on the tale’s genesis and editorial history. This is also the main con-
cern of Page (1974: 7584), who then briefly sketches the content. Only Plotz (1996) in-
terprets the story in detail, primarily discussing the difference between illusion and reality
as well as the incursion of modernity into rural England, a prominent theme in Hardy’s
novels and short stories. Plotz sees both themes metonymically presented in the round-
about scene at the beginning of the tale. This passage shows, he argues, that Hardy consid-
ers modern technology the main cause for the indivdual’s loss of control and reality.
Thomas Hardy: “On the Western Circuit” 107
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5 For a description of the structure of double-bind situations, see Watzlawick, Beavin &
Jackson (1967).
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grounds. Thus, from now on, all her actions with regard to Charles and
Anna are ambiguous and doubly motivated: on the surface, by unselfish
assistance to Anna; in reality, by selfish gratification of her own desires.
This is Edith’s tragic conflict.
During the second phase of the love story, the correspondence be-
tween the lovers, the paradoxical situation spins out of control more and
more. On the female side of the correspondence, one can observe a grow-
ing shift from Anna (and her decreasing contributions) to Edith, whose
unconscious longings and needs gain in intensity and momentum. In con-
crete terms, this process manifests itself in the fact that Edith writes the
letters on her own more frequently, thereby increasingly taking over
Anna’s position. This development is facilitated on the one hand by
Anna’s blindness, naivity and passivity, on the other by the occurrence of
coincidences. Another decisive factor is Edith’s inability to understand
and control her own urges and to assess the consequences of her actions.
This phase is further divided into two sub-phases by the disclosure of
Anna’s pregnancy. During the first sub-phase, which lasts for several
weeks (96), Edith and Anna read and write the letters together (although
Anna’s contribution in formulating them is marginal). This established and
mutually agreed-on procedure is then given a new direction by a coinci-
dence. A new letter arrives from Charles, while Anna is absent. Encour-
aged by this opportunity and driven by her unfulfilled longing, Edith an-
swers the letter “on her own responsibility” (97) for the first time. This
new development is complicated by Anna’s return the next day and the
disclosure of her pregnancy a result of the rendezvous between Charles
and Anna in the first phase of their love story: Charles threatens to break
off their relationship. As this would be unacceptable both to pregnant
Anna and to infatuated Edith, the latter devises a strategy “to keep the
young man’s romantic interest in [Anna] alive” (98). For this purpose, she
rejects Anna’s rash impulse to write him a reproachful letter and com-
poses a cautious message instead, in which she expresses understanding
for his distress and anxiety about the pregnancy (98). This mature and
generous gesture so impresses Charles that he falls in love with Anna
more deeply and resumes contact with her.
It is highly ironic that Edith’s intervention makes it possible for the fa-
tal course of the affair to continue beyond its impending premature termi-
nation only to lead to an even greater catastrophe in the end. During the
following second sub-phase of this plot’s correspondence section, the
displacement of Anna by Edith is facilitated even further, because Anna is
compelled to leave Melchester for the time being and to go back to her
family in the country when Mr Harnham learns about her pregnancy, and
has to entirely entrust the continuation of the correspondence with
Thomas Hardy: “On the Western Circuit” 109
brought about (105): for Charles marriage with the “wrong” woman and
for Edith the awareness of having wronged her foster child Anna and
Charles as well as her husband. The consequences seem to be the most
dire for Edith, considering that she is already “punished” by her unhappy
marriage. The only character who fails to understand the situation even
now is Anna. Ironically, she mistakes Charles’s composure at the end as
an indication that he has accepted her inability to read and write. She re-
mains completely ignorant of the love that had arisen between her mater-
nal friend and her newly wedded husband.
denly redefined and re-arranged from the opposition of love longing vs.
love fulfilment, discontentment vs. happiness to that of illusion vs. reality,
and expectation vs. disappointment. The world is fundamentally changed
for Charles, after he has seen through the true state of affairs.
No such radical reversal occurs in Edith’s case: she now becomes fully
aware what consequences her behaviour has had on the others, which
makes her suffer severely. But in the last analysis this is only a minor
change on an emotional level. She does not gain such a totally new insight
into the whole situation as Charles does.
From Anna’s perspective, the question of eventfulness appears in a to-
tally different light. As can be gathered from her misreading of Charles’s
reaction at the end, she assumes that the disclosure of her illiteracy has no
negative consequences for their relationship. For her the marriage consti-
tutes a genuinely positive event, the fulfilment of her love and, inciden-
tally, her elevation to a higher social rank. This view is severely qualified,
however, by the perspectives of the two other characters.
The readers, finally, like Edith, will not be as surprised by the negative
event as Charles, since they had been apprised of the coming catastrophe
from the very beginning and because their superior point of view had
allowed them to follow its development in detail. As a result, the degree of
eventfulness is not very high from this perspective.
The plot and eventfulness of the short story refer to two contemporary
contexts, a general and a concrete one. As for the general context, the
presentation of the characters as blind, powerless and prone to illusion is a
reflection of the widespread contemporary loss of belief in the subject’s
autonomy as a consequence of the erosion of optimistic religious and
philosophical concepts in the course of the process of modernization. The
fictional world of Hardy’s story does not include a superior divine power
(such as God’s Providence in 18th-century novels) 6 that directs the hap-
penings towards a positive and happy conclusion in accordance with a
benevolent plan of salvation; nor does it refer to the Enlightenment ideals
of reason and rationality or the 19th-century trust in progress. On the con-
trary, all characters are shown to be driven by their unconscious urges and
longings, and their interactions are governed by the modern and at the
same time very archaic principle of chance and coincidence. Hardy’s pro-
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6 Cf. the analyses of Defoe’s, Richardson’s and Fielding’s novels in the present volume, pp.
49î62, 63î73 and 74î83, resp.
112 Markus Kempf
tagonists are powerless and propelled like the people on the roundabout
in the first scene of the story. As Hardy shows also in his novels (e.g. The
Return of the Native, Tess of the D’Urbervilles, Jude the Obscure), these
modern intrusions of contingency and destruction invade a traditonal rural
idyll, convert it into an anti-idyll and make the reader painfully aware of
the detrimental effects of social change. 7 Thematically this short story
shows analogies to Hardy’s poem “The Convergence of the Twain”
(1912), which describes the sinking of the Titanic an emblem of the
modern individual’s claim to absolute autonomy for itself on the basis of
technological masterpieces as the result of the fatal workings of a (secu-
lar) “Imminent Will”.
By way of reference to a more concrete context, the story can more-
over be viewed as a critique of the obsolete Victorian concepts of mar-
riage and women; this, too, is a topic which Hardy repeatedly takes up in
his work. 8 In the last analysis, the tragic entanglement of the story is
largely due to Edith’s unfulfilled sensuality, which is conditioned by the
unhappy marriage forced on her by traditional social expectations and
norms. She wrongs both Charles and Anna by her behaviour only because
she herself had first been a victim of the repressive Victorian middle-class
feminity- and marriage-discourses. The fact that this is the ultimate cause
of the disaster eludes the characters’ consciousness: up to the end, Charles
is unaware that Edith is trapped in an unhappy relationship, and naïve
Anna assumes that the Harnhams’ marriage is a happy one (102). Even
Edith does not recognize the social causes of her own psychological prob-
lems. When, at the end, she sums up the tragic conflict with the following
words: “‘I have ruined [Charles], because I would not deal treacherously
towards [Anna]!’” (106), she misses the real social causes of the disas-
ter. The narrator, too, is rather vague in this respect. At one point he does
discuss the social background of Edith’s unfulfilled sensuality (97), but
ultimately, he does not seem to consider this the main motivation behind
the tragic development of the story. Thus it is then left to the readers to
extract the implicit critique of the contemporary gender- and marriage-
discourses and draw their conclusions for the interpretation of the plot. In
this sense, it could be said that the text constitutes a reception event.
Within the generic frame of the tragedy a potential change of the reader’s
consciousness regarding the gender- and marriage-problem could then be
called the catharsis triggered by the catastrophe.
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9 Henry James: “The Beast in the Jungle” (1903)
Jette K. Wulf
“The Beast in the Jungle” 1 by Henry James tells the story of James
Marcher, who is obsessed with the idea that a decisive event will occur at
some point in the future and thereby determine the meaning of his life.
The nature of this event is entirely unclear to him, yet he is spending his
days in apprehension of it and leading a secluded life withdrawn from
society. This obsession is described in the context of his relationship with
May Bartram, his only friend and confidante, and it is only towards the
end of the story that John Marcher realises – too late – how closely the
meaning of his life and the friendship with May Bartram are actually con-
nected. For only after her death does it dawn on him that precisely by
spending his life waiting for the turning point, he has missed the opportu-
nity of creating a meaningful, fulfilled existence.
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1 Citations refer to the following edition: James (2003).
Henry James: “The Beast in the Jungle” 115
Despite these Puritan aspects, however, the script lacks all religious
connotations – there are no references to the Christian God nor to any
kind of reward or after-life. Ultimately, the script for his life is (uncon-
sciously) chosen by Marcher himself 4 but he views it as something given
and imposed by fate (“One’s in the hands of one’s law”, 317), and as a
consequence, he rejects other scripts offered by and established in the
society around him (such as marrying his companion). In his attempt to
prepare for the arrival of the beast, he turns away from society and opts –
so as not to miss the moment when it comes – for a secluded life charac-
terised by inactivity and waiting. Therein lies the script he develops for
himself in order to make the best possible use of the opportunity that his
life presents for him. However, it is precisely because of its inherent inac-
tivity and negativity that this script of waiting for the great event entails
the risk of utter failure (“he had failed, with the last exactitude, of all he
was to fail of”, 339) as this way of life effectively keeps him from seizing
any opportunity at all and finding himself, instead, “gazing at [...] the
sounded void of his life” (339). 5 Even if the script itself might not be
bound to a certain historical context, the difficulties that are thematized in
connection with it are decidedly modern (see below).
Nevertheless, it is only at the very end of the story that Marcher be-
gins to question his course of action (or rather inaction). For the most
part, he does not show the slightest doubt regarding his perception of his
life and his decisions. The failure that is, unbeknown to him, inherent in
the script is therefore closely related to Marcher’s personality and his lack
of insight, most of all regarding himself. The narrator of the story is het-
erodiegetic, and with the exception of a single paragraph (where May Bar-
tram is focalized from within and it is for once not Marcher’s perception
of her that is narrated) 6 , the text oscillates between focalizing Marcher
from within and from without, 7 thereby bringing out the discrepancy
between his self-perception and his personality as seen from the outside.8
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4 Cf. e.g. Pippin (2000: 94f.), who describes Marcher’s underlying disposition towards culti-
vating the personal myth of the beast as egotism, narcissism and fear of life.
5 Smith (1994: 228f.) describes this paradox dynamic as a kind of “overdrive”: “the more we
are excited by the promise of a grand design, the more likely we are to be panicked into
missing the story altogether”.
6 James (2003: 315).
7 The act of narration is played down, yet it is thematised, even if the signs are scarce, as are
explicit comments or judgements about the protagonists.
8 For the problem of observation and perspective, see Segal (1969). The story comprises
several observation constellations: May observes Marcher, Marcher observes May observ-
ing him, both are aware of how they are observed by society, and the reader, finally, ob-
serves the whole setup. Heyns (1997: 114î19) argues that May Bartram’s ability to step
back and observe others (including the knowledge she thereby gains and the judgment she
can make) put her into a more powerful position than most critics give her credit for.
Henry James: “The Beast in the Jungle” 117
May Bartram is Marcher’s only companion with whom he shares his secret
as well as his life in waiting, and she is the only one who knows what he
considers his true self and his abilities:
he knew each of the things of importance he was insidiously kept from doing,
but she could add up the amount they made, understand how much, with a
lighter weight on his spirit, he might have done, and thereby establish how, clever
as he was, he fell short. (315)
“The Beast in the Jungle” also tells the story of their relationship, as it
begins with their (re)acquaintance and ends after her death. 10 While May
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9 See e.g.: “the sense of being kept for something rare and strange”, “a larger conception of
singularity for him”, James (2003: 309, 314 resp.).
10 Heyns (1997) argues that “The Beast in the Jungle” includes two narratives, the (primary)
story of Marcher’s egotism and May’s secondary plot of female desire. Her secondary plot
118 Jette K. Wulf
Bartram and the friendship with her seem at first rather insignificant to
Marcher, they turn out to be crucial both for him and for the reader’s
understanding of him, for the event of the story and for illustrating his
personality and self-centredness. For the most part, he regards himself and
his project not only as the centre of his own existence but of hers as well.
It is stressed again and again that he does not want to allow himself to
indulge in selfishness, that he is careful to keep a balance between himself
and May Bartram, yet his behaviour demonstrates quite the opposite. His
view of the relationship with May Bartram is above all characterized as
useful and profitable to him (a fact he himself realises towards the end of
the story). The reader learns surprisingly little about her life apart from the
fact that she is waiting with Marcher (and one is led to believe that there
actually might not be much more than that), yet this is mainly due to the
fact that Marcher himself (as the main object of focalization) reduces his
perception of her to those aspects related to him, a definite sign of his
self-centredness. Even when he learns of her fatal illness and begins to
realize her imminent death, his major concern is the fear that she might
not live to learn the nature of the event that will occur to him. This
asymmetrical constellation changes only during their final conversations,
as he realizes that she knows more, and one might argue that at the very
end he begins to respect her attitude towards life (posthumously) instead
of seeing nothing but the service she has rendered him. 11
At the beginning of the story, John Marcher and May Bartram meet
on an afternoon in October at Weatherend, a country house in England.
He is among the visitors, while she is obviously related to the owners and
– as she is financially less well off – allowed to stay with them. It turns out
that they actually met before – a fact that he does not remember right
away, unlike her who has a perfect recollection of the origins of their ac-
quaintance. They first met in Naples ten years before (she – a young
woman at the age of twenty – travelling with her mother and her brother,
he with common friends) and visited Pompeii together. His initial fears
that there might have been some sort of romantic feelings between them
are soon dispersed. 12 However, it turns out that their meeting was of
much greater significance, since – as he learns to his utmost surprise – he
had shared his greatest secret with her by telling her about the beast.
(Since she is the only other person in the world who knows about this, it
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is, of course, closely related to the secondary frame (love) for the meaning and relevance of
the “beast”.
11 Even then, however, he is still more concerned with what he himself had missed than with
what it must have meant to her.
12 This is a first indication of the problem of defining the frame of the story and the signifi-
cance of the event (see above).
Henry James: “The Beast in the Jungle” 119
is somewhat strange that he does not recall telling her, but this might be
explained as yet another sign of his self-centredness.) The fact that he
confided in her – and that she is very sensitive in her inquiry about it –
immediately (re)establishes a connecting sense of familiarity between
them, a “missing link” (305), which is sealed by her quick decision to wait
with him.
The second and third parts of the story summarise the process of their
waiting together – she has inherited some money from her aunt, and even
though she is still far from rich, it allows her to set up a small house in
London. Their ensuing lives are characterized by a quiet and uneventful
stability. Even though the reason for their waiting is raised in their con-
versation, the topic has lost some of its urgent threat making way for a
sense of acceptance. There are only two signs that this is about to change:
firstly, Marcher gets the impression that May Bartram knows more about
the nature of the beast than he does (“it had come up to him then that she
‘knew’ something”, 320); and secondly, there is the first reference to her
declining health and her fatal illness, “a deep disorder in the blood” (321).
The implication of both facts alarms him (“he felt somehow the shadow
of a change and the chill of a shock”, 321), yet at this point this does not
penetrate the core of his identity: he still clings to “the consciousness in
him that there was nothing she could ‘know’, after all, better than he did.
She had no source of knowledge that he hadn’t equally”, and he dreads
“losing her by some catastrophe – some catastrophe that yet wouldn’t at
all be the catastrophe” (321). His understanding both of his life’s script
and of their relationship – including the subordinate position he ascribes
to her – is still intact.
This changes, however, with their two final conversations (parts IV
and V), in which May Bartram confesses that she does indeed know more,
yet (initially) refuses to share any details of her knowledge with him and
insists that it is better for him to be spared this insight. She only admits
that the beast has already come, that what he has been waiting for has
already happened – “the door’s open” (328) and “You’ve nothing to wait
for more. It has come” (330).
He thus concludes that his fate lies in the fact that nothing is going to
happen in his life, a fact he seemingly learns to accept. Following her
death, he is hurt by society’s non-acknowledgement of their relationship
and the status it had for both of them – having refused to form any kind
of relationship socially accepted or established, he has also lost any chance
of being perceived as someone bereaved of a loved one (“his lack [...] of
producible claim. [...] in the view of society, he had not been markedly
bereaved”, 333). Leaving London for travelling in Asia, he learns to cher-
ish the past they shared and to derive joy from his memories. However,
120 Jette K. Wulf
only after he has returned home (and more precisely to her grave) does he
realize that he has never actually known any passion or deep feelings in his
life (“No passion had ever touched him”, 338), and the realization of the
opportunities he has missed – above all that his friend did actually love
him and that with her he might have shared passion and feelings (“she was
what he had missed”, 339) – causes him to break down.
The opening scene, the meeting at Weatherend, already mirrors the
constellation of the relationship between Marcher and Bartram as it is
developed throughout the following parts. It is she who perfectly recalls
every detail of their first encounter (and has been thinking about it since),
whereas he – even as the memories are coming back to him – mixes them
all up (which does not keep him from regarding himself as superior to
her). In this scene, his behaviour is described as “in his haste to make
everything right he had got most things rather wrong” (305) – a statement
which may serve as a brilliant meta-comment on his story as a whole.
Initially, he considers her inferior and of little importance to him (“He was
satisfied [...] that this young lady might roughly have ranked in the house
as a poor relation; satisfied also that she was [...] a part of the establish-
ment – almost a working, a remunerated part”, 304); but, almost imper-
ceptibly, their positions are changing, and it turns out that she is in fact
superior to him in what might be referred to as ‘knowledge’ or ‘insight’
(even though the extent to which he sees through his initial misconception
is open to discussion).
This point leads to the question of the semantic fields which are estab-
lished in the story. They can be described in two respects, which are
closely linked with each other: on the one hand, as ‘ignorance’ vs. ‘knowl-
edge’/‘insight’, on the other, as ‘lack’ vs. ‘fulfilment’ and ‘aloofness’ vs.
‘commitment’. At the beginning, both Marcher and Bartram are in the
first sub-field: they share the conviction that the beast will come and agree
to spend their lives waiting to learn about its nature, i.e. to cross the bor-
der. During the following years, particularly as she falls ill, the conviction
grows in him that she has gained a knowledge which she keeps secret
from him: “I’m only afraid of ignorance now – I’m not afraid of knowl-
edge” (326). Even when she admits that this is the case – that what they
have been waiting for has indeed happened – she refuses to tell him more
about it and insists that he keep himself from wanting to know. In other
words, she has already transgressed the border into the other sub-field of
knowledge (i.e., about the nature of the beast), whereas he – aware that
she has entered the new sub-field – is forced to stay behind. He then
leaves her with the understanding that his fate – the decisive event in his
life – may lie exactly in the fact that nothing will ever happen:
Henry James: “The Beast in the Jungle” 121
The change from his old sense to his new was absolute and final: what was to
happen had absolutely and finally happened that he was as little able to know a
fear for his future as to know a hope; so absent in short was any question of any-
thing still to come. (334)
This insight, however, is not sufficient – at this point, it does not evoke
any emotions but a stale disappointment (at the fact that, after all, he
might not be as special as he believed himself to be); it does not (yet)
cause him painful regret or sorrow to realise how much he has missed out
on (not so much because the opportunity did not present itself as pre-
cisely because he did not act). Only later does he recognise “something he
had utterly, insanely missed [...] He had seen outside of his life, not learned
it within” (338). This semantic dimension of ignorance vs. knowledge of
what is important in life is closely linked to the practice of living itself, the
semantic sub-fields of aloofness and lack vs. (emotional) commitment and
fulfilment. One can assume that May Bartram gains her knowledge as her
life comes to a close without fulfilment; and it is this position, too, that
allows her to evaluate her life (as well as that of Marcher) and draw a con-
clusion. The tragedy that constitutes the event thus lies in the full aware-
ness that one has wasted one’s own life – at a point where it is already
impossible to change that, because for Marcher, the chance is lost forever
with May Bartram’s death.
“The Beast in the Jungle” presents two events for the protagonist, one
after the other, in accordance with the two dimensions of the semantic
field outlined above. 13 With respect to the opposition ignorance vs.
knowledge Marcher undergoes an eventful (cognitive) change immediately
after May Bartram’s death (towards the end of part V), when he recog-
nises that the long-awaited event may have consisted in the fact that noth-
ing has happened and nothing will happen, in the absence of an eventful
transformation (as quoted above). But this is not the last stage in
Marcher’s development. So far, the focus has mainly been on the act of
recognition and not so much on the relevance and meaning of what is
recognised. This finally happens more than a year after May Bartram’s
death, after Marcher’s return from a long journey, when he observes a
fellow-mourner in the graveyard. He suddenly understands that he has
irrevocably wasted his life by leading a withdrawn existence and avoiding
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13 Cf. Heyns (1997: 119f.), who – somewhat similarly – distinguishes two “leaps” of the beast
– Marcher’s unawareness of what has happened (nothing) during his penultimate visit to
May and the dramatic recognition on May’s grave.
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14 Bell (1991) argues that a story with a negative result, lacking an event, is also a story: “The
story disproves the idea that negativity can be maintained. It suggests that there is always a
story, that in not writing one one writes another” (272).
15 In terms of this final event, Marcher does not follow May Bartram, as the semantic sub-
fields connected with this ultimate realisation can be described less in terms of ‘ignorance’
vs. ‘knowledge’, but of ‘aloofness’ vs. ‘emotional involvement’, and one might argue that,
unlike Marcher, May Bartram has never been aloof – otherwise she would not have spent
her life waiting with him as she did.
Henry James: “The Beast in the Jungle” 123
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16 See Pippin (2000). Bell (1991: 262) identifies the sterile, static condition of waiting as
specifically modern, as in Beckett’s Waiting for Godot. Tambling (2000: 170f.) also de-
scribes the “fate of nothing happening” as “a modern condition” and refers to Marcher’s
life as “the representative fate of ‘the man of his time’”.
124 Jette K. Wulf
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10 James Joyce: “Grace” (1914)
Peter Hühn
The plot of James Joyce’s “Grace” 1 , from his collection of short stories
Dubliners, concerns the spiritual, moral and social rehabilitation (through
the benevolent intervention of his friends) of Tom Kernan, a middle-class
businessman fallen into disrepute as a result of keeping bad company and
drinking excessively. Although the semantic field in “Grace” is ultimately
based on social norms, its division into sub-fields is constructed not so
much as a clear hierarchy of two social classes (as is, e.g., the hierarchy of
the middle and the upper class in Richardson’s Pamela), but rather as the
opposition of exclusion and inclusion with respect to one class alone, the
middle class, i.e. between being “outside” (in the sense of “beneath”) and
“inside” the middle class. The boundary between these sub-fields is de-
fined primarily by social and economic criteria such as financial solidity
(lacking vs. possessing a reliable income as a businessman or a senior civil
servant), reputation (disreputableness vs. respectableness) and integration
(being isolated and rejected vs. being accepted and supported by friends).
In addition, the boundary is symptomatically determined according to
moral and religious categories in the form of undisciplined behaviour vs.
moral integrity, dissolution vs. righteousness, reli-gious indifference vs.
devout Catholicism. With respect to Kernan’s changing state, this opposi-
tion is illustrated in spatial terms as the contrast between lavatory and pub
on the one hand and bedroom (in a bourgeois home) (144ff.) and church
(157ff.) on the other.
All in all, Kernan travels a double trajectory with two events, of sorts:
first, a sequence of degeneration, set mainly before the beginning of the
text, which ends in the negative event of an ultimate decline; secondly, a
sequence of restoration î narrated in the course of “Grace” î with the
implication of the equivalent positive event, the cancellation of the previ-
ous fall. The text opens with the final stage of the first sequence, the
completion of Kernan’s prior downward movement from the higher to
the lower sub-field, his fall from the status of middle-class respectability,
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1 Joyce (1977: 13859); page references cited hereafter in the text.
126 Peter Hühn
literally a drunken fall down the stairs of a pub into the lavatory and onto
the filthy lavatory floor in a state of unconsciousness, which even arouses
the suspicion of the police (13839). What the short story then goes on to
narrate in detail is the process of Kernan’s return to a state of “grace”, his
new rise and re-entry into respectable middle-class society – an upward
movement deliberately engineered by his friends as Kernan’s conspicuous
crossing back over a boundary and his public re-admittance into the
community of respectable businessmen and devout Catholics, in the form
of a religious retreat organised by the Jesuits. Thus the general frame of
the story can be identified as social, the social status of the protagonist as
well as all other figures and the social significance of the happenings. The
specific movement, however, conforms to a religious script, the schema of
penitence and redemption, “making him turn over a new leaf”, “making a
new man of him” (143), and generally giving him a fresh start after his
drunken fall. The title “Grace” is to be read as an allusion to this script –
the hope for God finally granting redemption to the penitent sinner.
In practical terms, Kernan’s friends base his planned process of (so-
cial) rehabilitation on the ritual (religious) script of the “retreat”, which
devout Catholics should regularly take part in for spiritual re-adjustment
and the cleansing of their sins and which involves, as they colloquially put
it, “owning up” and “washing the pot” (cf. 149–50). Though Kernan’s
transformation does not involve deviating from this positive script but
conforming to it, this conformity nevertheless does qualify as eventful
within the implied social and religious context (Catholic Ireland) because
of its adherence to central (Christian) schemata of self-improvement and
renewal against the powerful threat of the negative script of sinful decline
and degeneration. One can ascribe a relatively high degree of eventfulness
to this change because of the spiritual significance attached to the return
of a repenting sinner to the fold. 2 The specific context within which this
transformation through repentance figures as eventful is clearly referred to
in the verbal utterances of Kernan’s friends when they talk about confess-
ing their sins (“owning up”, 149–50), making Kernan “a good holy pious
and God-fearing Roman Catholic”, and renouncing “the devil […], not
forgetting his works and pomps” (156). The purported transformation is
underscored in particular by the priest, Father Purdon, at the conclusion
of the church “retreat”, in his sermon on the parable of the unjust stew-
ard, 3 which he ends by voicing the repentant sinner’s trust in God’s for-
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2 Cf. the parable of the prodigal son in Luke 15: 11–32. This story of the son who, after
squandering his inheritance abroad, returns home repentant and is joyfully welcomed by
his father, is meant to illustrate God’s grace and loving forgiveness and always functions as
a powerful script for Christians.
3 Luke 16: 1–13.
James Joyce: “Grace” 127
giveness: “[… ] I have looked into my accounts. I find this wrong and this
wrong. But, with God’s grace, I will rectify this and this. I will set right my
accounts” (159). The text of this parable and Father Purdon’s interpretive
rendering of it in his sermon represent a variation and corroboration of
the script of repentance and redemption, which the friends have deliber-
ately functionalised as their strategy for restoring Kernan.
Thus, for Tom Kernan and his friends as well as, by implication, the
community as a whole, the story ends with the public and therefore so-
cially valid act of Kernan re-crossing the boundary into the second sub-
field of Dublin’s respectable middle-class society – a completed positive
event clearly understood as a reversal of the negative fall at the beginning.
2. Subversions of Eventfulness
dles! No, damn it all, I bar the candles!”, 157). His use of words like “job”
and “business” for the religious activities anticipates the commercial tenor
of Father Purdon’s sermon. The priest is praised for his worldly attitude
(“He’s a man of the world like ourselves”, 151), and his sermon does, in
fact, endorse predominantly and exclusively secular values, something
which is revealed by the choice of the parable of the unjust steward as his
reference text, with its employment of money, commercial success and
even fraud as metaphors of redemption (158–59). 6 The extent to which
the isolation of certain of this notoriously difficult passage’s commercial
images from their broader context leads to a serious falsification of the
general drift of the parable shows in the fact that Christ’s concluding,
unambiguous sentence is omitted:
“No servant can serve two masters: for either he will hate the one, and love the
other; or else he will hold to the one, and despise the other. Ye cannot serve God
and mammon.” 7
Moreover, this association or even equation of spiritual and commercial
values both in the priest’s sermon and in the businessmen’s attitude im-
plies Calvinist rather than Catholic tendencies 8 and thus, ironically, further
undermines the validity of the supposed religious transformation. 9
Thirdly, the entirely superficial quality of Kernan’s change is under-
lined by the pointedly non-religious, colloquial use of the word “grace”
throughout the story. 10 Instead of expressing his desire for God’s loving
forgiveness and his own spiritual salvation, this term primarily refers to his
newly cleaned hat. In accordance with Kernan’s maxim from his former
state of respectability before his fall (“By the grace of these two articles of
clothing [i.e. a silk hat and a pair of gaiters], he said, a man could always
pass muster”, 142), his recovery is reductively reflected in the material
transformation of his silk hat from its dirty and battered condition on the
lavatory floor at the beginning (138–39) to its “rehabilitated” appearance
at the end (158). When the priest finally mentions the term “grace” in his
sermon (“with God’s grace, I will rectify this and this. I will set right my
accounts”, 159), it is reduced almost to a colloquial expression, and be-
_____________
6 Norris (2003: 204) points out that the parable “functions as both mirror and moral model
for these men who survive commercial failure by shrewdly manipulating loans, debts, fa-
vors, bribes, and other exchange transactions”.
7 Luke 16: 13. Cf. Schneider (1982: 54) and esp. Zwierlein (2003: 90). For a detailed discus-
sion of the complex meaning of this parable, cf. Schneider (1997: 27179).
8 This aspect of Protestantism seems to be more significant in this context than the tenden-
cies of Protestant liberalism and gentlemanliness which Hodgkins (1995) detects in the
story.
9 Another technique of subverting the seriousness of Kernan’s conversion, as Zwierlein
(2003: 8693) has argued, is the pervasive parody of the Jesuit spiritual exercises.
10 Cf. Schneider (1982: 55).
James Joyce: “Grace” 129
sides, the phrase has been contaminated by its pervasive association with
something so quotidian as elegant outward appearance and rings entirely
hollow. The sarcastic implication of reductiveness also applies to the title
of the short story and thus calls into question the eventful plot-
development as a whole. 11
And fourthly, the succession of the three spatial stations in Kernan’s
reformation – from falling down in the pub lavatory via the recovery in
his bedroom to the reception into the community of the retreat – can be
read as an intertextual allusion to the script of Dante’s Divina Comme-
dia: 12 the ascent from inferno via purgatorio to paradiso – a further ironi-
cal subversion of the seriousness of Kernan’s reform. 13
When combined, these various signals suggest to the reader 14 that the
superior values of the second sub-field (in opposition to the first), on
which Kernan’s planned rehabilitation is meant to rely for its eventfulness
– moral integrity, religious seriousness, social respectability, financial solid-
ity – are no longer intact and do not really still exist among the community
which he is about to re-enter. The friends’ dialogues in the course of their
plot and the information about the characters provided by the narrator
reveal these values to be generally eroded by commercialism, hypocrisy,
corruption and superficiality. In reality, Kernan does not cross a boundary
at all, but basically stays within the same sub-field in which he first appears
as fallen, merely undergoing a change in degree and altering his outward
appearance. The text of the short story invalidates the connection of the
projected change to the context that makes it possible, a religiously seri-
ous, morally upright and economically sound middle-class society, activat-
ing instead a different kind of context: the petty-bourgeois, bigoted, self-
_____________
11 This technique of surreptitiously undermining the serious meaning of the happenings
through the ironic use of style and allusion or innuendo is pervasive in “Grace”, as Kain
(1969) has shown in detail.
12 This is from Stanislaus Joyce’s (1958: 225) interpretation of “Grace”, which has been
accepted by numerous critics, e.g. Kain (1969: 146ff.).
13 Although this intertextual allusion conforms to the same basic structure as the underlying
penitence-and-redemption script, it gains a decidedly ridiculous effect by coupling Dante’s
grand cosmological design with the trivial and sordid places of contemporary city life.
14 Cf. Schneider (1997: 268), who stresses the cognitive discrepancy between characters and
reader as a pervasive technique of Dubliners: “Joyce uses the satirical strategy of letting the
characters expose themselves, and challenges the reader to form his or her own judgment”.
See also Leonard (2006: 97f.). Norris (2003: 207ff.) attributes complicity with “worldliness
and bourgeois snobbery” to narrator and text, thus missing Joyce’s indirect, ironic tech-
nique of criticism.
130 Peter Hühn
conceited urban society of Dublin at the turn of the century, as Joyce sees
it. 15 The short story builds up the expectation and notion of a decisive
event only to unmask it as superficial and hollow: in this kind of society,
no eventful change is possible. 16
“Grace” thus refers to two contexts, i.e. concepts of the contempo-
rary social order, and accordingly features eventfulness at two levels: on
the one hand, the diegetic level of the characters and their consciousness,
with their reliance on the notion of a consolidated, vital middle-class
community and its moral as well as financial integrity and, on the other,
the extradiegetic level of the narrator together with, by implication, the
reader, for whom the middle class in Dublin is characterised by stagna-
tion, paralysis and corruption, by the hollowness of its morality and reli-
gion. That Kernan’s eventful change is “plotted” by the friends within the
story (“[Kernan] was quite unconscious that he was the victim of a plot”,
144, cf. 145) essentially undermines its relevance. Kernan remains com-
pletely passive (“a victim”), even facetiously rejecting part of the role pre-
pared for him (“barring the candles”). The detailed narration of the
friends’ plotting allows the reader to see through Kernan’s intended
change and recognise it as manipulation, which qualifies it as superficial
and relative. To the characters – both Kernan and his friends – the event
seems valid; for the narrator and the reader, however, nothing really takes
place.
_____________
17 Leonard (2006: 97f.) gives a general description of the severe cognitive limitations of the
protagonists in Dubliners, which the reader is meant to overcome in his or her mind.
18 Gilbert (1957: 62f.): letter dated 20 May 1906.
19 Gilbert (1957: 64): letter dated 23 June 1906.
20 The other possible events in this kind of stagnant society seem to be total collapse (as in
the short story “Eveline”) or total rejection through emigration and exile (as envisaged in
Joyce’s A Portrait of the Artist of a Young Man).
132 Peter Hühn
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————
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11 Joseph Conrad: The Shadow-Line: A Confession
(1917)
Peter Hühn
taking the ship through the Gulf can be confronted, a first obstacle occurs
in the form of an intrigue to prevent the narrator from taking command
of the sailing ship in the first place (17ff.). The Chief Steward of the Har-
bour Office tries to conceal the offer of the command from the protago-
nist in favour of a rival, Hamilton. In spite of increasingly clear signals, the
protagonist does not realize that this opportunity is available. It is only
after Captain Giles has brought the offer and the intrigue to his attention
that he finally understands (28, cf. 37f.) and becomes active, forcing the
Chief Steward to give up the information, then contacting the Harbour
Office and signing the contract. A further complex of difficulties arises
when the narrator takes command on board the ship (52ff.): the initially
hostile attitude of Burns (who himself had aspired to the captain’s posi-
tion), the incompetence of the second mate and especially the malaria
infection of the crew. This means that the captain is also forced to take on
the tasks of the two mates and even, partly, of the crew, staying on deck
practically all the time, until he is completely exhausted. The malaria epi-
demic turns out to be more serious still when the protagonist discovers
after a few days that the old captain had secretly sold the entire stock of
quinine, which makes the medical treatment of the men during the voyage
impossible. The third form of resistance encountered by the protagonist is
the prolonged calm (78ff.) that badly delays the progress of the ship. And,
fourthly, the old captain presents another serious obstacle to the progress
and the success of the voyage in addition to selling the stock of quinine:
the curse on the ship and the magical blockage, as it were, of the passage
across the latitude of his sea grave (86), asserted and conveyed by Burns’s
superstitious fear and mad ramblings. In a more abstract and symbolic
sense, the difficulty associated with the old captain consists in the unpro-
fessional and partly even criminal behaviour of the protagonist’s immedi-
ate predecessor, which proves a severe burden on the successor in the
performance of his duties as master of the ship.
Overcoming these successive obstacles is made possible in practical
terms by the protagonist’s seamanship, his leadership qualities, his per-
sonal commitment, his physical stamina and his persistence, in combina-
tion with the support by others (especially Captain Giles), the willingness
of the crew, the loyalty of Ransome the cook and Burns’s laugh at the
decisive moment, as well as by the traditional solidarity in emergency
situations at sea, as experienced on arrival in Singapore. It is obviously
essential for the success of their undertaking that individual competence
and unreserved personal dedication are still reliant on the assistance of
others, the community, as expressed in the epigraph: “worthy of my undy-
ing regard”, which refers to the willing cooperation of the crew in spite of
their incapacity through illness.
136 Peter Hühn
thus rising to the highest stage of his professional career. This rank does
not only require particular leadership qualities but also considerably raises
the technical demands on his professional competence: sailing vessels are
more difficult to navigate because of their greater dependence on external
factors (weather, crew); in addition, they represent a very traditional, a
more archaic and, as it were, purer type of the profession. The rise from a
subordinate position to the leading role as prescribed by the career script
occurs in two steps: first, formally taking on the position of a captain and,
second, practically and actively proving one’s qualification for this task.
While the protagonist owes the occupation of this post mainly to the ef-
forts of others (esp. Captain Giles), performing the requisite duties consti-
tutes an active achievement on his part. Professionally as well as person-
ally, the actual phase of crossing the boundary consists – as it does very
often in Conrad’s work – of a test as the central point of the script 6 . The
narrator must prove both his nautical competence and his moral strength,
i.e. his ability to direct the crew and the navigation of the ship as well as
his physical and psychological stability, his moral integrity, his understand-
ing and sense of responsibility for others, a challenge of which he is
acutely aware: “the time was approaching for me to behold my command
and to prove my worth in the ultimate test of my profession” (48, cf. 41).
The narrator does pass this test in the end and the story accordingly pre-
sents a successful positive boundary crosssing in the form of personal and
professional accomplishment.
The achievement of professional self-confirmation is also to be seen
in another, more specific frame of reference, that of personal identity 7 .
The narrator defines himself essentially through his professional role and a
strict code of professional ethics:
I discovered how much of a seaman I was, in heart, in mind, and, as it were,
physically – a man exclusively of sea and ships; the sea the only world that
counted, and the ships the test of manliness, of temperament, of courage, and fi-
delity – and of love. (40)
The formation of his identity is accompanied by a high degree of self-
awareness (55). When, in a conversation about the former captain, Burns
mentions the profession they share, the narrator reflects: “He and I were
sailors. That was a claim, for I had no other family” (70). As stressed in
the quotation above, this is a markedly masculine concept of identity
(“test of manliness”). The gender-specific dimension of his conception of
identity is repeatedly thematised by the narrator; for example, when he
describes his relation to his ship as that between lover and beloved: “I was
_____________
6 Cf. Watt (2000: 167) and Hawthorn (1985: xii).
7 Cf. Hawthorn (1985: xii).
138 Peter Hühn
like a lover looking forward to a meeting” (46, cf. 49). Although this iden-
tity has to prove itself in the struggle against the non-human, mostly hos-
tile environment of the sea, it is essentially constituted in the social dimen-
sion: meeting the expectations of others, not only as role-model and
leader with regard to the community of the crew (see 52ff., 63f., 109), but
also specifically as a link in the chain of former captains. The narrator
consciously continues the chain of his predecessors (“a succession of
men”, 52) and expressly sees himself as an heir of something like a dy-
nasty, with the concomitant demands on his bearing:
[...] myself [...] this latest representative of what for all intents and purposes was a
dynasty; continuous not in blood, indeed, but in its experience, in its training, in
its conception of duty, and in the blessed simplicity of its traditional point of
view on life. (53)
On account of the explicit reference to tradition and the adherence to
conventional values and standards, this is an emphatically pre-modern
concept, which is underlined, moreover, by the political comparisons
(with monarchy and aristocracy) in the description of the captain’s posi-
tion: “In that community [i.e. the crew] I stood, like a king in his country,
in a class all by myself. I mean an hereditary king, not a mere elected head
of a state” (62). The narrator is in no doubt, however, that this privilege
has to be earned by achievement and justified by competence.
Lotman’s plot model and his concept of the semantic field provide a
means of relating the eventfulness of these changes in the narrator’s pro-
fessional career and his personal identity to the historical context, and of
specifying their relevance in philosophical terms and in regard to the his-
tory of mentalities. The two phases of the progression in the narrator’s
life, with respect both to his profession and to his identity, can be de-
scribed as an opposition between two sub-fields in the following terms:
youthful vs. adult, immature vs. mature (as to personal development and
education: 3î5, 47), dependent vs. independent, not fully responsible vs.
fully responsible (as to professional competence and position: 28, 33f.,
40f., 44, 63f.), self-orientated vs. community-orientated (as to interper-
sonal relations and morality: 40, 63f.), unstable vs. stable (as to personality
status: 109). These various juxtapositions represent binary pairs of values,
norms and standards of behaviour that share the underlying common
abstract opposition of imperfect vs. perfect or incomplete vs. complete.
This opposition of semantic sub-fields manifests itself in the protago-
nist’s (changing) practical behaviour in relation to the norms of his envi-
ronment. The development starts with his spontaneous dissociation (by
resigning) from his previous connections (“I had never […] felt more
detached from all earthly goings on”, 19) and his resultant mobility in the
first sub-field, obviously out of youthful dissatisfaction and impulsiveness
Joseph Conrad: The Shadow-Line 139
danger of despair. 9 When he first lays eyes on the ship, the narrator de-
clares: “That feeling of life-emptiness which had made me so restless for
the last few months lost its bitter plausibility, its evil influence, dissolved
in a flow of joyous emotion” (49). During the desperate struggle against
the adversities of the voyage, he realizes: “The seaman’s instinct alone
survived whole in my moral dissolution” (109). And a helmsman’s unper-
turbed act of steering the ship is described as “a symbol of mankind's
claim to the direction of its own fate” (76). Very significant in this respect
is the formulation the narrator uses when he first perceives the chance of
obtaining a command: “[…] as soon as I had convinced myself that this
stale, unprofitable world of my discontent contained such a thing as a
command to be seized, I recovered my powers of locomotion” (28). The
allusion to Hamlet (I, 2: 133î37) in this phrase refers to profound nihilis-
tic despair as a constitutive feature of the first sub-field, which the pro-
tagonist opposes by actively accepting the professional challenge, thereby
establishing a second sub-field. 10
The setting as such, i.e. sea and ship, implies a general contextual refer-
ence in that the navy, as well as the merchant navy, as in Conrad’s tale,
possessed a consistently special significance for English national identity
up to the beginning of the 20th century (and beyond) 11 , which enhances
the quasi-symbolic relevance of the happenings and the eventfulness. In
addition, the setting of a sailing ship surrounded by the sea intensifies the
degree of eventful self-confirmation inasmuch as this situation is apt to
increase the challenge to human faculties as well as the risk of failure with
serious consequences for one’s existence.
References to specific contexts of The Shadow-Line are to be seen, on
the one hand, in the conception of the inherent meaninglessness of the
world and, on the other, in the emphatic counter-position of professional-
ism, the work ethic and a strong sense of duty; more particularly, the Brit-
ish maritime code. 12 The sceptical view of a world without a meaningful
order and without God, the pessimistic notion of the powerlessness of
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9 Cf. Hawthorn (1985: xviii ff.).
10 As Hawthorn (1985: xi) points out, the tale contains further allusions to Hamlet, which
reflect the protagonist’s situation somewhat like an – intertextual – script: perception of
malice in the world, the pressure of responsibility, stagnation and despair. In contrast to
Hamlet, the story of Conrad’s protagonist has a positive ending.
11 Cf. Goonetilekke (1990: 94f.).
12 Cf. Schwarz (1982: 84ff.).
Joseph Conrad: The Shadow-Line 141
nist’s former position and also as a (failed) rival for the captain’s post on
account of his physical weakness, jealousy and irrationality. Ransome, too,
mirrors the narrator’s course of action, positively in his admirable compe-
tence, conscientiousness and loyalty, negatively in his weakness (his heart
condition): at the end he reprises the act of resignation with which the
narrator’s further development had set in. But, in Ransome’s case, this
departure is for good. Captain Giles is a helper and a mentor figure, both
initiating the protagonist’s development and acting as a standard of
judgement for its ultimate completion (131f.).
For a further specification of the particular form of the boundary
crossing in The Shadow-Line, it is finally necessary to point to the con-
spicuous mixture of active and passive aspects of the protagonist’s partici-
pation in these changes. On the one hand, this achievement is ultimately
due to his competence, persistence, integrity and stamina, that is to say, to
his intentional action. But on the other hand, the tale (i.e. the implied
author) provides strong evidence of the limitation of the protagonist’s
active control and the impact of non-rational and non-conscious forces
and factors. He is only partly aware of the motives for his own behaviour;
moreover, the impulses for his development frequently come from the
outside, and in some instances, especially at the beginning, he proves un-
able to assess situations correctly or to recognise the opportunity for, or
necessity of, action: he leaves his position as first officer impulsively,
without explanation; he does not see through the Steward’s intrigue
against him, so that Captain Giles has to draw his attention to both the
offer of a command and to his aspirations (17ff.); he forces the informa-
tion out of the Steward spontaneously and without a clear plan (25). He
refers to notions of miracle and destiny in connection with obtaining his
first command: “that day of miracles” (35), “the feeling of wonder î as if
I had been specially destined for that ship I did not know, by some power
higher than the prosaic agencies of the commercial world” (36). Further-
more, the magic blockage of the ship’s passage by the old captain, super-
stitiously conjured up by Burns, as well as its equally magic resolution
through his provocative laugh are to be considered further examples of
the superior power of circumstances and of the world overruling human
will. Even though he rejects Burns’s superstitious beliefs as foolish and
denies the existence of supernatural influences (86), the protagonist sees
himself at the mercy of forces beyond his control in view of the inexplica-
ble obstruction of the ship’s movement: “I felt on my face the breath of
unknown powers that shape our destinies” (62). He uses such notions not
only in a negative, but later also in a positive sense:
Joseph Conrad: The Shadow-Line 143
By the exercising virtue of Mr. Burns's awful laugh, the malicious spectre had
been laid, the evil spell broken, the curse removed. We were now in the hands of
a kind and energetic Providence. (125)
With the term “Providence”, the narrator draws on the traditional Calvin-
istic concept of God foreseeing and thus predetermining men’s lives, of
men’s utter dependence on God’s grace.
Man is not presented as master and director of his own destiny – he
appears to react rather than act. Yet without his persistent and competent
actions, the eventful crossing would not have been achieved. In the face
of a world without meaning and order, reason proves to be an imperfect
but nonetheless indispensible instrument for understanding and ordering
one’s living circumstances as well as for recognising one’s own motives
and directing one’s life. One example is the negligence in checking the
medicine chest: the narrator could not see the necessity of a careful in-
spection, which he reproaches himself for later, though he is acquitted by
Burns (95). The protagonist’s limited cognitive and practical power over
his life is pervasively thematised in the text, as mentioned above, by the
double perspective of the experiencing self (e.g. in the literal quotations
from his diary) and the later narrating self. 17 It is only retrospectively that
the protagonist is fully able to understand himself and constitute the co-
herence of his life. Herein can finally be seen the function of narration in
The Shadow-Line: the (narrative) look back at a decisive phase of his life
(“a confession”) serves the narrator as a definition of his identity. He nar-
rates how he became the person he now is. He defines his individual iden-
tity on the basis of this eventful change.
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_____________
17 Cf. Schwarz (1982: 89).
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12 Virginia Woolf: “An Unwritten Novel” (1921)
Peter Hühn
1 References are to the following edition: Woolf (1962). This story was first published in
1921.
2 There is a somewhat hidden reference to the female sex of the narrator towards the very
end of the text. After having helped the fellow passenger with her luggage onto the plat-
form, the narrator is addressed as “ma’am” by her: “I’ll wait by my bag, ma’am, that’s saf-
est. He said he’d meet me ... Oh, there he is! That’s my son.” (26).
3 This date is indicated by the news items in the Times quoted by the narrator: “Peace be-
tween Germany and the Allied Powers was yesterday officially ushered in at Paris – Signor
Nitti, the Italian Prime Minister [...]” (14). Since Nitti was the Italian Prime Minister from
June 23, 1919 to May 21, 1920, this item can only refer to the signing of the peace treaty on
June 26 1919 and not to the opening of the peace talks on January 18, 1919.
4 It goes without saying that this is a clear case of unreliability on the part of the narrator.
See, e.g. Fox (1973: 76). This fact as such is less relevant, however, than the motivation,
structure and presentation of unreliable narration within the narrative setup of the short
story.
5 The shift occurs at the bottom of p. 16.
146 Peter Hühn
created that the telling of the story is simultaneous not only with the re-
ported happenings but also with reporting the act of telling. In the first
part of the short story one can distinguish three narrative levels. The ex-
tradiegetic narrator recollects and narrates her train-journey, during which
she herself as a mental narrator (on the diegetic level) invented a story,
which, as such, is situated on the hypodiegetic level. In the second –
longer – part, these three levels are reduced to two. Seemingly without
mediation, the narrator (extradiegetic level) enacts the creative invention
of the story, which is then to be considered as the diegetic level. So, while
it is clear that, throughout the text, the overall (extradiegetic) narrator is
making up and telling her story (the “unwritten novel”) mentally, to her-
self alone, the mode of communicating this mental process changes. What
begins as a conventional retrospective narrative turns into the imagination
of an on-going mental process, thus foregrounding the process of narra-
tive invention. This text is essentially modernist in that the operation as
well as, by implication, the motivation of inventing and narrating a story
are self-reflectively thematized (at the extradiegetic level); specifically, in
respect of the tension and interaction between reality and fiction, between
life and imagination. Both storylines, the life story ascribed to the fellow
passenger and the process of narrative imagination during the train jour-
ney, feature eventful turns and rely on specific frames and scripts.
The narrator’s account of the train journey (the extradiegetic story of nar-
ration) is focused entirely on making up a story about the fellow passenger
in her compartment and ascribing it to her, 6 situated – as described above
– first at the hypodiegetic, then at the diegetic level. The narrative process
is triggered by the “expression of unhappiness” (14) on the face of the
“poor woman”, something which immediately attracts the narrator’s atten-
tion, because she takes this expression to reveal a deep knowledge of the
fundamental nature of “life”, apparently disappointment, sorrow and suf-
fering, what she terms “human destiny”, a painful experience people have
gained (“learnt”) in the course of their lives and which they usually try to
conceal. This woman, however, or so the narrator imagines, refuses to
conceal such knowledge, unreservedly communicating it to the narrator,
who is able to understand because she shares the knowledge: “She seemed
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6 This is an example of what Virginia Woolf has called “character-reading” in her essay “Mr.
Bennett and Mrs. Brown”, which she considers central to novel writing. See Woolf (1950).
Virginia Woolf: “An Unwritten Novel” 147
to [...] say to me: ‘If only you knew!’. [...] ‘But I do know,’ I answered si-
lently” (14). So the narrator senses a silent rapport, spontaneously estab-
lished between herself and the fellow passenger, which even penetrates
her attempts to protect herself against it behind the newspaper she is read-
ing: “The Times was no protection against such sorrow as hers. [...] She
pierced through my shield” (15). What the narrator refers to in this way
forms the abstract structure of a general script, which, she assumes, un-
derlies all life stories and which is defined by the event of a negative de-
velopment, an experience of disappointment, disillusionment and failure,
consisting of the basic transition from innocence to experience and result-
ing in unhappiness. The cognitive outcome of having undergone this ex-
perience is the appropriate knowledge about life’s bitter reality, a knowl-
edge which, according to the narrator, all people share.
On the basis of this abstract script, the narrator then proceeds to re-
construct the woman’s life story, using her desultory and inconclusive
utterances about a brother and a sister-in-law in Eastbourne to extrapo-
late, in a highly speculative manner, a biographical tale with a catastrophe
or failure as the central event, the evidence of which she deduces specifi-
cally from the characteristic twitch of the woman’s arm scratching a spot
on her back: “Her twitch alone denied all hope, discounted all illusion”
(15). To fill in the gaps and the circumstantial details of this story, the
narrator furthermore relies on certain conventional frames and scripts
taken from realist fiction. She first names the characters (Minnie Marsh,
her brother John and sister-in-law Hilda, their children Bob and Barbara)
and imagines the scene of Minnie’s arrival at her brother’s house and the
uneasy atmosphere between her and Hilda, her withdrawal into the guest
room to pray to God and, later, her walk along the beach. She then takes
the woman’s gesture of rubbing a stain from the compartment window (“a
stain of sin”, 18) as her cue to speculate on the kind of “crime” Minnie
has committed (“I have my choice of crimes”, ibid.), rejecting the possibil-
ity of a “sex”-related deed (as out of character) and opting for making her
responsible for a serious accident that happened to her baby brother
twenty years ago (who was scalded because she came home late, having
lingered over the display in a fashion shop), for which she tries to do pen-
ance by praying: “your crime was cheap, only the retribution solemn; for
now the church door opens, the hard wooden pew receives her” (19).
This tragic construction is only briefly disrupted by an incongruent, trivial,
mundane remark on the part of the woman about the price of eggs (20),
which temporarily induces the narrator to give up her event-based story-
line (20). The tragic event-schema, however, is so powerful that the narra-
tor quickly integrates the incongruent remark and initiates a new turn in
the story by introducing commercial travellers in the household (“behind
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the ferns”, 21), specifically one James Moggridge, who “takes his meals
with the Marshes” (22), something considered a necessity “if the story’s to
go on gathering richness and rotundity, destiny and tragedy, as stories
should” (21). No clear and consistent plot development emerges but some
unhappy entanglements between Moggridge and Minnie (and possibly
Hilda) are hinted at rather vaguely, as well as painful problems in the
Moggridge household and Moggridge’s ultimate disappearance, which,
again, are taken as evidence of “life’s fault”: “Life imposes her laws; life
blocks the way; life’s behind the fern; life’s the tyrant” (22). The emphasis
is then again on Minnie’s tragic situation, her humiliation by Hilda, her
suffering and profound unhappiness (“It’s the spirit wailing its destiny”,
24), finally heading for another severe, crucial turn: “Here’s the crisis!
Heaven be with you! Down she goes. Courage, courage! Face it, be it!”
(25).
In these variously renewed attempts at constructing a story and ascrib-
ing it to the woman passenger, the narrator obstinately clings to the basic
script with its eventful tragic turn, fleshing it out with (situational) frames
and scripts taken from recent realist fiction, 7 especially from domestic set-
tings and family arrangements with internal tensions in conventional mid-
dle-class households. These socially specific schemata are indicated by the
reference to ferns and aspidistras (21), the emblematic plants of (petty-)
bourgeois houses, to the motif of aged spinster aunts, to suppressed ten-
sions between family members, especially problems with dependent rela-
tives, to commercial travellers as a typically middle-class vocation. The
eventfulness of these tragic turns is of a low degree since the narrator
considers such experience as universal, expecting to see evidence of it in
every adult person and trying to find repeated instances of it in Minnie’s
life.
When, at the terminus in Eastbourne, the elderly woman is met by her
son and they walk down the street side by side (“mysterious figures”, 26),
the imposed narrative schema is radically disproved, a painful realization
for the narrator: “I am confounded”, which she at first refuses to ac-
knowledge (“Surely, Minnie, you know better! A strange young man …
Stop!”, ibid.), because her world-view and her identity were apparently
based on this schema: “my world is done for! [...] What do I know?” [...]
Who am I? Life’s bare as bone” (ibid.). This sudden final disruption of the
tragic turns in the invented story possesses a high degree of eventfulness
for the narrator because of the radical deviation from her customary ex-
pectations. She may be given to fantasizing about the lives of other peo-
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7 Cf. Engler (1987: 400f., 404ff.); Lojo Rodríguez (2002: 75, 78).
Virginia Woolf: “An Unwritten Novel” 149
The process of inventing and narrating this story about the woman pas-
senger (a real person within the story world) constitutes – as mentioned
above – another story (on the extradiegetic level). But this superordinate
story is only partly narrated in the narrow sense, i.e. mediated by a narra-
tor in the past tense; for the most part, it is performed directly through the
utterances of the protagonist in the present tense. From the very begin-
ning, the transition from narrative mediation to performative enactment is
made almost imperceptible by the extensive use of quoted impressions,
speculations and mental exclamations. 8 This story also features an event-
ful change, but one of a different kind and within a different frame.
Whereas the invented story complies to the (pre-conceived) script of a
universal pattern of life-experience as invariably resulting in disappoint-
ment or failure, thus ranking relatively low on the scale of eventfulness,
the performed story becomes highly eventful through the sudden (unex-
pected) disruption of the life-story attributed to the woman in the com-
partment. The two stories differ first of all in their frames. While the in-
vented story is thematically framed as dealing with the nature and ex-
perience of “life” (a term prominently introduced at the very beginning of
the text 9 ), the theme of the superordinate story concerns the relation be-
tween (narrative) fiction and real life or, more generally, the aesthetic con-
cept of fictional narration, in other words, the novel (as also indicated by
the title “An Unwritten Novel”). Within this frame, the narrator changes
her orientation in the course of her reflections and mental utterances,
namely from a pre-conceived script, which is that of certain conventional
types of realist fiction 10 , towards a focus on factual, ordinary life, as ob-
served experientially. Thus, though this may seem a shift from an eventful
type of narrative to an uneventful one in one respect, from a (convention-
ally) spectacular script with extraordinary happenings to ordinary, every-
day life, that change of orientation, in itself, constitutes an event on a
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8 The shift ultimately begins with “Hilda’s the sister-in-law [...]” (16), because from this
paragraph onwards the present tense is used exclusively.
9 “Life’s what you see in people’s eyes; life’s what they learn, and, having learnt it, never [...]
cease to be aware of – what? That life’s like that, it seems” (14).
10 See footnote 7.
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red hollows; the suck and regurgitation of the heart; while from above meat falls
in brown cubes and beer gushes to be churned to blood again – and so we reach
the eyes. (22f.)
Secondly, in direct contrast to such indications of fictionality, there are
pervasive suggestions of the independent reality of character and story,
mainly in the form that the narrator does not know everything about the
character but has to guess and ascertain, and that she is not wholly in con-
trol of the development, and that the course of the happenings assumes a
reality and a dynamic of its own. 13 On several occasions, she peers at the
woman she calls Minnie in order to find out (“read correctly”) facts about
her life as if about an independent reality. So she says at the beginning: “I
read her message, deciphered her secret, reading it beneath her gaze” (16);
later, she tries to identify the kind of crime she committed (18) but then
corrects herself, allegedly realizing that there was no crime (20). When
Minnie’s life story seems to run on a particular track, a casual utterance of
hers suddenly leads the development in a completely different direction:
That’s what always happens! I was heading her over the waterfall, straight for
madness, when like a flock of dream sheep, she turns t’other way and runs be-
tween my fingers. (20)
Later, the narrator seems forced to acknowledge the commercial travellers
(“the figures behind the ferns”) as part of the story: “There I’ve hidden
them all this time in the hope that somehow they’d disappear, or better
still emerge, as indeed they must [...]”, 21). Towards the end of the train
journey, the narrator sees the moment of crisis approaching, narrating
Minnie’s imminent encounter with her hostile sister-in-law in urgent, seri-
ous tones:
Here’s the crisis! Heaven be with you! Down she goes. Courage, courage! Face it,
be it! For God’s sake don’t wait on the mat now! […] I’m on your side. Speak!
Confront her, confound her soul! (25)
The resistance of the happenings to the narrator’s conscious attempts at
controlling the story proves particularly strong at the end of the train
journey, when the woman is met by her son and the narrator desperately,
but unsuccessfully, tries to reject this turn of events. This resistance to
control not only tends to background the extent of creative projectiveness
and arbitrary speculation on the part of the narrator but also enhances the
degree of eventfulness of the final debunking of the invented story.
These two opposing tendencies serve to make the invented story am-
bivalent, endow it with emotional and existential urgency and, at the same
time, expose its artificiality and constructedness. In addition, there is a
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13 Cf. Engler (1987: 404f.); Bouton (2004: 177, 179).
152 Peter Hühn
for interpreting the figures and endowing them with meaning. A different
meaning is now constructed and also projected onto the figures.
Virginia Woolf’s “An Unwritten Novel” features two different types and
degrees of eventfulness and arranges them in a hierarchical relationship to
one another. The lower (the hypodiegetic) level, that of the invented story
or “unwritten novel” as spun out by the narrator, presents an event in the
happenings, which is based on a specific script claimed to be universally
valid for all life-experiences (“life”), with an inherent negative turn in the
form of guilt or disappointment, disillusionment, failure and profound
unhappiness. Since the event is supposed to occur necessarily in the
course of people’s lives, it is expected and thus ranks relatively low on the
scale of eventfulness. As the setting, the characters and the circumstances
of this story suggest, the frame of this script and the context of this event
is realistic or, perhaps more precisely, naturalistic fiction, 17 which, with a
strong emphasis on surface realism and a preference for certain conven-
tional tragic or comic plots, shows people to be determined by their social
origins and outward living conditions, their psychological dispositions and
narrow, bourgeois family relations. The aesthetic convention defining this
context assumes that such a picture of life and living is representative of
contemporary social reality. The title “An Unwritten Novel” refers to this
novelistic pattern and it is shown to be so strong that it determines the
narrator’s perception of even her everyday surroundings. The context of
the eventfulness can thus be identified as the conventions of the novel
after the turn of the century, as Virginia Woolf sees them, dominated by
writers like Arnold Bennett, H. G. Wells and John Galsworthy. 18
The invented story basically conforms to this convention, although
certain parodic, contradictory or grotesque features, as pointed out above,
foreground the story itself and produce a distancing, subtly disruptive
effect. The same context functions as a background for the story of narra-
tion on the higher level and its eventfulness, but, this time, the develop-
ment radically deviates from the script in rejecting it altogether. The devia-
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17 Cf. Engler (1987: 400, 403, 407ff.).
18 See Virginia Woolf’s essays “Modern Fiction” (1919), in Woolf (1950), and “Mr. Bennett
and Mrs. Brown” (1924), in Woolf (1993), where she argues for the centrality of character in
the “modern” concept of the novel, focusing on experience, impressions, feelings, the spirit,
which she declares closer to life and sees represented, for example, by James Joyce, D. H.
Lawrence and E. M. Forster.
154 Peter Hühn
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19 Cf. Joubert (1999), who reads this short story as “the ordinary stuff of the modernist ex-
perimentation with metafictional iconicity” (149) and sees in the collapse of the invented
story the “unwriting” of narrative knowledge, the “parody of craftsmanship” and the “ir-
ruption of the Real” (150f.), i.e. no more than the debunking of literary conventionality.
20 This point is indicated by Lojo Rodríguez (2002: 79).
21 “An Unwritten Novel” is usually seen in close association with the beginning of Virginia
Woolf’s modernist phase of writing, starting with Jacob’s Room (1922). Cf. Engler (1987:
393f.).
Virginia Woolf: “An Unwritten Novel” 155
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13 D. H. Lawrence: “Fanny and Annie” (1921)
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Fanny’s original life plan can be reconstructed from her past history as
summarized at the beginning of the narrative. The frame can be defined as
an individual’s social position and identity within the class-system and the
corresponding script as social advancement. Fanny bases her life plan on
success and ascent, i.e. on social and cultural values and ideals; and she
strives to escape from the frustrating narrow living conditions of the
lower class and to lead a fulfilled and happier life. Inspired by the example
of her successful and ambitious cousin Luther, with whom she had been
in love as a young girl, she breaks out of her parents’ lower-class environ-
ment at the age of 18 to seek a fulfilling middle-class life in different sur-
roundings. This biographical plan if successfully put into practice
would be considered as highly eventful, since the class boundary between
the lower and the middle classes was still largely impermeable at the be-
ginning of the 20th century, especially for women, even though not to the
same extent as in the 18th and 19th centuries. The degree of eventfulness is
somewhat reduced, however, in as much as she attempts to reach this aim
not through personal achievement, e.g. by having a professional career,
but conventionally by means of a partnership (with Luther).
As the narrator reports in an analepsis, Luther later left her and died.
Relationships with other men from a similar social background did not
succeed either and in terms of a career she was only able to reach the low
position of a “lady’s maid” (459), so that her attempt at a new life in a
middle-class environment ended in failure, that is to say, the boundary
between the semantic fields of the lower and the middle class proved im-
possible for her to cross.
In this situation, Fanny considers returning to her home town and
marrying Harry as the only way to a secure existence. Initially, she finds
this unacceptable for several reasons. On account of her long absence she
now defines her identity on the basis of middle-class norms and values
and accordingly feels out of place in her old environment: “she had be-
come a stranger” (460). Further obstacles to a happy marriage are the
social and cultural differences caused by their differing biographies. While
Fanny sets great store by education, achievement and thrift, Harry lives
for the moment, does not save any money and lacks ambition (cf. e.g.
462ff.); in contrast to her, he still speaks the regional and class-specific
dialect (cf. 464f.); she dresses elegantly and is appreciative of good man-
ners, comfort and beauty, whereas he appears common, inconsiderate and
ungainly (cf. 462ff.).
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All in all, Fanny perceives her return and the prospect of marrying a
worker as a failure of her original career plans, as a disillusioning relapse
into the paralysing conditions of her past:
What a come-down! What a come-down! She could not take it with her usual
bright cheerfulness. She knew it all too well. It is easy to bear up against the un-
usual, but the deadly familiarity of an old stale past! (460).
Moreover, a cautionary example of such an option is introduced in the
form of Fanny’s aunt Lizzie, who married a socially and intellectually infe-
rior, violent man and therefore leads an unhappy life. Aunt Lizzie tells
Fanny in no uncertain terms that she considers marrying Harry a gross
error: “I don’t think he’s good enough for you” (461).
Against this background, however, a contrary tendency is introduced
that eventually results in the eventful ending: Fanny’s spontaneous and
instinctive decision to marry Harry and, in conjunction with this, her re-
integration into the family structure and social organization of the working
class (cf. her concluding request to Harry’s mother to be accepted into her
home). This contrary tendency rests on a re-definition of the relevant
schemata, a new frame: focusing on the sensual dimension of human exis-
tence, especially sexuality and sexually fulfilled love; and relying on the
corresponding script: the process of striving for the experience of sexual
love and finding the appropriate lover. 3 The specific coupling of social
and erotic schemata in Fanny’s chosen path represents the exact reversal
of the script of Pamela’s career in Richardson’s novel: 4 While Pamela
achieves her social rise from the lower class to the aristocracy by means of
virtue and puritanical sexual abstinence, Fanny moves exactly in the oppo-
site direction, returning to the lower class and entering a relationship
which is essentially based on sexuality. Lawrence stresses both the struc-
tural analogy and the directional difference between these two female life
stories by giving Fanny the same occupation as Pamela (“lady’s maid”,
459) as the point of departure for her development.
As for Fanny’s change of attitude, the reader can follow the course of
her growing awareness of erotic longings which culminates in the decision
to give in to her powerful physical attraction to Harry and live in a sexu-
ally fulfilled marriage with him. 5 This decision is not the result of a ra-
tional deliberation process but a pre-rational instinctive change of her
consciousness. This new frame of sensuality and sexuality replaces the
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previous frame of social status, which has governed Fanny’s past history;
that is to say, she defines her identity increasingly through the reference to
a new set of values: her focus shifts from success, social recognition and
high status (“culture”) to sensuality, physicality and sexuality (“nature”). 6
As a consequence, the subdivision of the semantic field into “working
class” vs. “middle class”, which had structured the plot so far, is now
superseded by the new oppositions “sexually unfulfilled” vs. “sexually
fulfilled”, “alienated” vs. “authentic”, “unhappy” vs. “happy”. After
Fanny’s change of attitude, the working class, previously devalued as
backward and paralysing, is now upgraded by its association with sensual-
ity, physicality and vitality.
At the beginning of the text the sexual frame is merely implied but
then becomes increasingly more explicit: the story stages the liberation of
Fanny’s sexuality from its latency. In the opening scene, Fanny’s arrival at
the station, her hidden erotic longings are obliquely expressed in her de-
scription of Harry’s face with fire images, which carry archaic sexual con-
notations and present him almost as a mythic archetype of sexuality:
“Flame-lurid his face”, “[h]is eternal face flame-lit now!” (458). These
images are possibly also to be taken as an indication of the physicality,
experientiality and vitality of the industrial working world (Harry works in
a foundry).
Another indication of the latent presence of the sexual dimension in
the past is the fact that Fanny returns to her origins at all and contem-
plates marrying Harry. At first the story seems to suggest that Fanny’s
escape from the working class has simply failed and no other solution is
available. This does not explain, however, why she had stayed in contact
with Harry all through the 12 years, apparently repeatedly encouraging his
hope of an eventual relationship: “She was a lady’s maid, thirty years old,
come back to marry her first-love, a foundry worker: after having kept him
dangling, off and on, for a dozen years.” (459, emphasis added). Obviously
the protagonist is attracted to Harry from a latent deep desire but cannot
consciously admit this to herself.
Subsequently, the motivation behind Fanny’s actions, her passion for
Harry, becomes clearer: first in her description of his warm and likeable
character (“But women always liked him. There was something of a
mother’s lad about him – something warm and playful and really sensi-
tive”, 462); then in her appreciation of his unselfishness, his charming
ways, his sensibility as well as his habit of making women feel superior (cf.
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6 For the general relevance of the difference between “nature” and “culture” in Lawrence’s
work, see Burns (1980).
160 Markus Kempf
462); and finally in her open admission that she cannot resist his sexual
attractiveness:
Because there was about him a physical attraction which she really hated, but
which she could not escape from. He was the first man who had ever kissed her.
And his kisses, even while she rebelled from them, had lived in her blood and
sent roots down into her soul. After all this time she had to come back to them.
And her soul groaned, for she felt dragged down, dragged down to earth, as a
bird which some dog has got down in the dust. She knew her life would be un-
happy. She knew that what she was doing was fatal. Yet it was her doom. She had
to come back to him. (465f.)
Ah, she despised him! But there he stood up in the choir gallery like Balaam’s ass
in front of her, and she could not get beyond him. A certain winsomeness also
about him. A certain physical winsomeness, and as if his flesh were new and
lovely to touch. The thorn of desire rankled bitterly in her heart. (466)
At that time Fanny’s feelings for Harry are still ambivalent. On the one
hand, his sexual attractiveness appears to her as a fate which will interfere
with the free development of her personality and generally prove disas-
trous for her (see especially the dog/bird comparison). On the other, she
allows for the possibility that she may be mistaken in her negative assess-
ment. This is conveyed by the allusion to the biblical story of Balaam’s ass
(Numbers 2224). In this story the prophet Balaam sets out contrary to
God’s express command on a journey to preach against Israel and is
thrice saved by his donkey, who sees more than he does (God’s angel
blocking his way and threatening to kill him). Associating Harry with the
animal implies Fanny’s belief that he will protect her against dangers she is
unable to see and guide her in the right direction, even though she at first
considers her response to his sensuality a mistake and despises him for his
sensual nature.
The protagonist’s change of attitude is advanced by two decisive inci-
dents. The first incident occurs in the episode when Fanny listens to
Harry singing in church (466f.). This passage highlights the aspects of
emotionality, sensuality and the pre-rational that are crucial to Fanny’s
development. Harry’s singing, because it is received directly through the
senses, affects Fanny as an unfeigned and therefore more authentic form
of communication which touches her profoundly: “it was effective and
moving” (466). The text of the song Harry sings, a well-known harvest
hymn, carries additional significance for Fanny’s development and her
relation with Harry:
Come, ye thankful people, come,
Raise the song of harvest-home.
All is safely gathered in
Ere the winter storms begin. (465)
D. H. Lawrence: “Fanny and Annie” 161
With its metaphors of nature, fertility and sexuality the hymn also refers to
the completion of partnership and love between Fanny and Harry. On the
whole, Lawrence is extremely critical of puritanical Protestantism with its
depreciation of sensuality and appreciation of achievement because of its
detrimental effect on the posssibility of leading an erotically fulfilled au-
thentic life. It is therefore highly ironic that Lawrence uses Christian holi-
days, songs and rituals here (the harvest festival) to convey his emphati-
cally anti-puritanical conviction.
Fanny’s change of attitude is completed only after the second incident,
which occurs in front of the church when Harry is accused by Mrs Nixon
of having made her daughter Annie pregnant. The central importance of
Annie, who never actually appears in the story and features merely in the
narratives of others, is stressed by the mention of her name in the title.
The fact that their names are phonetically both similar and dissimilar mir-
rors the correspondence and difference in their situations. On the one
hand, Annie presents a kind of model for Fanny since she openly and self-
confidently lives out her sexuality (see Harry’s remark on Annie’s various
affairs and her retort). On the other, Annie is a rival for Harry’s favour
and thus forces Fanny to come to a quick and definitive decision: despite
the scandal in the church she accompanies Harry home out of “obstinacy”
(470). Annie practically functions as a catalyst for Fanny’s development in
that she has a strong impact on the pre-rational dimension of her person-
ality without being affected herself. After a last rebellion (cf. 470) Fanny’s
internal development is finally completed, when she addresses Mrs
Goodall as “Mother” and thereby signals her willingness to marry Harry.
The overall plot of “Fanny and Annie” possesses a circular structure:
The story stages the “homecoming” of a protagonist that has gone astray
to her original (instinctive-sexual) needs and to her first lover, who can
fulfill these needs. 7 That this is the story of a woman’s return to her ar-
chaic-instinctive nature is indicated early on, when the narrator character-
izes Fanny as “a passionate woman”, as “a woman to be afraid of. So
proud, so inwardly violent! She came of a violent race” (460f.). In retro-
spect, such characterizations serve as early indications that Fanny had
always had a disposition towards passion, emotion, and sexuality but had
been blind to this, her true inward nature, because of her illusory orienta-
tion on the cultural ideal of social advancement, which through the name
of its representative within the story, Luther, is clearly associated with
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7 For the tradition, the function as well as the relevance of this kind of plot-structure to
Romanticism and D. H. Lawrence, see Abrams (1973: 253î331).
162 Markus Kempf
Protestantism. By her return, Fanny becomes the person she had been all
along.
The high value of naturalness, sexuality and fertility in “Fanny and
Annie” is further underlined by Lawrence through the temporal setting of
Fanny’s eventful border crossing, at the time of the harvest festival.
having made another woman pregnant. With her decision to return to the
working class and her emphatically anti-puritanical attitude to sexuality
Lawrence presents Fanny as the exact opposite of Richardson’s Pamela,
whose social elevation to the aristocracy is coupled with an emphatic ori-
entation on a puritanical sexual code.
Generally speaking, the emphasis on sexuality, fertility and nature
sharply contrasts with the growing impact of technology, science, com-
mercialism and the accelerating process of modernization on the individ-
ual, developments which Lawrence was very critical of, because they were
prone to destroy the vital basis of human life. In “Fanny and Annie” as in
his other short stories, in his novels and poems, he counters these tenden-
cies with fulfilled sensuality in a partnership, intensity of experience and
vitalism.
References
Katherine Mansfield’s short story “At the Bay” 1 presents a variety of hap-
penings during one single summer day that take place among a number of
holiday makers at a seaside resort (presumably in New Zealand, as indi-
cated e.g. by plant names) from a shifting perspective. 2 The characters
mainly consist of members of three families: Stanley and Linda Burnell
with their children (Isabel, Kezia, Lottie), Linda’s sister Beryl and their
mother Mrs Fairfield, Jonathan Trout married to another Fairfield daugh-
ter (with his children) 3 as well as Harry Kember and his wife. This text
differs from all others in this volume in that it seems to lack the two fun-
damental features of any successful narrative with respect to sequentiality:
coherence and eventfulness, for the individual incidents refer to a large
number of characters and appear to be basically unconnected with each
other as well as trivial and inconclusive in themselves and in their combi-
nation. In both respects “At the Bay” demonstrates characteristics of
modernist tendencies, especially in the short story, 4 in particular the rejec-
tion of conventional fictional plots with their emphasis on outstanding or
decisive events, as they were traditionally associated not only with novels
but also – and specifically – with tales and novellas. 5
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1 The page numbers of the quotations refer to the following edition: Mansfield (1981:
20545).
2 Cf. e.g. the brief interpretations of this story under the gender aspect and with respect to
the life-death opposition, resp., in Fulbrook (1986: 10614) and Hankin (1983: 222î34).
3 These families, especially the Burnells, figure also in other Mansfield stories, e.g. “Prelude”
(1922) and “The Doll’s House” (1923).
4 For modernist vs. conventional tendencies in the history of the short story in Britain, cf.
specifically e.g. Bayley (1988: 182f.), Head (1992:109î38), Korte (2003: 103ff., 127ff.), Löf-
fler & Späth (2005: 10ff.).
5 Cf., e.g., Ganzmann (1985: 1ff., 252ff. and passim), van Gunsteren (1990: passim); Boddy
(1988: 169); Beachcroft (1968: 177f.); Halter (1972: 56f.); Kaplan (1991: 1ff.), Mergenthal
(2005: 190î206). This tendency is usually attributed to the influence of, or compared with
a similar concept in, Chekhov.
Katherine Mansfield: “At the Bay” 165
adult characters Stanley, Jonathan, Linda and Beryl. Two such patterns
can be distinguished, a negative and a positive one. The general negative
pattern to which a number of episodic experiences conform is defined by
the transition from expectation to disappointment, from contentment to
disillusionment or by the thwarting of desire. This applies, first of all, to
the two men, Stanley and Jonathan: Stanley’s ambition to be the first man
to swim in the morning is defeated by Jonathan having come before him
(“He’d ruined Stanley’s bathe”, 209); and, in turn, Jonathan’s careless,
reckless enjoyment of swimming is ruined, too, by staying in too long (“he
too felt his bathe was spoilt”, ibid.); subsequently, Stanley’s imperious
demand for sympathy, recognition and service from Linda, his wife, and
Beryl, his sister in law, is not met adequately in his opinion (210î13).
During a later talk with Linda, Jonathan silently voices to himself his con-
stant disappointment with himself and with life in general: “He was always
full of new ideas, schemes, plans. But nothing came of it all” (237); he
feels imprisoned because of his own doing (“I’m like an insect that’s flown
into a room of its own accord”, 227); he attributes all this to an inherent
constitutional weakness of his (“No stamina. No anchor. No guiding
principle […]”, 238); and sees himself as too old to attempt any change
(239). Equally serious and existential are the frustrating experiences in life
for the two women. Linda feels disappointed in almost all respects and on
a fundamental level: everything beautiful î like flowers î is “wasted”,
“Life” sweeps her away (221), her love for Stanley is frustrated because he
has changed so much (222), she “dread[s] having children” and does not
love them (222î23), which she recognizes as “her real grudge against life”
(222).
The presentation of Beryl’s frustration is even more elaborate as well
as extended. In her case, the desire is clearly characterized as erotic. Early
on in the story, her longing for erotic fulfilment and for a lover is aroused
by her acquaintance with the unconventional, “wicked”, lascivious Mrs
Kember (217î20), who makes Beryl aware of her physical beauty (“what a
little beauty you are”, “it’s a sin for you to wear clothes”, 219, 220) and
tells her: “I believe in pretty girls having a good time”, “Enjoy yourself”
(220). Late at night, Beryl’s desire is intensely aroused, presumably the
after-effect of Mrs Kember’s insinuations during this conversation, and
triggers the vivid wishful hallucination of an erotic scene with her imagi-
nary lover (“Her arms were round his neck; he held her”, 241), which
though she is aware of its imaginary status activates an acute, sharp long-
ing in her: “She wants a lover” and a reckless intention to reach for fulfil-
ment, encouraging herself: “Don’t be a prude, my dear. You enjoy your-
self while you’re young” (242). But when the practical gratification of her
desire is suddenly offered to her in the person of Mrs Kember’s husband,
168 Peter Hühn
Harry Kember, who invites her for a walk clearly intending to seduce her,
she is frightened and finally shies away in spite of herself (244î45).
This abstract negative script of frustration and disappointment is con-
trasted in other passages by the positive recurrent sequence pattern of
liberation, the transition from restriction or coercion to freedom. But this
contrast occurs only in a few instances and even there, the sense of free-
dom does not last. The first instance comes after Stanley has left for work
(210–13). Since he had bossed around, suppressed and criticised the
women and children, his departure is experienced by them (and the ser-
vant girl Alice) with relief and as a general release and licence to enjoy
themselves: “There was no man to disturb them; the whole perfect day
was theirs” and “The little girls ran into the paddock like chickens let out
of a coop” (213). But in all cases, the freedom is either not used and en-
joyed or ultimately voluntarily given up. Linda makes no use of the glori-
ous day whatsoever, doing “nothing” (220f.), reflecting on her wasted life,
on Stanley’s change from the man she had originally seen in him, and on
her “dread of having children” (222). Beryl spending the day with Mrs
Kember on the beach is both aroused in her own dormant desire and
repelled by that woman’s cold and lascivious attitude (“poisoned”), which
she closely associates with that of her husband’s (217–20), an experience
which is repeated and intensified at the very end. The children play at
being animals thus freeing themselves from their normal regulated (hu-
man) existence within the family but this means constant suppression and
reprimands for Lottie, who because of her age is not yet fully able to par-
ticipate in the game. In the end, some children long to be taken back into
the ordered protective familiy environment (“Why doesn’t somebody
come and call us”, 235) and all are clearly aware of the dominating exis-
tence of their families, to which they are finally brought back (231–35).
Although it is obvious that their freedom was only temporary and limited,
they still did experience some liberation while their outing lasted. Such
willing return to the familiar restrictions is even more pronounced in the
case of Alice, the servant girl, who sets out full of joy for a free afternoon
with Mrs Stubbs, the shop-keeper. When Mrs Stubbs praises her freedom
after her husband’s death (“freedom’s best”, 231), Alice becomes con-
scious of her own ingrained dependence on restrictions: “Freedom! Alice
gave a loud, silly little titter. She felt awkward. Her mind flew back to her
own kitching [sic]. Ever so queer! She wanted to be back in it again” (231).
Mrs Stubbs is the only person in the story who really experiences a sense
of freedom, even though the liberation is something mainly remembered
(if still acutely felt and enjoyed in the present) and here primarily serves to
offset Alice’s inability to be free even temporarily.
Katherine Mansfield: “At the Bay” 169
So, the general drift of all changes ultimately turns out to be toward
frustration, disappointment, disillusionment, stagnation and loss of vital-
ity, no matter what script they first appear to be based on, negative or
positive. This negative outcome is contrasted, emphasized and thus ex-
acerbated by happening under the most beneficial conditions imaginable
for happiness, joy and freedom î a metereologically perfect summer day
during the vacation at the sea away from the strictures of work and every-
day routines at home.
face, in what way they are affected in their experiences by their living con-
ditions.
The context can be identified as the ordinary living circumstances of
ordinary (relatively well-to-do) middle-class people at the beginning of the
20th century in a western society, which is regulated by strict sexual moral-
ity (see Beryl’s dilemma and Mrs Kember’s reputation), clear class divi-
sions (see Alice’s position and Jonathan’s problems) and a general ten-
dency of moral and social repression (apparent in Linda’s, Beryl’s and
Jonathan’s frustrations), depriving people of the unhampered fulfilment of
their needs and longings. This moral and social context leads to tensions
for some of the characters, which shape their personal experiences under
everyday conditions, albeit in the exceptional holiday situation of tempo-
rary exemption from work and everyday routine. The contrast between
the adults and the children reveals that the repression is imposed on peo-
ple through the process of socialization: children are less affected by it,
but their behaviour already shows the beginnings of this tendency (see the
treatment of Lottie and the overall awareness of adult control). The story
thus demonstrates, in the form of an episodic narrative, how ordinary
people under everyday circumstances do undergo eventful changes of
sorts, which in their degree are geared to the ordinariness of consolidated
middle-class society: this is the level at which events do occur in everyday
life. Under holiday conditions, these events are further reduced in inten-
sity in that the characters experience these changes in an episodic form
(Beryl, Stanley, Jonathan) or as a growing awareness of a general existen-
tial situation (Linda). The fact that these changes are all negative in ten-
dency (frustration, deprivation, disillusionment) seems to be indicative of
the social living conditions in connection with personal dispositions.
Among these instances of minor eventful change, Beryl is accorded a
special status, both in the positioning within the sequence of the episodes
in which she figures (see especially the emphatic placing of the final scene
at the very end of the text) and in the special structuring of the happen-
ings (the thematic progressive development in two phases, the meeting
with Mrs Kember and later with Mr Kember). Whereas the characters in
the other instances (Stanley, Jonathan, Linda) experience moments of
disappointments or disillusionments mainly within their consciousness,
Beryl is actually brought into the situation of a possible transgression of a
boundary. This potential movement is foreshadowed by the morning
meeting with Mrs Harry Kember on the beach and her arousal of Beryl’s
latent and unrequited sensual desire in spite of Beryl’s superficially un-
pleasant reaction to her (“Beryl felt that she was being poisoned by this
cold woman, but she longed to hear. But oh, how strange, how horrible!”,
220). A further indication of Beryl’s aroused sensual longing is that she –
Katherine Mansfield: “At the Bay” 171
References
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1 This very obvious generic reference has been noted by all critics, e.g. McSweeney (1983),
Broich (1990); Eriksson (1995), Martínez (1996), Schäfer (1998).
176 Peter Hühn
to this point (221), the short story presents an eventless tale, leaving the
readers’ expectations disappointingly unfulfilled.
There is one last interviewee left, Peter’s girlfriend, Isobel Dodgson, who
has just returned from a trip abroad. The interview with her (221î44)
does not offer a solution within the detective schema either but, instead,
tentatively and hypothetically establishes a new frame on a different level,
thereby constituting a surprising, new kind of event. Multiple changes
occur in connection with their meeting for the interview (221): Jennings
falls in love with Isobel; their talk is informal and soon becomes more and
more personal; they go for a walk and sit in a park etc. Above all, both are
remarkably free from social conventions, are more alive than all the others
(221). Isobel is a “literary” person, a graduate in English literature, a writer
(working on a novel) and employed by a publisher. Together they try to
reconstruct Fielding’s attitude or mood, coming to the conclusion that he
felt somehow trapped, disillusioned with the extremely conventional kind
of life he was leading, feeling a lack of other experiences and, in general,
freedom (224, 230), a feeling Jennings himself shares (232). This conclu-
sion is based on certain suggestive indications mentioned previously. Iso-
bel, drawing on her own experiences of composing a novel, finally comes
up with the suggestion that they might all be figures in a novel written by
someone outside: “Nothing is real. All is fiction” (234), and:
“Let’s pretend everything to do with the Fieldings, even you and me sitting here
now, is in a novel. A detective story. Yes? Somewhere there’s someone writing
us, all about us.” (234)
As a consequence, the generic plot-structure, which the short story so far
has failed to conform to, is thematized:
“A story has to have an ending. You can’t have a mystery without a solution. If
you’re the writer you have to think of something.” (234)
This is a clearly metafictional remark, foregrounding the fictionality of the
present story and laying bare the literary devices of the plot. 4 Here, this
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4 That metafictional elements are pervasive in “The Enigma”, not only in this discussion of
plot-structures but also, e.g., in the literary allusions to famous writers in the names of
Fielding and Dodgson (i.e. Lewis Carroll), has been commented on by most critics, cf.
Schäfer (1998: 187ff.), Martínez (1996: 132ff.). Broich (1990: 184ff.) interprets the metafic-
tional elements as an indication of the postmodernist way of writing in this short story. In
the present context, metafictionality, as such, is less relevant than its effect on the eventful-
ness of the short story.
178 Peter Hühn
5 Besides, this solution would again have conformed to the detective conventions after all, as
Martínez (1996: 135) remarks.
6 He also becomes “immortal”: “The one thing people never forget is the unsolved. Nothing
lasts like mystery” (234).
John Fowles: “The Enigma” 179
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Thus, his self is very strictly defined with reference to political and class-
specific norms:
“Tories take success so seriously. They define it so exactly. So there is no escape.
It has to be position. Status. Title. Money. And the outlets at the top are so re-
stricted. You have to be prime minister. Or a great lawyer. A multi-millionaire.
It’s that or failure.” (238)
But since he is not outstandingly successful in his various activities (he is
not even very good in court), he feels doubly imprisoned, by the conven-
tions and by his relatively mediocre position according to the conventional
standards, a feeling which Isobel metaphorically reconstructs in literary,
novelistic terms:
“He feels more and more like this minor character in a book. Even his son de-
spises him. So he’s a zombie. Just a high-class cog in a phony machine. From be-
ing very privileged and very successful he feels himself very absurd and very
failed.” (239)
The solution to this predicament, Isobel suggests, would be “walking
out”:
“The one thing people never forget is the unsolved. Nothing lasts like a mystery.
[…] On condition that it stays that way. If he’s traced, found, then it all crumbles
again. He is back in a story being written. A nervous breakdown. A nutcase.
Whatever.” (239)
In practical terms, that would mean Fielding had killed himself in order to
escape the stifling, suffocating restrictions of both the novel and society.
Isobel then speculates about the actual method employed, suggesting that
he drowned himself in the pond on his estate, which the family (or possi-
bly the police) refuses to have dredged, the mystery thus indeed remaining
unresolved. As a result, Fielding’s disappearance is defined as doubly
eventful, within the literary, novelistic as well as within the social frame,
transgressing into the field of social und existential freedom, constituting
an event which ranks higher on the scale of eventfulness than if the mys-
tery had been clarified in the style of detective fiction. The degree of
eventfulness, it can be argued, is enhanced even further by its paradoxical
nature: Fielding escapes from suffocating conditions to life and freedom
by killing himself in the fictional world, through suicide (which works in
literary, though not in practical terms). And Isobel plays the role of an
Agatha Christie in devising this surprising non-solution solution (241), i.e.
she successfully outwits the ingenuity of detective fiction with its own
techniques. In addition, the eventfulness is protected and enhanced by the
undecidedness and undecidability of the form his escape took.
Fowles’s short story thus begins by denying the occurrence of a con-
ventional event in the happenings only in order to offer a metaleptic type
of event instead, in accordance with the double re-framing of the happen-
John Fowles: “The Enigma” 181
ings. By shifting the frame from the detective plot to that of literary and
social conditioning, Fielding’s vanishing trick becomes an act of self-
liberation and self-fulfilment in another world, which constitutes a radi-
cally new kind of event (with a paradoxical twist, however, inasmuch as he
has to kill himself in the literary world to achieve this aim of a freer way of
life). By framing the happenings as the literary plot of a novel (which in-
deed they are, the novel or, rather, short story “The Enigma” written by
John Fowles), the vanishing trick can be understood as a metaleptic event
transgressing narrative levels. Isobel and, to an even greater degree, Field-
ing (in Isobel’s speculative reconstruction) discover themselves as created
figures in a fictional and social “text” and manage to liberate themselves,
Isobel by self-consciously reflecting on this state of affairs and, moreover,
by being comparatively alive and free from conventions in the first place;
Fielding î more radically so î by escaping altogether, vanishing from the
realm of fictionality into life outside fiction. He thus refuses to be medi-
ated in a novel and determined by society any longer. Of course, this, too,
is not only highly paradoxical but also very clever in that the writer (John
Fowles) invents and writes this possibility as a new twist to the relation
between fiction and reality and as a violation, and, at the same time, as a
surprisingly unexpected fulfilment of the generic script of mystery fiction.
In other words: he uses a postmodernist metafictional device to convey
primarily social and psychological problems characteristic of the mode of
realist fiction. 9 In this manner, the writer proves himself to be a very in-
genious plotter of events î devising a metaleptic mediation event with a
vengeance.
However, the short story does not end at this point but closes with a fur-
ther (and final) twist, establishing a new frame and adding another event.
This shift to the erotic frame, the preparation of a love story, 10 had been
implied from the first encounter between Jennings and Isobel (221ff.),
though the initiative starts with him and his being attracted to her: “He
fell for her at once” (221). It is equally important for this new develop-
ment that he recognises in her an uncorrupted, authentic quality of being
alive which sets her apart from all the others, who are subject to social
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conventions, even if they actively rebel against these, like Peter Fielding.
Jennings immediately notices this quality about her: “He had an immediate
impression of someone alive, where everyone else had been dead, or play-
ing dead; of someone who lived in the present, not the past […]” (222).
The continuation of their relationship is then provoked by her when she –
banteringly – asks him to help her with the police technicalities of a detec-
tive novel she is currently writing, for which she invites him to a meal, to
be cooked by herself. What ultimately follows is the consummation of
their love for each other, 11 the proper, predictable event within the newly
established love-story frame, which, for this reason, does not rank very
high on the scale of eventfulness. In this particular context, however, the
eventful gratification of their mutual desire is meant to function as some-
thing else, too – as indicated in the slightly enigmatic closing paragraphs:
[…] he was not, by the time that first tomorrow had closed, the meal been eaten,
the Sauvignan drunk, the kissing come, the barefooted cook finally and gently
persuaded to stand and be deprived of a different but equally pleasing long dress
(and proven, as suspected, quite defenceless underneath, though hardly an inno-
cent victim in what followed), inclined to blame John Marcus Fielding for any-
thing at all.
The tender pragmatisms of flesh have poetries no enigma, human or divine, can
diminish or demean – indeed, it can only cause them, and then walk out. (244)
What seems to be implied here is that intense love (“pragmatisms of
flesh”) may be an alternative way out of social and also literary restric-
tions. This, too, is paradoxical, of course, as is already expressed by the
postulated identification of pragmatism with poetry, i.e. of the concrete
sensual (and sexual) experience and its literary, fictional rendering, which
is said to be of no lesser or inferior efficacy (“no enigma […] can diminish
or demean”) than the enigma chosen as a way out by Fielding. On the
contrary, love (“flesh”) is said to constitute “them”, namely “the poetries”.
That is to say that love imbues the literary renderings with physical inten-
sity and as such provides a way out, imaginatively: “then walk out”,
namely from the fictional and social confinement. Thus the event of final
sexual consummation is not only considered the conventional generic
completion of the love story but, by its very physical and pragmatic quality
– through its powerful imaginative rendering (“poetries”) – it also func-
tions as an intense experience effectively outside social and literary con-
ventions. 12 This love scene appears, at first glance, to be a conventional
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11 Schäfer (1998: 192) points out that the seduction is ironically rendered in the terms of
detective fiction.
12 Martínez (1996: 130) argues that Isobel î like women generally in Fowles î represents
“warmth”, “reality”, “creativity”, “authenticity” and “freedom” as against social and literary
John Fowles: “The Enigma” 183
event in the happenings, with the figures of Jennings and Isobel as pro-
tagonists. Here, however, a specific interpretive twist is î or rather is
meant to be î added, namely that the event transports them out of the
fictional and socially normative world onto another plane, into another
dimension, in its different setup also a metaleptic event of sorts. This
claim, spelled out in the closing paragraph, is self-contradictory (and, pos-
sibly, not completely convincing). It shares with the preceding metaleptic
event the (paradoxical) feature of literary devices attempting to transcend
literature and its artificiality and reach towards lived human reality and
experientiality. But it differs from Fielding’s supposed disappearance and
absence through death by stressing the physicality, vitality and presence of
the love experience, thereby enhancing the degree as well as the value of
its eventfulness.
Thus the short story rejects one (conventional) type of event and insti-
tutes, suddenly and unexpectedly, two alternative and contrasting metalep-
tic events – transcending the diegetic level towards the “reality” level of
the histoire, the happenings in the “extra-literary” world, through the un-
resolved, mysterious vanishing trick, in literary terms, and through death
or intense love-making in social terms.
At this point, the historical and social dimension of the context can be
grasped and its two main aspects defined. Firstly, the early seventies were
the period of highly ideology-critical tendencies in certain intellectual sec-
tions of society in Britain (as in other European countries), which attacked
the debilitating power of conventional bourgeois norms, i.e. the so-called
establishment. This criticism is given symbolic and satirical expression in
the implication that Fielding disappears into the British Museum as an
obsolete social model, as it were. 13 Secondly, this was also the period of
widespread dissatisfaction with realistic, mimetic narration and of a post-
modernist fashion for playing with, and subverting, straightforward narra-
tion and narrative closure, the stability of social or artistic order, the supe-
rior power of reason and the belief in ultimate truth. 14
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conventionality. Eriksson (1995: 164ff.) describes the constellation of detective fiction and
love romance as the opposition of death and life, love signifying the celebration of life, fer-
tility and growth. Schäfer (1998: 192) speaks about a reality beyond literary self–
consciousness.
13 Cf. Schäfer (1998: 187ff.).
14 Martínez (1996: 137) mentions the “general decentering tendency of postmodernism”,
which frees “both author and reader from the oppressive ties of a more unitary and totaliz-
ing tradition”. Cf. also Broich’s (1990: 185f.) description of the postmodernist features in
this story.
184 Peter Hühn
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16 Graham Swift: Last Orders (1996)
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which interact with each other. Firstly, there is the level of the present, the
utterances performed chronologically and simultaneously, as it were, with
the reading process, in the succession of the individual chapters in the
book, describing the ongoing journey of the four men from London to
Margate as well as Amy’s visit to her daughter and her subsequent bus ride
home. These happenings are situated on the extradiegetic level, 3 which in
this novel represents the first or basic narrative 4 . Secondly, the recollec-
tions of the various characters constitute the dimension of the past, on the
diegetic level, in ever increasing detail as the novel progresses: the com-
plex interrelations among the characters, their former experiences, friend-
ships, affairs, quarrels etc. This diegetic level, which is organised
anachronically by means of numerous external subjective analepses,
stretches back to the time immediately before World War II. 5
The following analysis will concentrate on the storylines of Amy, Ray and
Jack, since these are central to the event dimension of the novel. 6 The
novel couples two schemata, an erotic and a moral frame and two con-
comitant scripts: on the one hand, the realistic, romance-like story of Amy
and Ray’s love, which after having been frustrated for decades may
now be fulfilled at long last; on the other, the sequence of personal guilt
followed by atonement or redemption. Both schemata are closely linked
with each other. The atonement script concerns the three protagonists,
since they all have incurred guilt in various ways through their past ac-
tions: Amy and Ray have wronged Jack by their former love affair, Jack
has wronged Amy by his rejection of their mentally retarded daughter
June. The second sub-field in each case (fulfilment and atonement or re-
demption, resp.) is heightened in its positive value by the opposed theme
of disease and death (Jack, June).
It is a significant feature of the plot of Last Orders that the final union
of the lovers does not actually occur, yet the text implies its possibility or
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3 Strictly speaking, the extradiegetic level comprises only the characters’ attitudes and their
changes as they express themselves directly in their utterances within the individual chap-
ters. The ongoing journey as such is narrated and therefore situated on a diegetical level,
though synchronised with the utterances.
4 Genette (1980: 22831).
5 For a general interpretation of the novel, see e.g. Cooper (2002), Weidle (2006) and Shaffer
(2006: 195211).
6 See e.g. Weidle (2006: 135).
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probability in the future. Instead of narrating the great event, the novel
focuses on two preliminary events, changes of attitude in Amy and Ray.
These two transformations take place in the course of the first narrative
(i.e. on 2 April 1990) and represent the prerequisites for their future un-
ion. In Lotman’s terms the plot development can be described as follows.
Inside the first superordinate sub-field (desire and guilt, resp.) the novel
establishes two separate, subordinate individual semantic fields, one for
Amy and one for Ray. Within these separate fields each of the two charac-
ters move across a personal boundary, which then enables them to cross
jointly into the second superordinate sub-field (union and fulfilment,
atonement). Amy’s and Ray’s personal changes are brought about by
Jack’s funeral, which confronts both of them with death and mortality and
forces them to re-consider their past experiences, attitudes and decisions
and to re-interpret and revise them. Amy’s and Ray’s transformations
occur simultaneously in London and Margate at the novel’s dramatic cli-
max: immediately before the scattering of Jack’s ashes into the North Sea.
The first phase concerns the beginning of the marriages of Amy and Ray
as well as the circumstances under which Jack and Ray first meet. The
genesis of Amy and Jack’s marriage is tragical and fatal. They meet acci-
dentally while hop-picking on Wick’s Farm in Co. Kent in August 1938
(23438). Although Amy is not particularly attracted to Jack, she gives
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herself to him one day out of a youthful feeling of freedom and erotic
desire (237). This caprice results in an unwanted pregnancy, which leads to
marriage. Nine months later, in June 1939, June is born, who turns out to
be severely mentally handicapped (42). One year later, Amy and Jack go
on a belated honeymoon trip to Margate (252ff., 267). During their stay
there, Jack’s refusal to accept June’s disability becomes apparent for the
first time. Soon afterwards war is declared. On account of his domestic
problems and in order to escape from his domineering father who had
forced him, against his wishes, to enter his butcher’s business Jack vol-
unteers and is posted to Africa (42).
In 1944, while Jack is still in the army, Amy finds the orphaned baby
Vince Pritchett after an air raid and adopts him (42). Her motive is to find
a healthy “substitute child” (after June’s birth she cannot have any more
children) to pacify Jack and save their marriage (240).
Ray’s early life is described in less detail. He is the son of a scrap metal
merchant and trains as an insurance clerk. He, too, joins the army and is
posted to Africa, where he meets Jack, who, like him, comes from Ber-
mondsey. During his service in Africa two important incidents happen:
Ray saves Jack’s life and Jack shows him Amy’s photo, which impresses
him deeply (89, 170, 172). After the war Ray marries Carol Dixon and has
a daughter with her, Sue. As certain remarks by Ray indicate, his marriage
like Amy’s is not founded on true love but comes about spontane-
ously out of a caprice (cf. 39).
The second phase starts years later in the mid-sixties and comprises vari-
ous incidents and circumstances that lead to the love affair between Amy
and Ray. Both their marriages, which from the outset had lacked firm
foundations, now enter a state of severe crisis. For Ray, things change
rapidly. First, his only daughter Sue informs him that she intends to emi-
grate with her boyfriend to his native Australia, marry him and build up a
livelihood with him. Though at first sceptical about this plan, Ray finally
gives his consent and even supplies her with the money for the journey
(out of the winnings from a horse-racing bet). At the same time, possibly
out of envy of her daughter’s new prospects in life, his wife Carol tells
him that she is dissatisfied with their marriage. In order to avert the
threatened separation Ray desperately tries to change his life: he gives up
his passion for betting and buys a camper to offer Carol more entertain-
ment through frequent short trips. But all to no avail. When her father
dies, Carol leaves Ray and starts a new life with another man.
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Sue. The stagnation and emptiness of his life is indirectly revealed by him
on Vince’s 40th birthday, when he remarks to his friends that their local
pub has never moved, although it is called “The Coach and Horses” (6).
It is only in the third phase, immediately before the beginning of the first
narrative, that the situation starts to change. Jack reaches the end of his
career and dreams of selling his butcher’s shop in order to buy a house in
Margate. At the end of his life he wants to return to its beginning and
attempt a new start with Amy in Margate. Although Jack does not admit it
to himself, it is clear that this wish is unrealistic: on the one hand, Amy
remains “fixated” on June and for that reason is not prepared to move
away from London; on the other hand, the proceeds from selling the shop
will not be enough to pay off the debts he has incurred because of years
of bad business and a loan he had taken out. Jack’s unrealistic plans for
the future are definitively shattered when he is diagnosed with stomach
cancer. When it dawns on him that he has to die he becomes acutely
aware of Amy’s extremely precarious financial situation on account of his
debts (£20,000). To solve this problem before his death, he devises a very
risky plan. He borrows £1,000 from Vince without giving any reason and
asks Ray to place a bet for that money on an outsider at very long odds.
Miraculously, Ray wins the bet and receives £33,000. As Jack dies before
Ray can inform him about the winnings and Vince is ignorant of Jack’s
plan, Ray is the only person who knows about the money. Ray does not
tell Amy about the winnings nor about the problem of the debts, though
he had spoken to her thrice between Jack’s death and the present journey
to Margate.
This is the point of departure for the basic narrative of Last Orders, on
the extradiegetic level. Within the stories of narration of these two charac-
ters, the novel now performs their renewed border crossing from the first
field of petrified self-concepts and ingrained patterns of behaviour to the
second field of activity, vitality and change.
Amy is the first to undergo a transformation. In the course of this
day’s confrontation with the past she realises that she has become as petri-
fied in her role as mother as Jack has in his vocational role as a butcher
enforced on him by his father:
This is where I belong, upstairs on this bus. […] I chose June not him. I watched
him set solid into Jack Dodds the butcher, Jack Dodds, high-class butcher, have a
bit of mince, missis, have a bit of chuck, because he couldn’t choose June too,
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couldn’t choose what was his, it was all he had to do, and I thought I’m the one
who can still change. I did, once. But when he looked at me then, like he was
looking at someone I wasn’t, I knew I was stuck in a mould of my own. (228f.)
A little later she radically breaks with her old life:
What I’m trying to say is Goodbye June. Goodbye Jack. They seem like one and
the same thing. We’ve got to make our own lives now without each other, we’ve
got to go our different ways. I’ve got to think of my own future. It was some-
thing Ray said, about how much I was short.
You remember Ray, Uncle Ray? He and I came to visit you once, that summer I
missed those Thursdays.
I’ve got to be my own woman now. But I couldn’t have just stopped coming
without saying it to your face: Goodbye June. (278)
In parallel with Amy, Ray also undergoes a development on this journey,
exemplified by his changing plans what to do with the betting winnings,
which no one knows about. He oscillates between two alternatives: em-
bezzle the money and spend it on himself alone in his old age or tell Amy
about it and consider the money a symbol and the financial basis for a
joint new start (Cf. 13, 128, 134, 200, 207, 251, 282ff). Initially, he inclines
towards the first alternative, as is apparent from the lie he tells Vince at
the war memorial that he does not know anything about the £1,000
(134f.). A little later he still intends to keep the money and finance a trip
to his daughter in Australia (207). But when he reflects on his own past
life and becomes aware of his enduring love for Amy, he realises the rele-
vance of the money for the two of them, the opportunity it provides for a
fulfilled joint future:
Or maybe I should just give her the money, straight, clean. Here you are, Ame,
it’s thirty thousand, it’s to see you right. Don’t thank me, thank Jack and a horse.
Except then I can’t see how I couldn’t tell her. That it was sort of meant like a
sign, like a permit, like a blessing on the two of us, to carry on where we left it
off. (283)
At this time Ray is still afraid of telling Amy about his plans for her (for
that reason, apparently, he completely conceals the existence of the
money). So far, he has only had the negative experience of the failing af-
fair with Amy in the sixties and does not know that she has dissociated
herself both from Jack and June in the course of this day, the two main
causes why the relationship had failed in the past. What he lacks is the
courage to try his luck as light-heartedly as in the sixties, even at the risk
of failure (cf. 282f.). But in the end he does find this courage, decides
against lying and in favour of truthfulness and resolutely gives up his life
as a bachelor, as is emphasised when he tells Vince the truth about the
money and thus completes his personal transformation:
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I grab his [Vince’s] arm, pulling it, squeezing it, and as I draw up close to him I
say, ‘I’ve got your thousand. I’ll give you back your thousand. I’ll explain.’ (290)
Although the text does not narrate the eventful ending of the love story,
the external and moral preconditions are now clearly favourable for Amy
and Ray’s union. 7 Both are no longer trapped in their marriages; both
have overcome their greatest problems and dissociated themselves from
their old lives. The £33,000 allow them to pay off the debts and finance
their new beginning together. The winnings also function as a compensa-
tion for Ray’s burden of guilt that he had incurred as Jack’s friend through
his affair with his wife. In addition, Ray inadvertently proves a “true fa-
ther” to Vince, for, by returning the loan of the £1,000, he enables him to
solve his present financial problems independently of his dubious business
partner Hussein (165ff.), thus “saving” Vince for a third time 8 . And fi-
nally: When Ray, acting as Vince’s true father, “saves” him from an Arab
of all people and thus symbolically repeats the saving of Jack during the
war in North Africa, his new paternal position paradoxically represents a
belated restitution of Jack’s failed fatherhood and thus of his entire exis-
tence. In this manner the new love relationship is morally sanctioned and
Jack acquires the status, as it were, of a secular martyr and saviour: He dies
for the “sinful love” of others, thereby redeeming them. 9
In retrospect, the reader recognises the peculiar teleological develop-
ment of Amy and Ray’s love and perceives, moreover, that they together
with Vince (and possibly with Sue, too) form the “true” family. Although
the unification has not been performed yet, the ending makes everything
coherent, legitimises the entire development and indicates the complete
replacement of the old by the new, the false by the true, the hidden by the
open and the bad by the good. This result has not been brought about by
anyone deliberately, and the characters are predominantly unaware of its
significance it just happened. This development is the direct opposite of
a tragic catastrophe it is pure luck and perfect happiness.
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conducting his life and improving his circumstances owing to his low
intelligence and eruptive emotionality. Still seeing himself as the “danger-
ous boxer” Gunner Tate makes him a laughing stock.
Within the circle of contrastive characters, June presents the most ex-
treme example of stasis. Because of her mental disability she has no mem-
ory, so that she lacks the elementary human capacity of learning from her
past and developing her personality she permanently stays the same. But
unlike the other characters she cannot be made responsible for this.
Victor does not develop either. But in contrast to all other characters,
he alone need not change. From the beginning he is depicted as a harmo-
nious, balanced, dignified personality. In contrast to Jack, he enters his
father’s business as an undertaker out of his free will and never regrets this
decision. His marriage is based on love. He has a cordial relationship with
his two sons both will continue the family business. As he is perma-
nently concerned with death, transitoriness and remembrance, he lives in
total harmony with the world and with himself. In this respect he embod-
ies the author’s ideal concept within the world of the text. His maxim
“You shouldn’t judge” may be taken as an invitation to the reader to as-
sess the characters’ unsolved problems within the context of the history of
their lives, instead of judging them in the sense of moral condemnation. 12
Amy and Ray’s eventful transformation is not only foregrounded by
the immobility of the other characters, but it is also prefigured and paral-
leled by the embedded stories of Carol (Ray’s wife) and Andy (Sue’s Aus-
tralian boyfriend). Like the two protagonists, Carol begins a new life only
after someone’s death (that of her father) and this beginning also concerns
a new love relationship. In a different way Andy follows a similar schema:
He, too, can begin his new life with Sue only after having come to terms
with the English roots of his Australian family, that is to say, with his own
past. Thus Last Orders presents two more events among the minor char-
acters.
outside the consciousness of the characters, and it is the task of the reader
to notice and interpret them. In contrast to openly postmodernist novels,
which typically thematize intertextuality through their (extradiegetic) nar-
rators in order to emphasise the fictionality and constructedness of char-
acters, plot and setting and question conventional concepts of reality, Last
Orders does not flaunt its pervasive intertextual allusions, the more so as
an extradiegetic narrator is absent. For this reason, intertextuality does not
serve here to undermine the reality effect of the happenings, i.e. the cogni-
tive processes of the characters, but to charge them with additional alle-
gorical-philosophical dimensions of meaning.
A central intertext for Last Orders is William Faulkner’s novel As I Lay
Dying of 1930. The most obvious analogy between the two novels con-
cerns the multi-perspectivism of their mediation technique. Like Last Or-
ders, As I Lay Dying presents the happenings performatively through the
interior monologues of the various characters, whose names head the
respective chapters. 13 Of more semantic relevance, however, are the
analogies (and differences) in regard to thematic aspects and to the plot.
Faulkner’s novel narrates the journey of Anse Bundren with his sons
Cash, Vardaman, Darl and Jewel, his daughter Dewey Dell as well as the
dead body of his deceased wife Addie to Jefferson to bury her there
among her “people” in compliance with her last wish. On this journey the
family meets with numerous obstacles and difficulties, such as a flood-
swollen river they have to cross, a fire in the barn where they are put up,
Cash’s serious injury and Darl’s mental derangement. After a strenuous
nine days full of privations they reach Jefferson and bury Addie.
Anse Bundren is portrayed as false, lazy, greedy and extremely egocen-
tric. He claims to be unable to work for health reasons and has his chil-
dren and Jewel (who is not his son) work their farm. He has no sense of
responsibility and despises, deceives and exploits his family for his own
selfish aims. He merely plays the role of the mourning widower who seeks
to fulfil his wife’s last wish. His real purpose for the journey to Jefferson is
to get a set of new teeth and remarry. Shortly after the funeral he appears
well-groomed and accompanied by a woman whom he presents to his
children with the sentence (which closes the book): “Meet Mrs Bundren”.
The extensive analogies, combined with significant differences, be-
tween the two novels serve to highlight the specific eventful plot structure
of Last Orders. The basic narrative in both cases concerns a quest-like
pilgrimage to a burial site for the funeral of a dead person, but while
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13 The similarities extend to such details as that both novels include a chapter that consists of
only one sentence and another one that is spoken by a dead person.
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hunch bets, and it may look like luck but it’s ninety-per-cent careful clerking, its ninety-per-
cent doing your sums. I aint worked in that insurance office for nothing. People think it’s
horses from heaven, answering your prayers, but it’s learning how to beat the bookie, and
if you want to beat the book-keeper, keep a book” (231). Cf. also the chapter “Ray’s Rules”
(202).
18 The quotation also contains a critical remark on human pretensions in certain burial cus-
toms.
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19 The historical position of the novel is defined by several critics as a general tension be-
tween traditional and (post-)modern tendencies, such as the opposition between moralist
attitudes and their metafictional erosion in Weidle (2006: 128, 138ff.), a paradoxical synthe-
sis between unity and diversity in Hartung-Brückner (parts 1 and 3), a new humanism vs.
postmodern carelessness and emotional atrophy in Widdowson (2001: 212, 218).
20 Cf. Wheeler (1999: 65f.); Mecklenburg (2000: 115f., 174, 180f.).
21 However, this ovrall positive impression is slightly undermined by the fact that Amy seems
to be abandoning June, her disabled and totally helpless daughter.
22 Cf. Barthes (1989).
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References
The preceding plot analyses have shown that the selected English novels
and tales from the late Middle Ages to the end of the 20th century all com-
prise an event, a decisive turning point, as the central feature of their nar-
rative sequence or plot-development, which constitutes their tellability,
demonstrating at the same time that this event may take a wide variety of
forms, including the failure, erosion, reversal or lack of an eventful turn,
e.g. in the shape of a negative event, which in itself then counts as signifi-
cant and, in a different way, eventful. The form and meaning of the re-
spective eventfulness will now be discussed from the following perspec-
tives: (1) the thematic dimension of the event: the prototypical eventful-
ness of the fairy tale as reference pattern, (2) the prototypical events and
their variations through the combination with schemata, (3) the contextu-
alization of eventfulness, (4) the localization of events within the dimen-
sions of the narrative setup.
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1 For a recent overview of research on the fairy tale, cf. e.g. Pöge-Alder ( 2007).
2 Cf. Hühn & Kiefer (2005: 23435). Wolf (2002: 35–37, 43-53) has employed the fairy tale as
a prototype of fictional literary narration for the purposes of a comparison with narration in
other media, using “Bluebeard” as an example.
202 Peter Hühn
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3 For a summary of the basic plot structure of a great many fairy tales, cf. e.g. Propp (1968),
who reconstructs the plot of fairy tales as a sequence of functions; Holbek (1987: 410î34),
who subdivides the syntagmatic structure of fairy tales into five moves; Ashliman (2004:
4144, 4549), who distinguishes a three-step development (separation/departure, initiation,
return to society) and refers to the two aims of “upward mobility” and courtship/marriage;
and Freund (2005: 88î90, 93î95), who describes the hero’s/heroine’s search for his/her
true self and the general movement from lack and loss to fulfilment and redemption.
Conclusion 203
In the following, the shape and type of eventfulness in the selected texts
will be reconstructed, on a high level of abstraction, against the back-
ground of the prototype and with regard to modifying factors (especially
frames and scripts) as indicators of the respective socio-cultural contexts.
To be sure, these analyses will not do justice to the overall complexity and
semantic richness of these texts in reference to setting, characterization,
style and perspective, but it is proposed that the tellability in as much as it
rests on the central eventful plot-development is essentially captured in
these schematic reconstructions. Remarks on the degree of eventfulness
included in the following overview are to be understood in relation to the
system of norms presupposed and implied by the novels or tales in ques-
tion within their respective contemporary cultural and social contexts. The
degree will be different for readers with normative positions deviating
from that of the texts and, especially, for readers of a later period and/or
from a different cultural or social background.
A first group of texts Richardson’s Pamela, Defoe’s Moll Flanders,
Fielding’s Tom Jones from the 18th century and (with a characteristic rever-
sion) Lawrence’s “Fanny and Annie” from the 20th century combine
these two prototypical events in various ways, structurally comparable to
the fairy tale. Richardson’s Pamela wins her suitor and, through marriage
with him, a high (aristocratic) status. Defoe’s Moll finally reaches a
wealthy, respected position in society, together with her favourite husband
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one from the 19th, the other from the 17th century Dickens and Behn. In
several respects, Dickens’s Great Expectations discredits and revises Pam-
ela’s and Moll’s rise by a contrary coupling with the moral frame: The
socially superior status of a gentleman is first devalued and then defini-
tively contaminated morally, namely through Pip’s reprehensible attitude
and behaviour (arrogance, condescension, superficiality) and finally
through the criminal association of the origin of his wealth. The expected
gift of advancement into the aristocracy is abruptly cancelled and later re-
placed with a moderate rise to a middle-class position, earned through
active work and justified by a new moral sense of sympathy and solidarity,
but with the love-fulfilment denied, at least for the time being. The disap-
pointment of these two great expectations ranks higher on the scale of
eventfulness than the final moderate success, which in turn, on the other
hand, is heightened in its value by the ascription of moral maturation and
active personal achievement to Pip’s development. In Behn’s Oroonoko,
the eventful movement, usually expected within the aristocratic romance
convention, of the noble couple Oroonoko and Imoinda across the bor-
der towards fulfilment and superior social status in freedom fails com-
pletely and blatantly (in their enslavement and eventual brutal deaths).
This is brought about mainly by two adverse factors: the ruthless domi-
nance in the colony of mercantile capitalism (which overrules moral con-
cerns, turns the couple into commodities as slaves and eliminates them
when perceived as threats to the political system), the internal weakness of
the aristocratic code of honour and trust (which does not reckon with
deceit and betrayal) and Oroonoko’s aristocratic inability to adjust to his
new European environment (and learn from his experience). The degree
of eventfulness (albeit of a negative direction) is very high on account
both of the radical deviation from the romance code and the violation of
aristocratic values and moral norms.
Hardy’s “On the Western Circuit” presents a structurally different
variation of the failure of the prototypical plot. While for Anna’s (limited)
consciousness the marriage signifies the fulfilment of her love as well as
social advancement, Charles is abruptly disillusioned in both respects,
discovering that he had fallen in love with Edith through Anna as well as
realizing that Anna on account of her simple-mindedness and illiteracy
will mean a social impairment for him. This perverse outcome is brought
about by the interference of two conventional scripts for sex-relations:
Charles’s courting of Anna had started off as a quasi-aristocratic superfi-
cial love affair (the enjoyment of a socially inferior country-girl) but was
then turned into an emotionally and intellectually profound interest in her,
when in their epistolary communication Anna’s simple mind is replaced
with Edith’s more refined, perceptive and stimulating spirit. And Edith’s
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attitude in turn is motivated by her unfulfilled desire for love because she
is trapped in a purely conventional marriage, which induces her to pro-
mote (vicariously) Anna’s prototypical love plot. Direction and degree of
eventfulness differ according to perspective: moderate and positive for
Anna, high and negative for Charles (likewise for Edith), low (because
announced beforehand) and negative for the reader.
Numerous texts deviate more extensively from the prototype by con-
centrating on only one of the two plotlines, either love (Swift, Fowles,
Chaucer, James, Mansfield) or social position (Conrad, Joyce).
Swift’s main plotline in Last Orders is Ray’s and Amy’s love-story,
structured as a realistic version of the romance-script. After a first abortive
attempt at fulfilment in the past as a clandestine affair, then blocked, how-
ever, by moral norms, the present happenings prepare the ground for an
imminent crossing of the boundary in the near future, envisaging even the
establishment of a family complete with children (Vince, Sue). The driving
force of this development is not so much the lovers’ conscious intentions
and plans, as the inadvertently shifting circumstances, especially changes
in their attitudes and allegiances, sanctioned by Jack’s death as a kind of
symbolic sacrifice. Ray’s and Amy’s coming union has to be considered as
highly eventful, not only on account of the many obstacles in the past but
also because the lovers cannot as yet foresee this eventual fulfilment (only
the readers can do so as a result of their superior perspective). The con-
text is the emphasis on the value of life and living fulfilment against the
background of disease, mortality and death. In “Enigma”, Fowles ends his
story of uncovering Fielding’s disappearance as the attempted escape from
literary and social restrictions through death by presenting an alternative
positive way in the intense passionateness of love-fulfilment, which is
therefore highly eventful but also profoundly paradoxical because both are
literary and social nonetheless. Chaucer, in “The Miller’s Tale”, narrates
three differing sex-relationships, all focused on the same woman (Ali-
soun), contrasting the successful consummation of a clandestine purely
sexual love affair (Nicholas) with two failing or unsuccessful relationships:
romantic courtship (Absalon) and conventional marriage (with John),
which because of the lack of passion induces the woman to seek gratifica-
tion elsewhere (comparable to Hardy). However, this consummation, a
one-time event, does not count as a permanent border crossing and is
marred, moreover, by the male lover’s subsequent humiliation by punish-
ment for overreaching himself. These successful completions of love-plots
can be contrasted with two examples of failure. James’s “The Beast in the
Jungle” traces the drawn-out process of the male protagonist (John
Marcher) missing the potential happy love-fulfilment (with May Bartram)
on account of extreme self-centredness. Mansfield’s “At the Bay” contains
Conclusion 207
The individual analyses have indicated the specific ways in which the
eventfulness of changes (or their failure) in the texts is dependent on con-
textual factors, i.e. social and cultural phenomena, more precisely: on cer-
tain social, moral, religious or ideological discourses at the time of writing.
The following general overview will provide a brief, short-hand summary
of the various types of contextual reference.
The most frequent and most basic reference concerns the class struc-
ture of Britain, the strict division between the middle and upper and be-
tween the lower and middle classes, which has become somewhat less
rigid since the 19th century. This social division (especially between the
two upper layers of society) forms the context in one way or another of
eight texts: Behn, Defoe, Richardson, Fielding, Dickens, Hardy, Joyce and
Lawrence. All these novels or stories are focused either on the successful
or the eventually failing attempt to cross the boundary between two
classes, predominantly upwards, but in one case, Lawrence, downwards
(as a provocative reversal of the conventional trend). The actual plot-
development with respect to the eventful change of the social position
(frequently linked to the question of love-fulfilment) or its failure is then
largely determined by the influence of, and correlation with, a psychologi-
cal or ideological frame, the factor of moral, religious or ideological atti-
tudes, on the part of the protagonist and/or other characters. In some
cases, the moral or religious attitude enables and/or sanctions the border
crossing: Pamela’s insistence on chastity in Richardson, Moll’s penitent
Conclusion 209
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